This Is What a Fairy Should Be Like

Literary youth and pretentious, the creativity and content are very good, but it is easy to disgust me in unintentional places, so I will keep it for now.

Let me tell you my thoughts. The first author I read was Lan Ke Qi Yuan. This book is not very fairy-like. However, in this new book, the style of the first fifty chapters is as fairy-like as Lan Ke Qi Yuan. However, in the few chapters before it is released, the style of the book changes, from fairy to knight. Especially the plot of leading four men to eliminate demons. I feel that it is really unnecessary. The plot change is a bit abrupt. Most of the books written by the author are aimed at the fairy spirit. As a result, you turn from a fairy into a knight. Naturally, the data is not good. I don't know what to do with the later chapters, so I ordered a few chapters that are on the shelf. I feel that they are too different from Lan Keqi.

It's the Year of the Snake in a blink of an eye. Mr. Ji must have improved his cultivation again

When writing about stars, the author's state was obviously in trouble, and the rhythm of the dozens of chapters that came out after taking a break was obviously re-stabilized. If Tao Yuanming's plot to break the plan at the beginning is rated as 10 points, and the star is rated as 3 points, then the subsequent plot can be rated as fluctuating between 6-8 points. The rhythm has obviously been grasped, but the author still has insufficient experience in writing official articles and has not grasped the upper limit of the power of the state machine. But it is already very good. The modern plot at this time can be ranked as the second small climax after the beginning. The climax of the modern plot must be because the author mentioned all living beings. The ancient plots have been boring since martial arts. In fact, it is because there is too little mention of immortality or no attention to the common people. In other words, the immortality is formulaic. In fact, if you read too much, you can think of everything by touching your toes, and it does not give everyone anything new. If too little is said about the ancient people, it will not be as beautiful as modern times.

May I ask what's wrong? Why don't you write anymore? It's been two months since I stopped updating. Has anything big happened at home?

I didn't even read the back part, so I read the first part. The laborious writing style really looked very artistic when describing humanistic deeds in ancient times, but once it entered the modern society, it looked very strange. In modern society, ancient grammar and vocabulary are still used, but they are not as practical as vernacular. It feels like they are just pretending to be immortal. Moreover, the people in the Hidden Immortal Valley are themselves modern people. Since the second disciple already knows the truth, why should they continue to express themselves in the ancient way of speaking? I don't know if the trouble can't be corrected or if it is intentional. The ancient Jin Dynasty seemed fine, but after returning to modern society, since we need to contact the outside world, why can't we express it in a more vernacular way?

Not bad, not bad. It can be seen that it has been conceived for a long time. I look forward to the follow-up development and want to catch up on updates, but there are really too few. I can only put it on the bookshelf and wait for a year or two.

This is the most innovative novel about cultivating immortality that I have read in recent years, and the writing is also very good 👍

Nourishing the soul, special rhythm, there is also a Tao in novels.

I can't tell the difference now after reading it, it really affects the sense of reading! It is recommended that the author publish a post on realm division!

I finally understand that the author doesn't want to follow the route of Lan Ke, but the new ideas he comes up with are not as good as the old ones. He is eager to surpass the past, but it is counterproductive. I suggest the author take a good rest for a while, come up with a very good idea before starting the book, and improve the outline so that he will not write step by step and then collapse. I believe in your writing, it is an idea, and I really like your feeling of downplaying the realm.

When I saw the part about recruiting people into the valley, I felt that they were accepted too casually. The protagonist and the four orphans wanted favors but no affection. It didn't matter if they wanted relationships. It didn't matter if they wanted help. I didn't observe their moral character. It didn't say whether they had talents or talents. I didn't know about the orphans' family. It was really pitiful. Moreover, the protagonist also helped her husband go home and have a dream reunion. If it was properly arranged, I think it would be okay, but directly entering the valley was a bit abrupt. After all, according to the previous article, entering the valley is considered a destined person and has the opportunity to cultivate immortality.

There is a widow with three children. The protagonist sees them as pitiful and refuses to give them money or land. Hey, he is directly sent to the Paradise of Cave to provide food, food, food, and cultivation of immortality for the rest of his life. I am confused. There are frozen bones on the road, and there are so many beggars and poor people who have not been rescued by you. Why do you have a soft spot for this family?

The beginning is amazing, but later the plot can even be said to be simple, just beating a few little monsters. I originally thought that it would constantly change time and space, upgrade the power system, and witness celebrities who do not understand the times. How could I know that it would be so bland, just two time and space going back and forth, and the plot is very simple and repetitive, which is a pity.

I guess the beginning will be absolutely perfect, the middle stage will be overturned, and the late stage will be hydrological.

A very imaginative but weird book. There are obviously many different routes that can be written for this kind of opening, such as group travel, cross-travel, parallel time and space, paradise, God's perspective, spiritual recovery, and bad luck. But in the end, I didn't choose any of them, but chose a bad road - classical cultivation of immortality. After more than fifty chapters, I discovered that the book was not as I imagined, but that after the protagonist embarked on the path of slaying demons alone with a peach wood sword, he could no longer follow him.

Let me provide the author with an idea. It seems to me that you just want to surpass Lan Keqi Yuan too much, and you also want to use different ideas and different themes to innovate. In my opinion, there is no need to do this. Look away, he is a Yakuza style master who has mastered one theme. Although the books are all in the same style, the level of his books has been maintained. , I suggest you put aside those so-called innovations and study a traditional fairy novel with fairy spirit. It is based on Lan Ke and can incorporate other new elements, but it cannot lose its priority. This novel is about the unfamiliar theme of time and space travel. If you have thoroughly understood the theme of Xian Qi Liu, I believe that the next one will not be inferior to Lan Ke

Damn it, it was really attractive at first, and then I subscribed to 150 chapters, but the more I read, the more wrong it became. It hasn't been updated for half a month, and I was hesitating whether to read the latest chapter, but when I came to review the book, my heart dropped instantly.

It was a little too abrupt to see the protagonist taking the widow from the village back to the Hidden Fairy Valley. Why bring it back to Hidden Immortal Valley? Because he is miserable. Ah this. . . It seems that in the future, cultivating immortals does not need to depend on talent or character, as long as they are miserable enough. It's a bit like Xing Ye's "Tang Bohu points out Qiuxiang", who is more miserable. This is different from winning a music competition not because he sang well, but because he was worse. If the author made the widow look like Meng Jiangnu, it would definitely make sense to bring her back to the Hidden Immortal Valley.

Celebrities are so miserable. They were tricked into ancient times and went to brothels to live out their daily lives and live out their daily lives. This may be a normal thing for celebrities. Their money was stolen, their calves were broken, and they were thrown in jail for dozens of days. When I turn around, I meet the immortal who is above me and plays with the fate of others, and I have to be pua to fulfill my so-called promise. If he didn't hate Zhuang Lin, it would be unreasonable. If he did this, it would be abnormal if he didn't have a psychological shadow.

Driving high and going low, for me, is even like falling off a cliff.

Amazing at the beginning, but mediocre later on

That's what the novice immortals are like In ancient times, it was said that there were fellow practitioners of immortality, but all the real ones fell and they didn't dare to make a big show of it. In the modern Jedi Tiantong, the only real person, if you want to reopen the world, you still need to hide. If you say his personality is like a dog's, it's okay, but he also has a clear mind and doesn't care about being exposed. Show up directly in the general leader's office, negotiate calmly, and let him feel your approachability and sincerity. He will definitely be willing to promote your work and support you financially and materially.

When I read this ancient novel, I didn't quite feel that the plots in this novel describing modern society were childish and ridiculous. Why did the driver say nothing about auctioning a piece of jewelry for NT$20 million, which made the people on the board of directors so scared that they hid under the table? It was like a junior high school student, and it immediately exposed the author's inexperience in the world.

The main line of this book is that the typical protagonist promotes the recovery of spiritual energy I hate this kind of spiritual energy recovery flow, because from an objective point of view, spiritual energy recovery can only intensify the polarization of wealth. The disadvantaged people can no longer be regarded as human beings but can only be ants, which will generally aggravate the suffering of the people at the bottom. Let me say that even if there was spiritual energy in the world before, now that the spiritual energy has dissipated, it will be conducive to the development of the world. The spiritual recovery article is like restoring the dynasty in modern society and turning back the clock on history. The dazzling aspect of this book lies in innovation, but it is limited to the period when it is just beginning in the valley. After leaving the valley, it is all the same old routines, the same old routines among the same old ones, the decline of heaven, evil Buddhas, and the classic cultivation of immortality. And the protagonist of this book can be said to have a green light all the way, without any setbacks or difficulties. The summary can be read as a mindless and refreshing article.

From Lan Ke to this book, I will read everything written by the author. After all, Lan Ke is very amazing and unique, and I hope the author can continue this unique style As a result, one book is not as good as the other so far. The advantages of Lan Ke are getting fewer and fewer, the shortcomings are getting bigger, and the greasiness is getting heavier In my opinion, the advantages of Lan Ke are the rich and vivid portrayal of the supporting characters, the cheerful but not excessive high style of the protagonist, and the unique elaboration of the cultivation of immortality and heart. The following books, including the current one, are all fascinating in the early stages... Once you enter the practice, the stage is a mess, God is chasing after you, you are broke in the first chapter, and you are the best in the world in the next chapter. Then the mentality of the protagonist also expands rapidly and becomes old-fashioned. He stands on the moral high ground and teaches this and that test. He is like a grassroots under a big leader, and turns into a fantasy drama for middle-aged elementary school students who are extremely greasy. It's a very lazy way of writing. The plot design and character creation are all put aside. The main theme is just one-pretending to be x! Spare no effort to pretend to be x! Go all out to pretend x! Pretending to be x without thinking about logic! Even if you lose your wits, you still have to pretend! The fruits, vegetables, cats and dogs, clothes and cloth around the protagonist are all good and sacred. When the princes, nobles, gods and heroes see it, they will mistakenly enter the heavenly home. They are frightened, cautious and overjoyed... You can easily find hundreds of these cheap x short skits on Douyin. It's really too greasy, and I'm really tired of it... Because of Lan Ke's high expectations, I don't know how many more chapters I can stick to.

Well, I've read Chapter 301 so far, but I can't stand it anymore. How can I put it this way? I feel like I can't understand this book. It's really far worse than Lan Ke. First of all, there's no fairy flavor at all. Secondly, this book feels like something else. It's pretentious but not pretentious, and there's no fairy tale at all. When I wrote about the Immortal's Carefree, the plot was rather slow and scattered, and the characters had few characters and their personalities could not stand up. I kept thinking that no one else could write it for me. No wonder there were so few comments in the book. Most importantly, I felt that I might have started writing this book without an outline at all. And it is a bit interesting to span ancient and modern times. I thought it was going to different ancient times, but in the end, I created a Jin Dynasty. If it is because of something special about the Jin Dynasty, it is also an interesting setting to specifically cross over to the Jin Dynasty. However, from the description in the book, the specialness of the Jin Dynasty cannot be seen at all; The book is terrible and affects the artistic conception of the whole text. The first dozen chapters are quite interesting and very attractive. What is written in the back, I really doubt whether it was written by AI; This book has so many shortcomings that after reading more than 300 chapters, I didn't even remember the pig's feet 😥😥 To sum up, I can only read it as an ordinary white article, and it cannot be compared with Lanke.

The biggest problem with Karen Shen's plot is that it is a bit artificial. Because he has some qualifications, and because I want to test him, I got him to the ancient times. Once he reaches the ancient times, there are all kinds of setbacks. It can be tested, but the protagonist should only play a guiding role in it. You can write about him encountering some things in modern times, realizing some truths, and finally joining the protagonist's sect. At the same time, the way of returning to ancient times can be written in a more natural and unintentional way. It can be like Zhuang Zhou's dream of a butterfly, or some adventures (such as Lan Ke's chess match). Shen Karen's encounters in ancient times should also be written with more pen and ink. There should be not only setbacks, but also successes. If the author wants to add a group portrait style to it, he must give more ink to each character he wants to create.

The world setting of this book is very good. There are many modern and ancient worlds that reopen the world. The design is clever and refreshing. It's a pity that the character creation is very poor. It seems that the author can't describe characters at all. The protagonist and heroine are almost exactly the same as Roland Curry. It's like they only changed their names and even the disgusting ambiguous relationship is exactly the same. The man is a boring pretense, the woman is a tacky nympho. And like Lan Ke, the biggest shortcoming is that the protagonist is born to be the best in the world, and will not have any setbacks or compromises, so he basically has no other image other than showing off. There is no real leveling up of fighting monsters, and there are no clues. Is this written for the most brainless losers? A time traveler, the reader has no sense of involvement at all, only the author's own obscenity. The reader doesn't even bother to write a review of the book. If it doesn't end well, why wait?

I Became an Immortal in the Tang Dynasty. Is this book a trumpet created by the author?