Mercenary War Chronicles

It feels like there are a lot of unnecessary plots concentrated in those dozens of chapters. It's not that you can't read it, but it doesn't feel worthy of the previous chapters. Criticizing this third-level exam by name, everything written in these twenty chapters has been completely deleted without affecting the plot at all.

The Holy Name system is quite interesting, but the protagonist's Holy Name ability feels quite boring and has no special features. For example, summoning demons and treating disabilities in the second paragraph are very interesting. If it were real, I would definitely choose Breeze Production. It is very practical and risk-free, but this is a novel, and there is no linkage between the several Holy Names and they cannot complement each other. Ps: Adding basic attributes has a little linkage

Complaining about experience, the experience required triples for each level, and the experience given by enemies at each higher level is +50. Please calculate how many people are needed to reach level 20.

The more I write these days, the more boring I get, and Goldfinger feels like death. The protagonist feels like he's been sapped and ready to give up.

The system of holy name + blessing is quite new, at least it's the first time I've seen it.

The rhythm is okay, but I discovered it too early

Especially after episode 66, the story was inexplicable. I felt that the plot had no sense of direction. It was very wordy and I didn't know what the protagonist was doing. He had no goal and was just messing around. Write well and don't waste the settings of the Holy Name system

The first few dozen chapters were okay and looked good, but the more I wrote the later, the less interesting it became. It felt boring. To be honest, being in the academy was no different from being a mercenary.

It's okay to write the recent chapters slowly. It's both a wisdom and a saint. The protagonist still hasn't realized that this is a society where the jungle is strong and the strong eats the strong. I don't know what kind of virtue the potion I sell has, and I still regret it after I sell it. It's hypocritical and stupid, and I always like to dwell on the little details, and I don't focus on the main character. It feels like there is no outline and no main line. I write whatever I think of, which makes me a little disappointed.

The protagonist's ability to choose a holy name is very rewarding, and there are so many choices every time. Then pick out a few names that are not strong enough but have serious side effects, or have average abilities.

It feels like sometimes time transitions very quickly, and a year has passed quickly, but the protagonist's upgrade is very slow (when the story timeline jumps, such as 16-18, or the year of returning to youth, it is obvious that you gain experience to upgrade. When the story line is carefully written, you will quickly upgrade one to two levels in a short time. In fact, the experience bar only needs to kill ten or eight intelligent creatures to upgrade, so forget it, it may be relatively slow, so the progress is slow But it is obvious that learning various skills can increase attributes. The protagonist has cognitive failure and learns very quickly (see Herbology at the beginning). Why not learn more various skills to maximize the attribute limit?

Author, come back. It's hard to find a good novel.

I feel that the choice of the holy name is too random, without planning, and does not reflect the maximum power of this golden finger. It is recommended to refer to the combination of innate witchcraft in Wenzhao Gong's Wizard World. When the four witchcraft are combined, the power is a qualitative change. All the protagonist's current abilities are too fragmented, and other powerful masters don't have similar combination skill plans? This kind of directional combination skill planning can be regarded as inheritance

The skills of the protagonist have no linkage at all. Friends who have played the meat pigeon game know that some inconspicuous abilities may improve the entire bd exponentially, far better than those of high rarity. For example, if the protagonist has already obtained two opposing elements, is it possible to obtain two more and go directly to element zero? For another example, if the protagonist has the passive ability to find herbs, can he find skills to refine medicines or solve drug resistance? Can the protagonist get some blood-related skills for the blood elf route he is currently taking? The protagonist is now a mage, why not add some metamagic expertise? Now that there is a hammer and a stick, it is very likely that the protagonist will not be as good as the natives after taking a long time to choose. After all, they may have crazy linkages with a divine choice. The protagonist's skill descriptions are too brief. He seals the evil spirit and obtains some of its abilities and attributes. How to seal this evil spirit? What will happen after being sealed? Will he become like a demon hunter? What is the proportion of partial abilities? None of this was said. Including gigantism, how big can it become? How long does it last? Can it be blessed by magic? In the end, the protagonist was so stupid that he seemed to have made a decision with a slap on the head.

As you level up, you can get a holy name. The strength of the holy name will give it attribute rules, etc. Normally, supermodels' holy names, especially those with rules, will have debuffs. Being able to predict how you will die from the holy name is basically equivalent to dying sooner or later, so I have no objection to the holy name chosen by the author. The strength is just right The problem is that it is easy to upgrade, similar to the level of dnd, but The protagonist is now level 4 to 5. I remember correctly, I only need 3600 experience. The protagonist can kill level 5 trolls. You can kill any troll at the same level. Level 4 has 200 experience points. The level does not increase. There is no active action to kill monsters. It is all passive. It means that the protagonist participates in some events and then fights. There is no plot where the protagonist goes to fight World of Warcraft for experience, and he always kills a few at a time. The main character The horn performance is very good, and he didn't kill many in one battle. Besides, it is all passive development. There is an upper limit for the attributes on the panel. The Holy Name obtained by level up will also increase the upper limit. The skills learned by the protagonist will also obtain corresponding attribute points, such as swordsmanship and archery. The protagonist needs to go from 0 to 1, and the skills will appear on the panel. The next step is to exercise and upgrade to gain points at each level. For one attribute point, one additional attribute point will become two at level 3-4. The protagonist has never taken the initiative to learn any skills. In the beginning, long-range archery was barely learned actively. The remaining skills are not learned without plot advancement. Now the skills are still the same and have not changed. I wonder if you have listed the swords separately, and there are not too many skills that can be learned, right? I follow the majority of those who appeared, saying that shields and assassin skills, not to mention skills related to other weapons, knives, guns, not to mention small categories, there are many major categories. Throwing is very powerful. The only thing that does not count is the choice of Holy Name. Level pressure also means attribute pressure.

I read it in one go and it was quite fluent. At present, it can only be described as a developmental novel, which is not very satisfying. Another point that other book friends also mentioned is that the main line is not clear, and there is no crisis or countdown to cut into the plot. The author can consider whether to mention it in the future to expand the world view. Come on.

The first few dozen chapters are very interesting, but there is no main line or plot in the back, which is too boring, and the Holy Name is very creative, but the Holy Name cannot be coordinated in each section, and the abilities are not interesting enough, and the whole thing is very dull.

It's a pity that the book is still not enjoyable enough, and Golden Finger is a little restrained.

I have written 250 chapters so far, and 200 chapters can be deleted directly without affecting the viewing experience at all 😥 The first volume has the protagonist in the Novice Village, and the second volume directly enters the Magic Academy. It has to add adventures, dungeons, etc. In the middle. It's not that I personally don't like slow-paced novels, I just want to read mindlessly and enjoy them. The main reason is that the author really doesn't know how to tell stories, and the writing is dry, which makes it uncomfortable and disturbing 😭 The background of this book is a typical Western fantasy, with two main routes: the ignorant and fanatical church and the magician who pursues wisdom. According to traditional fantasy novels, the protagonist is most likely to learn magic, fight against the church, or become a god himself The author chose a niche route and made [mercenary] the early transition profession as the core of the novel, but the religious line was not well written, and the magic academy line was not well written either. , And at the same time, he is not separated from the two like an adventurer. In order to catch up with the plot of "Legend of Sword and Wind", the rhythm of the whole book is messed up 😅 As for the collapse of combat power, numerical expansion, and blunt emotional lines, I don't bother to talk about minor issues.

The ultimate wisdom! The protagonist has a cheat to upgrade his kills, but the protagonist hid in the city during the war between the two countries and studied herbal medicine. He said this is more important!

😎 Drawn based on the protagonist's dictation, the red circle roughly represents all the areas the protagonist has currently set foot in, for reference only.

I always feel that the rate of eunuchs written in the Western fantasy (sword and magic) genre is particularly high. I think the ones that catch my eye are interesting. As I continue to read, there are about 7 eunuchs out of 10.

A few people were killed in a city defense battle, and the protagonist was the archer of the city defender! So what the author means is that the protagonist is watching the play the whole time? How many arrows were fired at the beginning and end of such a long battle?

It's rare to find a book that can be read. Is it just such a eunuch?

If you want to read this book, you have to pick your brain first, because basically few chapters are logical! Most of the chapters are mindless!

Overall feeling: Simple yet unique. If it can be updated stably, I think the subsequent results will not be bad.

It's not for nothing that it's not popular. The protagonist has been struggling to kill a few goblins for several years!

This book seems like a eunuch. Is there anyone who can recommend it? I really like it.

Did the author send it? Do any of the author's friends come forward to give their own opinions?