Immortal, What Next?

Awesome Go and get rid of the golden jasmine flowers

Because the author did not reply to me whether the protagonist is a modern person who traveled through time or an ancient person who lived forever, I divided the evaluation into two directions. If it were a modern person, my evaluation would be that the protagonist is a pure egoist who doesn't care about the life and death of others, and just feels good for the moment. There is almost no morals and bottom line. After being the emperor for so many years, he has done nothing but pure waste. The words of the ancients are acceptable, and they are completely in line with my understanding of the changes in the short-lived ancients after their long lives. All kinds of emotions gradually fade away in the long river of time, leaving only emptiness and no goals

It is updated every day from 10 o'clock to 12 o'clock. Not surprisingly, it is 10,000 words per day. Your arsenic, his honey, there are thousands of kinds of literature, each has his own love, and he doesn't like to row it away.

In order to compose new words, I forcefully express my sorrow. If you are immortal and invincible, then go study mathematics and engage in scientific research! →_→

The group portrait article has been written. It must be a master. The writing power is too high.

The author wrote about an immortal who is invincible and separated from the mortal world, but he couldn't describe the immortal's mentality, so he could only express the immortal's mentality by saying that it doesn't matter. Then the construction of the entire mortal world is not good, and it smells like a Douyin dog drama. Furthermore, the connection between the protagonist and this background world relies on the Yan Kingdom, but when he says that he is separated from the Yan Kingdom, he doesn't care. The whole is fragmented,

The protagonist has traveled through time, but it doesn't seem like he has traveled through time from us.

Is the protagonist human? Just lie down flat😅

Do you know why my grades are mediocre? I am so good at it 🙂

It can't be the old cliché of an adopted son or the descendant of an old friend. Then this cliché is too old. I hope I can write something new.

To be honest, I think racing cars are a bit abstract.

You are a Wudi-style fantasy novel, not a realistic criminal investigation novel. . . Such procrastination will only make more people abandon the book

There are pros and cons. The good one is a refreshing novel with a good idea and good writing. The bad thing is that the main character has lived for hundreds of years and almost everyone he knew has disappeared. As a result, the main character has been out of the world for hundreds of years. After the main character disappeared, the world began to fall into chaos. Although the main character has no obligation and has always kept the world in peace, yes, it is a bit uncomfortable to read. To sum up a novel with good ideas, it is good to read.

What a mean person! I shouldn't have clicked in when it was 140,000 words long... I can't keep this until the end of the year!

Leibao

It's a pretty good-looking Immortal Invincible style that's not too poisonous. It's relatively bland, but I don't know why it's weird.

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It's okay to take two steps

The writing is not bad, but it is a real drama to have seven emotions and six desires to cultivate the path of immortality...

After reading Chapter 63, the author's structure is still very clear. The protagonist has the strength of the first echelon, but the protagonist himself does not have the ability to defy "power", such as the power of heaven and earth, such as the support of people's hearts. At the same time, it also gave the protagonist a long-term main task "Looking for Immortals", It also gave the clue "Let the fragments of the Immortal Road repair the cracks and find other fragments." Taoist couples or comrades can be added appropriately. Anyway, there are no sages in our world in the novel. Stories about gods and Buddhas can be added, human-monster love, fairy-monster love, etc.

But the AI ​​flavor is still there, and it feels like watching a short drama. 🙂

Li Youchan shouldn't be stupid enough to think that he can compete with Yanzu with the National Defense Formation 🙂

I wandered around the door a few times without even thinking of clicking in. But when I did, it was really awesome. I gave you a monthly pass.

I read some negative comments in the reviews. Most of them are essentially taking the settings of this book from other book covers (for example, saying that the Immortal is a time traveler and that he has some other abilities) which are not explicitly mentioned in the author's book. I think this book is well written. (If you argue, you are right)

It is easy to achieve immortality, but difficult to achieve freedom.

The text is very smooth to read. I have no education and can't find words to praise it. Everyone has their own evaluation of good and bad books. I just read Chapter 27 and didn't stop to watch videos or do other things. If I can do this, it is a good book in my mind.

The update time is not certain, so the author probably knows the plot an hour earlier than the readers 🙂

You shouldn't be able to touch the sun above your head by raising your hand. You can see the whole world with just one glance. When you look down, you can see the heart of the earth. It reminds me of a very old book. The protagonist has a phoenix tattoo. He wears black long sleeves to cover it up all the time. He also lives for many years, one or two thousand years, and he can't die. He will be resurrected by the tattoo after committing suicide. It also has ceiling combat power. The book is so old that I forgot the name.

The writing is very good. There are not many group portraits that are as good as this. The author will continue to work hard and everything is finalized. Follow-up monthly tickets and recommendations will follow.

Can't afford it. Also deleted my comment. Did I say something wrong?