The Weak and Friendly Me

The writing in the early stages was good and novel, but the writing got worse and worse later on, and it was like a flood starting from the 200th chapter. Especially the vending machine plot is simply unbearable. Since there are so many technology companies, it should be a first-tier city. Taking Chengdu as an example, it covers an area of ​​14,000 square kilometers and has a permanent population of 20 million. The protagonist built a program that could retrieve expired food from thousands of unmaintained vending machines, and wrote dozens of chapters in a row! Are the expired snacks in these thousands of vending machines enough to feed 20 million people for many years? In order to cater to this plot, a few programmers/college students with skills and skills were specially written to be so miserable that they can't even afford to eat and can only rely on the protagonist's program to eat expired garbage... Is this China? Can you starve to death if you have arms and legs but are not paralyzed? What's even more outrageous is that these gods ate two packs of expired potato chips and were so moved that they jumped and screamed everywhere, frantically trying to increase their sense of presence and word count without brainstorming. Others don't seem to have to do anything. They just stare at the protagonist's trivial things 24 hours a day and are constantly moved. One moment, one is a boss and the other is a senior executive, but in the end, they are all flattering, all to set off the protagonist's incredible background, which does not help the plot at all, and has no personality charm at all. The incident in the parallel world was reported, and the senior leaders personally ran to the protagonist... Watching the protagonist solve the questions live, my God, the protagonist actually had to go online to do the questions. Of course, such a big thing had to be written in five or six chapters. Being invaded by a parallel world, in this case, instead of directly contacting the government and dispatching a few heavy-armed synthetic brigades to block the door, they just sit there and answer questions and play games. Even if they have to engage in personal heroism, aren't those alien lickers willing to trade technology or even fleets for skills? What can they do? ! Earlier, I realized that I was paralyzed in a parallel world and was still clamoring to work on the other side. However, when I looked back, I felt no sense of crisis at all and my writing was just like playing house. The author seems to have a worldview where food automatically refreshes from the supermarket, and the top government, military and police officers drink tea in the office every day and find nothing to do.

The more I read this book, the more uncomfortable I became. The protagonist has personality problems. He has no initiative or sense of responsibility. He will only act when something happens to him. When Chen Yanxing came to find him, I thought there would be teammates who could help. Unexpectedly, he was still hiding his identity. Why, the protagonist's teammates could only shout "Protagonist" "Awesome" and can't help? There is also the so-called "Brother Ze". Where is the genius of this man? The protagonist lusts after this woman as soon as he meets her. Just like a diaosi, as the company's financial backer and technical support, he has no posture at all. "Pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger", why are you going to slap someone in the face? Why are you pretending to be a pig if you don't slap in the face? Are you really a pig?

The pursuit of the third volume was very tiring... The plot of the first volume and the second volume transitioned like this. Just as a big world scroll was about to unfold, there was a click and it was gone. The big world map and the world view were all gone. The third volume starts again. It's not impossible, but there are clear college students, cross-dressing, cross-dressing, deus ex machina... The feeling from the second to the third volume is just like you thought Li Xiaoyao met on Fairy Island Zhao Ling'er started the rest of the game plot, but in the end he traveled to Yangcun and started running and playing happily on the prairie, just like watching the hunting ground and you thought the big map was about to expand, and then it ended 😅 Oh😮‍💨

The core is quite good, and the writing style is much better than Xiaobai's. However, the first few chapters are a bit montage, as unclear as the protagonist's dream, and the resistance is very high. Nowadays, people are accustomed to a fast pace. In fact, the first three golden chapters should be rewritten to make the deconstruction clearer. It will be much more readable and friendly to newcomers. The overall structure is a bit scattered, and it is short and weak, but the story and core are very good and innovative, and it is worth recommending.

It's getting boring, no wonder it's limited to free of charge

I am a brand new reader, I have never heard of any of the author's books before. When I clicked on it at first, I just thought the title of the article was interesting. Later, I was attracted by the first incident, Professor Soybean, and then I kept reading. Actually, I didn't take it seriously when I first watched it, but the small but funny plots accumulated and gradually made me addicted. I turned the pages of rubbish novels at will, but in this book I wanted to lick every word, turn over and over again and chew every sentence. I like Shushu, his cleverness, and the little jokes that pop up from time to time, but my favorite is probably the protagonist Tang Yiping himself. He is like a fluffy quilt that has been sunburned, warm, soft, and full of vitality, with a human touch that I have lost. Tang Yiping's confession to Uncle Liu and his pity for Mr. Du made me feel the brilliant inner world of a young man who was determined and full of passion. The appearance of FOEW is a common refreshing point, but it still made me cry and laugh. I hope there is such a program that can help people in reality. Having been turned into a selfish villain by society, I still want to get close to that pure light source. The author's writing is unpretentious and just right. This kind of slightly blank sentences can bring people the most intense thinking. I don't know what the future will be like, but now, I hope this book will get better and better, and I also regret why this book did not have more than a thousand chapters when I discovered it. Finally, this is just my idea. At least for now, I want the author to know that there is a poisonous man with a dark heart who is moved by the sincere words and wants to leave some traces

It looks good, I love watching it, I can't get enough of it, I can't get enough of it! I found that in the vast sea of ​​online articles, there are very few novels that actively help myself and others. Not only fun, but happy. The story has a brisk and smooth rhythm, the characters are vividly drawn, and the novel's idea of ​​making people feel happy is really great.

I read Possessed by the Lazy God a long time ago, Now I read this book, and it smells like it, as expected, it is really the author of Possessed by the Lazy God! The new book is very nice!

I accidentally discovered it outside the site, so I came over and tipped 100

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Gold is found in the sand. The family is very interesting. It's a very interesting view of the world. It's worth reading. It's on my bookshelf.

Fully ordered. But I wanted to give up. The author wrote it himself. So high that I worry about the author's mental state. There were so many places where my feet touched the floor. The plot moves slowly. Serious logic flaw. After more than 200 chapters, I wrote a piece of broken software and got dozens of chapters. How much food and drink can be put in a vending machine? No one is restocking. Is it enough to feed how many people? A huge amount of writing was wasted on a completely unimportant plot. Worse than water. What a waste of such a good idea. Then the author almost wrote everyone as mentally ill. Like wisdom like a giant baby. If you watch too much, I will feel that I am also a wise giant baby

I really can't stand it anymore. The story is so disconnected. The writing from the late second volume to the third volume is terrible. It's refreshing to see a rich world background with various races and skills. The setting is so good that I just stopped writing it. I keep writing code and dressing up for fun. The protagonist does big things but still feels like he is a little transparent and keeps leveling up. But the fights are inexplicably won by the setting. There is a lot of nonsense in the middle, which is super stupid. The main character's inner thoughts are always feeling that his virtue is not worthy of his role, and the people around him keep bragging about it. The writing is super embarrassing.

The disadvantage is that it is a trick to sell things and the program saves everything. The main reason is that the logic is not very strong.

The protagonist can be naive, but not mentally retarded. It was just that he didn't realize the dangers of the villain, but now he still makes people speechless every time he thinks about it. If Wen Rui dies, the protagonist will have to fight alone. If he doesn't die, it's all because of the author.

What to say. Book all in advance. Later, I was overwhelmed by how to write code every day. I gave up. When I saw the limited exemption, I thought about picking it up and taking a look? Still riding a horse and writing. Why. Never mind. I won't watch it even if it's free.

The first two volumes are very exciting, the curtain rises gradually, until the climax of the decisive battle, the setting is also very bright! Recommended viewing The third volume has started to be finished, and it has inexplicably turned into a modern academic masterpiece. The stitching is inexplicable, the turning point is very abrupt, the subject world view has been cut in half, it is no wonder that the fans in the circle are shouting that it is finished Summary: The writing power cannot support the ambition, and now it is just hydrology for the sake of hydrology. The first two volumes are worth watching, but that's about it. The greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment, which makes people even more angry and regretful

I didn't feel that the protagonist was weak, I just felt that the protagonist was mentally retarded.

I came to see the story, to see how the protagonist re-understands the world as a weakling, not to see the protagonist inexplicably use programming to pretend to be a B-life. The world in the story is very strange. In the early stages of the story, the protagonist fights against another mirror world in the city where he is an intern. The scope of the protagonist's activities in these two worlds is limited to the city. After the successful "save", the protagonist goes to other cities, which have not experienced similar invasions at all... Actually, should I store my mind first when reading this book?

Ever since the special police killed the villain on the spot, I felt something was wrong. After reading the latest chapter of Wen Rui's Death, I came back to my senses. Before this, the book was all in a nonsensical comedy style, and the villains were given funny names like "Ah You Are", which gave people the impression of a light-hearted comedy. Looking at the results, it turns out that the villain actually seeks money and kills, and is full of blood debts. Do you see if the things your villain does match the name? What is it, black humor? More on, good guys, the villain action team was directly shot dead by the police, and all the good guys died. It turns out we are in a real drama! By the way, I thought the police also had a supernatural organization, but it turned out that a group of ordinary SWAT police officers didn't know anything. So why did you write it to set off the protagonist? How powerful is the protagonist? The villain action team has more soldiers per capita, the protagonist is still disabled, and the system users per capita are worthless. Apart from the nameless SWAT team, there are no combat units. The film police and the whitewashed villains are working hard there without knowing the truth at all. I can only say that you are on the right track 🤔 Then let's talk about turning to writing a drama. The camera turns around and goes back to writing about the protagonist team's gags and pretentiousness. I am so happy that the dog language translator is extremely sensational, and maybe it will be sensational again when Wen Rui dies. The result is that the villain's claws are far outstretched, and the protagonist doesn't know anything and is still having a headache and trying to prevaricate his father. I noticed that Fan has a dog at home, so will the protagonist, the dog translator, perform a meritorious service and discover the villain's conspiracy next? Insert the protagonist back into the main plot, right? While the protagonist is having a peaceful time, on the other side there is a large-scale bloody conflict between plainclothes SWAT police and villains. Me😅

When I saw 5090 finding the protagonist's father, I thought it was an opportunity to open up the sky and speak out, to unite with the persecuted. However, it turned out that there were various misunderstandings, speculations, mysteries, and hiding. Infinitely weakening the country's strength, I just pretended that you had never been exposed to it and feared bad writing. We all know that through electric wheelchair matchmaking and artificial intelligence generated by high-latitude props, we have already checked out all the opponents. In the end, we still have to deceive ourselves and others by saying "Ah, I just borrowed this address. The address I gave you has nothing to do with me. The person in front of you doesn't know anything."

The villain is a failure. There is no such villain in the first place. The protagonist helps these people who are born or acquired disabilities, which is also a warm story. I have to add a villain to attribute the reason to the villain. The villain is so low. Does everyone have to have their talents taken away? Or are they all geniuses? There are so many people around the protagonist who have their talents taken away. What you mean is that an organization that can take away the talents of human beings around the world and has developed over the past few decades, with this kind of expressiveness, can play house with the protagonist and rule the world. The protagonist fights alone as a joke, and the official knows nothing?

A book that is difficult for normal people to read. The logic is confusing. Some people may ask what kind of logic is required for fictional novels. Indeed, novels do not need to follow reality and can be fictional, but they also have their own worldview, rules, etc. An organization that can deprive others of their concepts at will. There are also many ordinary people in the organization. Are you telling me that the whole world doesn't know about it? The protagonist has already gone against this organization, but ends up writing code there all the time? The pros and cons are trying to force their wits down, right? It's really disgusting.

It's useless except for imagination, but it's hard to write about imagination.

Normally, the title and cover of your book are like this

There are no poisonous points in the early stage, and there are no reading points. It is so ordinary that I don't know what I read after reading it. The mid-term is interesting. The interesting point lies in the interaction between the protagonist and skills and creatures from other worlds, which respectively represent inhuman stupid dead creatures and inhuman kind creatures. In the later stage, it probably started from the stage when the leader wanted to kill people and silence them and the professor fell ill. The behavior of bringing people to the conference room to kill people and silence them during the whole company's work can be understood as giving up rationality on the diversity of human species, but the next one... I don't know how the author understands the emotion. In my opinion, it is a scene like this: the medical staff accompanied the patient's colleagues and friends to watch the patient fall ill and fall in the vomit without doing anything. Instead, they watched a strange guy grab the patient's hand and moan. The young man finished and said: "There are so many people watching, I am so shy." R>Gurgling …cough… Wow…vomit …vomit vomit…vomit… cough cough… ugh…evil… Wow…vomit …vomit… vomit…

It's quite interesting so far, but the author's description of the protagonist's system, supernatural power and lurkers in another world has a very classic Dihua feel. The protagonist makes various guesses wrong in this regard and is simply a fool, but in other aspects he is not so stupid. It seems that this kind of mistake is a foreshadowing, but this Readers can no longer accept this kind of description. It's better to throw out the information quickly and establish it quickly. Otherwise, it will be annoying to see the protagonist's actions. If the protagonist is not supposed to know, then the readers can also see it through other descriptions. The readers need a characterization to find a reason for the protagonist's actions.

Why did I discover this book at chapter 60😭I can't sleep without seeing the follow-up. Author, please update soon😭Please, I will do anything.

Features: Big imagination, fluent writing, memorable points, suitable for reading in one go Conclusion: grass jelly (matches brain waves)/above grain and grass (ordinary people)/hay (people who advocate competition and do not like the glory of human nature)

The introduction is a bit awkward. I opened it several times but gave up because of the introduction. If it weren't for the good reviews in the book review section, I would have missed it. The introduction is too superficial, or too superficial.