After Waking Up

A pretty good Western fantasy novel. The author's previous work, Lanke Qiyuan, showed a unique style, especially the sense of graphics and immersion. I personally feel that it is the top one from the starting point. When it comes to this book, it is difficult to avoid the Western-style fantasy that is the starting point: Lord of Mysteries. Although this book and Lord of Mysteries are somewhat similar in subject matter, the actual reading experience is very different. In terms of background environment, Mystery is more like a combination of the Renaissance and the Age of Discovery, while this book is more like the United States during World War I. From a plot point of view, the overall plot of Mystery is relatively depressing. It is full of mysterious and weird atmosphere in the early stage, and Amon crushes it throughout the later stage. It can be said that readers can feel the pressure on the protagonist at any time. Although the atmosphere of the book so far is also very weird, the protagonist gives readers a sense of detachment and is not too depressing. The differences are quite interesting to read. The author Zhen Fei Shi is my second favorite author at Qidian. I also have great expectations for this book to see if it can surpass Lan Ke Qi Yuan's achievements in the field of Western fantasy.

When I first started reading this book, I felt that the writing was quite interesting. When the main plot gradually became clear before it was released, I had a feeling that the book was about to collapse 😅. The so-called awakening actually meant that the author wanted to write about the awakening of ideology. This subject matter is really difficult to control. After reading many works, I have never seen a book that writes brilliantly about ideological awakening. It is either mediocre, 404, or contains illicit goods. At that time, I mentioned the problem of this subject matter in the chapter. On the eve of the book's release, it felt like a crazy rush to catch up on the plot. A different-world version of Marx appeared inexplicably. The protagonist did not really empathize with the bottom of society (I mean there was too little plot foreshadowing, and there was no sense of experiencing the world) but wanted to reform the ideology according to the thinking inertia of the previous life; The Captain and Old Neil in Mystery gave a lot of foreshadowing before writing Nina to death, and the same goes for writing Nina to death in Steel. It was a pity that the shock and rationality of death in the first episode were not written out.        ，，，，

I hope, I don't want eunuchs, I don't want eunuchs, how can I put it, my opinion is that the advantage is that the world view and background settings are quite interesting, but the specific core ideas are a bit rough, too straightforward, which seems embarrassing, a bit cliché, and it is particularly awkward to watch, so awkward that I can't bear to watch it directly. The disadvantage is that the plot is a little incoherent, the plot development, and the increase in combat power are inexplicable, and it is unclear. It is not as natural as the previous book, but to be honest, the background The design is really good, and the general direction of the plot also feels interesting, but there is a sense of tearing in the specific plot. I watch it intermittently. I don't know which one is the real setting. It feels the same after a while. I really hope I don't want eunuchs. Even if I want to try the eunuch setting, I think it is very interesting. Oh, by the way, there are also emotional scenes. Don't write them awkwardly, and don't be so vulgar. Although the results are not good, you can't sell them. If you want a harem, just be a queen. Palace, if there is a heroine, there will be a heroine. If there is not, there will be no heroine. The design should be rational from the beginning. Don't do it the same way. Readers don't know which one it is. If you see the protagonist dying alone in the end, it will be really disturbing. (Personal opinion) Kudos to you, if this book continues to be so bad, there may be no desire to read the next book.] [It seems that what I said is somewhat inconsistent, but in fact, the previous statement is based on the perspective of reading this book. After all, no one wants to read a story without beginning and end, but the latter is based on the perspective of reading a book written by this author. I just don't want to see the author who really has something in his belly disappear and withdraw from the Internet]

I've read Chapter 175, so I'll keep it for now. Personally, I feel it's worse than the previous book. A few thoughts. First, the ability system is well constructed at the beginning, but in order to highlight the protagonist, he constantly breaks the author's self-constructed system. This is fine, but the subsequent system is ambiguous. It seems that it can be used everywhere, but only the protagonist can do it but the supporting role cannot. And in the subsequent description, it really feels like the system is chaotic. Second, it involves political thought. I'm not saying this is bad, but the structure of the story outline derived from it is a bit far-fetched. This is a mysterious world in itself. Can the development trajectory be the same? At the same time, the resonance generated by this is too overwhelming, a bit like hypnosis but not quite, and it really cannot be commented simply. Third, regarding clones, this is a BUG that exists in many novels now, but it is a real BUG, ​​breaking the balance. At best, it means a new development of the story line, but at worst, it means that a person's time and space latitude increases. If it is well controlled, it will increase the story. If it is not controlled well, it can be exaggerated to say that the characters in the entire novel can become clones. Thinking of this for the time being, I cannot deny that the author's writing skills are still good. He grasped the main character's manifestation moments very well. It is not embarrassing or overdone, and it has a natural feeling. Finally, I wish the author better and better as he writes.

Although the history of Dawn in "Indigenous" is fictional, the sages who awakened the masses and the guardian knights who volunteered to become the torch did exist. "After Awakening" will lead us into that period of history. Faced with change, darkness, and the maelstrom eroding the world, the knight who lit the torch did not hesitate to transform into a devil, but also to protect mankind, fight against evil, and expel evil gods. This is not something that can be accomplished by one person. I look forward to the day when Mulan's followers will form a knighthood and be able to help. We are also looking forward to the day when darkness can be cut off as long as we don't look at it and gradually forget it, and all magic will become a legend... As the Sage of Dawn said, "When people gradually forget us, the darkness will no longer appear." Looking forward to a better tomorrow after waking up.

It's too urgent. The various transitions are inappropriate when the social structure is not clear. The new characters seem to have nothing to do with the previous chapters (except for those who are always around). The overall coherence is really not very good. I hope it will take a lot of trouble to insist on continuous updates and improve the structure (after all, it will be uncomfortable for readers to read without continuous updates, and the author will also feel uncomfortable)

Damn it, it's resurrected! ! ! I thought you were staring at Lanke every day, and it was getting cold here.

Obviously so many people like to read your pretentious writing. I have to change my style. Reading Western fantasy is really hard on my brain. Hurry up and start a new book. Ancient style fairy tale is suitable for you.

The monthly manuscript fee for this book is more than 3,000. I advise the author to finish it as soon as possible and start a new book on Xianxia. Wouldn't it be great to earn 300,000 per month?

I came back to see if it was the eunuch. I made a few comments in the book review and someone came over. Haha, can a good book be written in this kind of atmosphere? (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ

I'm very disappointed. If you don't get good grades, just cut it off decisively instead of leaving readers like me who are looking forward to this book like this. This is very irresponsible.

No pitfalls, no pitfalls, no pitfalls! Say important things three times. I can't even say when the daily updates will be resumed. The book will definitely be finished, but it may be a little slower. Now that I'm angry again, I'll give it a try.

Notice: The new book is expected to be released this month. It's Xianxia. This book probably won't be updated for a while. Maybe after a few years, Trouble will come back and finish Awakening. That's it.

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I also read it from Lanke. In fact, I quite like the overall writing style of this book, but when the revolution started later, I felt very disconnected. Because the label "revolution" feels a bit strange to the whole book, do you want ordinary people and extraordinary people to talk about fairness and equality? Is this possible? People are inherently complex, not to mention such a huge gap. In the end, it just transfers power and oppression. There are also students that the protagonist has worked so hard to cultivate. Many of them are basically nobles. Do you want these students to betray their own families and overthrow their own class with you? Or should you wait until the revolution is over and their families are destroyed before you recruit them to save the world? I read it in one sitting, but it was very contradictory. If you stop midway, it will probably be difficult to pick it up again.

Let's make some bubbles first, I haven't finished painting yet.

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Brothers, how do you think I should hit him

No one has a definite answer to how a person's life should be lived. Years ago, you said that if you let me wait for a while, you would be stronger than me. Until now, you haven't come back yet. Evan, I will never agree with this chaotic era. I will crush it and do my best. Just as your faith is not your faith itself, I would rather you not be so pious. It was a long time ago. We were sitting in the Digao Cathedral, in a seat in front of the Holy Light Statue. I fell asleep at that time. The church at that time was reassuring. Surrounding it are church believers praying to the holy light statue. You told me happily that you would go to the Holy Mountain and become more powerful than me. At that time, I was not much better than you. The letter arrived on the morning of my oath. A thin piece of paper tore into pieces the tranquility I had created for myself. The first time I cried for you became the last time. The ruthless soil has turned your blood into dust. After all, you were just a boy at the time. Unable to wake up, people tend to think that their emotions in the past were much stronger than they are now, and their minds are sharper than they are now. If so, forget about it; and if you can forget about it, then your self-righteousness may not be true. Maybe I am no longer normal. I often cannot distinguish between the past, present and fantasy. I repeat my original name over and over again to remind myself not to forget all the things I could do as I pleased in the past and how I looked in the eyes of others. I have also changed, but this is also an irreplaceable life. From the day you died on the Holy Mountain, I have been alone. There may be people traveling with me, but I am still alone and the road ahead is long. This wrong era is getting worse and worse. I don't know what the future holds, but I cannot remain indifferent. That's pain. Desire is at the heart of the mystery, and what doesn't kill me only makes me stronger. Miss you, Alvin. If possible, I would rather cut off two-thirds of my life to exchange for a fraction of your life. Please forgive me, but it's fine. This is something worth celebrating. I'm still normal, right. You are simple, you know the filth but never join in it. From the moment I stepped into this class, I have been the enemy of the world I expected. I don't regret it, I just pity that this world without innocence has become a hell for mankind. I like to buy newspapers on the street every day. The little newsboy I used to buy newspapers from a few days ago disappeared. I asked a new-faced little newsboy and found out that he was indeed dead. He died of a sudden illness and pain at night. The body was bought by a second-hand dealer. The new guy was his younger brother. He sold it himself. There was a girl at home. As for his parents, I don't know where they died. He said numbly, and I found that I was also numb. When I looked up, I saw people walking around in a hurry, nothing serious. Evan, what's wrong with you? I always try my best to call you. A few days ago, a revolutionary seed I trained died. His name was Moore. You don't know him. He died of a not uncommon disease - decapitation. The high platform on Digao was really high, like a mountain. A person's neck got stuck on the instrument of torture. With a bang, the head rolled down the mountain, and the splattered blood was like a dark red blanket. I often feel weak and have no one to express my thoughts. Only I can still think and feel this evil extraordinary class. Unfortunately, the memory of the past is too long ago. Sometimes I question myself. One day I will know nothing about it. I hope you can take me away. I wrote this text in my hometown, just for this little thing, I decided to blow up the holy mountain sooner or later. But I was in a good mood after leaving the chaotic whirlpool and the entanglement of power and desire. Many people see me as a savage beast or a madman because they are aware of my origins, but I am still a normal person, right, Alvin.

Missing Persons responded to me today

Climb here and make an update.

I don't believe it🤔

As shown in the picture, after being out of contact for three days, I finally remembered to reply to me

Cheating on eating and drinking

Pointing and pointing

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A battle of wits and courage

Shock!

This book is actually quite good, but it's a pity

Author, can you pick up this book again? I really want to see red flags planted all over Europe. I really want to see the working class movement of workers. The rise of the socialist movement in Europe