Hogwarts: Unforgivable Curse at Full Level at the Beginning

In fact, many fans have used this idea before. The protagonist has super black magic ability and can be the new Dark Lord Advantages: 1. At present, it seems that she will not be a nanny, but will work hard to learn magic and live her own life. It depends on whether the author has seriously thought about his magical world, and whether it is interesting or not will determine the life or death of the book. A similar representative fan is "Hogwarts: Gray Wizard". The plot is not good and the writing is very poor, but the perspective of magic and occultism is very good and it can become a masterpiece 2. The writing is smooth, without too many typos. What is more blunt is that the protagonist wants protection magic before the lottery, but after the lottery, he wants black magic. He is not alert when he realizes it. It seems a bit immature, but not too outrageous. At least there is a patch saying that it is not affected by negative emotions Disadvantages: 1. System writing, I personally am okay, but recently many people don't like it, it depends on the individual 2. The author did a poor job on the original work, and many flaws need to be polished. For example: Muggle families will not know Diagon Alley (there is no admission notice), and Ollivander can only use three kinds of magical animal materials to make the core of the wand (at least it is said to be ancestral). , The protagonist thinks that Snape is a bad guy (really outrageous), has impure blood, etc. It is recommended to modify it Summary: Compared with the same period of time, it is considered solid food, but at present, it feels that it will collapse in the later stage, unless the imagination is too strong and refreshing.

There are some parts of this book that are really poisonous and depressing. If nothing else, if you want to raise a cat by yourself and hide in Tibet, you don't know what kind of license you need to get. I would have thought you wanted to raise a giant dragon.

Hmm... The three unforgivable curses are at full level, and if you go to Gryffindor... It's hard to judge.

The Unforgivable Curse is at full level, but the protagonist has never used it once 🙂

I started with the three unforgivables at full level, and then never used them once. I don't quite understand that since you didn't use them even once, what did you do with this spell? Then you might as well give him a Transformation Charm, a Patronus Charm, or anything else. There is also a sorting ceremony. From this sorting ceremony, we can see what the author plans to write about in the future. The Lion Court has the most nannies, the Badger Court mostly writes about daily life, the Eagle Court mostly writes about scientific research, and the Snake Court writes about black magic. Of course, there are very few people who write HP fanfiction who are not nannies, and the number of nannies among them is Shiyuan.

The Life of Professor McGonagall

Who are the heroines? Multiple or single. I always thought it was Luna, Hermione and Ginny with multiple heroines after reading it before. But now I realize it seems to be Luna, the single heroine? I don't want to order anymore

I didn't want to watch the part about sorting into different hospitals. From the beginning, I thought it would be a rational protagonist who would follow his own path without joining the group. But when it comes to Lion House, it's hard not to have a house-playing plot, and I don't like the nanny protagonist, and I don't even like Weasley.

Is this price right? A cup of butterbeer actually costs 2 gold galleons. You must know that the little wizard's wand only costs a few gold galleons. Although it is subsidized, a wand is not several times more expensive than butterbeer 😅😅😅

Regarding the transfiguration in magic, various clean raw materials are chopped into various kinds of food, and then returned to their original shape after entering the stomach. This way, you can enjoy the taste of fried chicken without feeling guilty (as long as it is relieved after entering the stomach)

It's very good-looking. Finally, instead of focusing on Harry Potter or writing in the plot, someone finally wrote about swimming in the ocean of knowledge. Originally, writing about magic requires knowledge, but many authors focus on Harry Potter or write in the plot, which is not very good.

Nowadays, there are so many articles on the Internet, and fast-food articles have become mainstream, but I hope the author can write with details and depth. HP is the first book I read, so I naturally have a good impression of HP fanfiction. The author greatly hopes to make up for HP's unhappiness, the infatuated Snape, the brotherly rift between Dumbledore, the mischievous duo's prank shop, and the misery of Lupine's life. I hope the author can reasonably add branch lines without affecting the main line and outline of this article.

Think about it, you can make more money if you can open a restaurant by using the shape-shifting technique. Ordinary water can be transformed into milk tea, and nutritious and cheap food can be transformed into boiled fish, twice-cooked pork, and roasted chicken. The cost is extremely low, and it is healthy and nutritious.

When I saw the giant giant monster, I couldn't help but complain, you already used Fierce Fire, why did you still need the Life-Killing Curse, and you already wanted the materials from the giant monster, why did you use Fierce Fire, and then you were afraid that Lao Deng wouldn't be able to see it? Even if you turn on the special effects, you can still see the traces on the giant monster! And it's enough to be torn apart and transformed, but you deliberately put yourself in Lao Deng's eyes like this?

This is the first time I see a fan who is absent from the Iron Hat King

The author is writing about the nature of transfiguration, explaining the Gringotts exchange rate, the cost of luggage, and the starry sky in the castle. I don't know why I have to mention these. If these are not foreshadowing, then they are just too many words. It feels like the author is not satisfied with the settings of some fans and insists on "fighting" with them, especially if you want the Iron Hat King, I don't want it.

Is the heroine Luna? If yes, unsubscribe

Those who can tell Hermione and the two burdens are typical high-minded people but low-handed people. These people are basically inferior to Ron.

If I had known you wouldn't have renewed the subscription, it's a shame, the IP is still from Japan.

Why don't you write it? Is he a eunuch?

Can I add more details?

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