My Doomsday Train

Let's talk about the advantages first. It's been a long, long, long time since I've seen such an authentic apocalyptic novel. Many of the sentences and descriptions are very interesting, giving me the feeling of going back to the ancient times where I started to read apocalyptic novels. (Two times) Only in the early stage. After more than a hundred chapters, it will break away from the category of apocalyptic writing and become a systematic cool writing. The characterization is at a medium level for apocalyptic novels, which is pretty good. Those who are a little older in reading know that in ancient times, the apocalyptic area was really prosperous and talented people emerged in large numbers. The taste of this book was at an above-average level even at that time. It's just a shortcoming. Smoking is definitely not a big deal, and it's said to be so serious without any comments, but the rhythm and logic in many parts of it are really unclear. Of course, if the author could understand it, it wouldn't be as good as it is now. In fact, including train upgrades, there are also some logical problems caused by changing zones. I think these are all caused by the author's failure to control the rhythm of the full text. The hook is too great, there are no restrictions, and other people's writing is too weak, not based on strength, but on hook. (Second Edition) At this pace, I don't even understand what the author is writing. There is no clear tendency. It is more like writing according to the ideal and reasonable process that the author thinks, rather than writing how to make it look good. It is boring to read it in one go, but there is no book to follow. The whole process is to upgrade for the sake of upgrading. It is a bit exciting, but not much. I dig into the ground and dig, and sometimes I pretend to be cool. Now that I have seen the latest chapter, I finally climbed out. I hope to open a new map and cycle process later. And I think the author's grasp of the rhythm is a big problem. You can challenge monsters with dangers at the first and second levels. I don't understand why it has to be developed to the third level before starting to write something (I haven't written anything yet). The setting is always to serve the plot. Of course I haven't watched much yet. I will see the latest progress later. If there are new changes, I will come back here to modify my comments. Now I can't help but come here to complain. It is purely about some of the plots I have seen so far. I feel that the logic and rhythm are a bit poor. For more details, I will go into detail after reading it. Anyway, pinch your nose and take a few sips first. After all, it's really hard to find such a good taste. Even if it's stone, I'll taste it carefully. (Second Editor) It is not recommended that female readers read the book. The main reason is that the environment is indeed not very friendly to women, and readers of the same gender will definitely feel uncomfortable reading it. Although the logic is fine, and there is no need to write a book if it does not contain personal information. However, if this way of writing was written a few years ago, I would definitely recommend it, but now that the issue between men and women is getting more serious, everyone will be more sensitive, so it is best for everyone not to read it. The protagonist looks quite perverted, and does not quite understand the author's style and wonderful little hobbies for the protagonist. They are all classified as private goods. It cannot be said that there is a problem, but it is also a feature of the book. The main reason is that the protagonist does not have enough motivations and causes and consequences when showing these things. He just does it because he wants to do something perverted. In reality, this is no problem, but in the book, there is some suspicion that the author is venting unilaterally.

I've actually wanted to write this post for a long time, but I haven't posted it in the last dozen or so times. I was afraid that writing it would conflict with the content inside, so I put it on hold. But after seeing the latest chapter, it doesn't conflict much with my thoughts, so I'll just write a few words. Many people think that the combat power has collapsed or expanded, but I think it's okay? Where did it break? Just like when trains were rated at level 5 or 6, can you imagine the mass production of equipment with levels of 100 or 200 now? Isn't it natural now? Then let's talk about the civilization level: It seems that the first level civilization is equivalent to fifty attack and defense strength. Level two is equal to one hundred levels of attack and defense. Level three is equal to two hundred levels of attack and defense. Level 4 is compared to level 500. There is a qualitative change at level five, which is likely to be between level one thousand and five thousand. (The article said that at level five, there can be equipment to extend the passage time of attack energy by hundreds of millions of years to reach thousands of levels of energy attack) Level six is ​​between more than 5,000 and up to 10,000. The qualitative change begins again at level seven. From level 10,000 and above to level 50,000 or level 100,000. Level eight increases infinitely from level 50,000 or level 100,000. Until the ninth level of true god-level civilization becomes an omniscient and omnipotent conceptual god. (Although the article has said that level five is considered a god-level civilization, it is very likely that low-level civilizations have not seen a true god-level civilization. However, level five shows many powerful abilities that they cannot understand, and they feel that they are god-level. It is as if ancient people suddenly came to modern times and saw modern high technology. Without letting them know history, they probably felt that they were in heaven. Now the article has also mentioned that having a level three civilization This area is a low-level resource area, and higher civilizations are not interested in it. From this, we can see that level one to level three civilizations are considered low-level civilizations. Levels four to six are considered intermediate civilizations, barely standing on the stage of the universe. Levels seven to nine are truly advanced civilizations, because each level of energy changes, and they may have their own exclusive titles. For example, level seven is an advanced civilization, level eight is called top civilization, and level nine is unknown. If so, it must be considered a god-level civilization. The Almighty series. This is my rough estimate based on reading the current content of this book. Finally, I would like to make a suggestion. I don't know how far away I am from the map. So I personally understand that the location of the map is about 0.1 Light years. , The Milky Way is to the south of Andromeda, and Andromeda is a hundred thousand light-years across. Andromeda is in the north, and the Kasha civilization is in Andromeda, and Cancer is in the south, and the Zerg base camp is in Cancer, and there are others above and below in the east and west Then the twelve constellations are located above the Twelve-Armed Xuan, and the Twelve-Armed Xuan is located a little behind Pangu Universe. This is all my own idea. Otherwise, I would not know where they are fighting!

It's been a long time since I read a novel. I don't know if the Golden Chapter 3 has changed now. The world view is not explained clearly at the beginning, such as the origin of the end of the world, why it is a train, etc. I don't know how it will be improved later. I personally pay more attention to logic when reading novels. I will check it out later.

With this amount of updates, you deserve it

The protagonist likes smoking, and those who don't like it can leave. That's me. It's easy to get together and relax.

I really don't know how the book Mugen Train next door was written, with a disgusting heroine plot that forced readers to eat shit. The protagonist of this book is like one in the end of life, where personal rights and power are paramount, and there is no disgusting, stupid and extreme plot.

After leaving Aqua Blue Star, it became less and less interesting, and I kept writing about time, space, and the universe. This is a novel, not a popular science article or research. After leaving Aquamarine Star, we have been studying various hydrology, can't we have some plot? I don't want to see it anymore.

Is it a stallion? I don't read stallion articles.

Ah ah ah ah ah, I am so excited, it turns out that I won the prize, thank you, thank you sister-in-law, but it seems that someone pretended to be me to receive the award, I don't know if it was a joke 😥😥

I feel a little speechless when I see this. After arriving in the colorful area, there are a lot of cool points to write about, but I feel like I skipped them all. The writing from the white area to the colorful area is very good and very beautiful, but after the colorful area it is not fun at all, and many things are lost. Neon City disappeared after revealing its identity? What about regional tours? Old friends don't get together anymore? They didn't even notify Blue Star Unification, so everyone just became data people? Everyone in the car is missing. Airman? Did Neon City just disappear without writing about it? There's no news about Erdan either? The deputy commander's confidant, Chu Chu, all disappeared? It feels like there is only the protagonist and AI, and everyone else is dead. There is really no sense of immersion at all. I really don't know what you are writing. I am not here to see you post piles of data. It feels like it is unfinished. Alas, I guess it can't be changed around chapter 380 now. I am obsessed with reading your book all night long. Now that I see this, I have already imagined that the next step will be either an upgrade or an upgrade. All my friends and residents will be pure data. It's boring. It was really hard for me to write it. I was reading it so well that I suddenly couldn't read it anymore. I thought this book was going to be a masterpiece...

I got into the book because of the book "Ci Entu Xiu Xian", but the doomsday series caught my eye. The early stages of the doomsday series are often very good. I just hope that this worldview will have a beginning and an end. Let's start high and go high.

It was originally written very well. If the pace is slower, development and exploration are slow, it would be very interesting! As a result, a five-year countdown suddenly came! The novice village has not yet been released, but they are required to escape from this galaxy within five years, and they are desperately pushing the protagonist to develop. This is another protagonist who is like being chased and bitten by a dog, and dare not stop even a step. I feel that this kind of protagonist is so tiring!

Wow, congratulations on joining Sanjiang. Isn't it time for Brother Xin to update 😁

It's better to call the police, brother, it's so bad that I can't even understand my thoughts.

Coming from the previous book, I would like to ask if the author has any psychological habit of always sending beautiful women to passers-by? 😰

I have read all of Rabbit's books, but this one has been the one I have been following for the longest time. The problem that Rabbit has always had is that the writing ratio is not strong enough, and it becomes more and more broken towards the end. The clues can already be seen now. For example, there was a setting where trains were the mainstream in this area before, but now the setting has completely changed. It can be seen that the author's writing power cannot be controlled. Including the planet inside the carriage. I rarely describe it anymore because I simply can't control it. I hope the author can break through himself. . . . However, I have read so many books written by this author. There is progress, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on. . .

Changing the map and pulling it up is a common problem among Qidian authors. The more I read, the more boring I become.

Collect ideas for various vehicle accessories. The format is as follows. Vehicle name: xx, vehicle level: xx, vehicle effect: xx. It would be even better if you can also think of the upgraded "supermodel effect".

Apart from this one, are there any other good apocalyptic novels, both completed and serialized? Thank you.

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How can a good book not have idioms and solitaire! Let me throw some light on things: Dian Shu Feng Chi 🚄

Passengers cannot harm the conductor. Even if the train order is the embodiment of the chain of thought of the divine right of kings, the train order is the embodiment of the king's power...

I feel like the author is very perfunctory at the end of each book.

6 Wow, Chapter 27 said that I would give incense to Master Kun, but it didn't happen until the finale, Chapter 390

Author Your book is referenced, in Tomato

Is it fatalism again in the end? Is the protagonist actually the reincarnation of a certain boss? The one who escaped in the past was called the Stellar, and it just so happened that the protagonist's name was also the Stellar. After writing and writing, it turns out that it is not the history of the rise of the little guy in the end of the world, but the history of the big boss's resumption? 😥

So fast, the end of each book reminds me that a long, long time has passed and I am still in the same place

This book is actually in the library with a 3-day free coupon

I didn't spend money to read books before. Why is it so annoying to keep up with updates? I can't stand reading your book. After all, you should update quickly.

The promised new book will be released on the 20th!