Take Charge of the Five Thunders and Two Worlds

I haven't read the previous one because I couldn't get the title synopsis, but I still prefer Seal of Two Realms to this one🤔 Novel type: Two Realms flow, cultivating Taoism and eliminating demons Highlights of this book: Traveling between two realms [the main world enlightens the extraordinary (not my only method), but brings a bunch of experienced Taoists, conquers other worlds, and destroys demons! I think this selling point is okay] Protagonist Goldfinger: [Five Thunder Orders] Function: 1. Traveling to another world (a world of ancient martial arts and Taoism) 2. Enlightenment and giving thunder seeds (can give extraordinary seeds to monks in the main world, If you go to the pyramid level, the stronger the cultivation level of the people below, the more demons and demons will be killed, and the benefits can be fed back to the protagonist) The source of the Five Thunder Orders: According to legend, the founder received the magic from the gods in his dream. When he opened his eyes, there was a thunderbolt from the blue, which hit the jujube tree next door. The ancestor looked it up and got it from it. (It is speculated that there is a so-called upper world, and many ephemera worlds surround the upper world, which is also the reason for the similarity of language and culture.) (The Five Thunder Order may be equivalent to the Taoist disciple's new magic weapon, equivalent to the teleportation array eye, traveling to other ephemeral worlds, preaching, and killing demons.) (It is also similar to slaying demons and slaying demons.) , Accumulate merit, and let the cultivation level rise slowly...) In this situation where novels about the two worlds are relatively rare, this book can be read🤔 But I always feel that it is not as good as the seal of the two worlds... Some minor problems and clichéd plots are okay. After all, I have read the novels for so many years, and I can't even take a glance at it. I probably know what the plot will be later (unless that kind of contrast novel) The character of the embroiderer is flawed, and the plot is not well written, which makes the embroiderer at the beginning not lovable (especially the scene where the embroiderer goes into the mountain to find the protagonist... It's a bit difficult) (To be honest, it's better to be cliched to the end, with five thunder orders shuttled at the beginning, the protagonist Fainted, picked up by Xiu Niang, bandits attack later, and the protagonist wakes up to save the village... Although it is cliché, at least Xiu Niang's character will be fuller and more likable because of the life-saving grace. ) (The main world gym, two girls, looking for yellow paper and other small daily life... Oh my god, this book seems to have been written before the Seal of the Two Worlds, I feel like the writing has deteriorated😳)

For these two chapters, I cast my monthly vote.

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As a novel in which the protagonist majors in thunder magic, can open two gates, and takes his little brother to a different world to conquer demons and eliminate demons, the highlights of the plot are just a few: subduing demons and eliminating demons, solving suspense puzzles, fighting monsters and upgrading, taking adventures to seize treasures, Taoist masters from two realms, conquering the younger brother, and farming for hegemony. However: 1. When the protagonist is slaying demons and monsters, he does not solve the case through searching for clues, following traces, interrogating witnesses, etc., And avoids the exciting point of solving mysterious puzzles; 2. At the same time, the description of the battle is extremely sloppy, even more sloppy than the Pokémon battle. It is just a few lightning strikes to kill the monsters on the opposite side. The description of the experience value is also very sloppy, and there is no sense of satisfaction. This avoids the hot-blooded battle and monster fighting. The fun of upgrading and taking risks to seize treasures; 3. Although the protagonist uses red sandalwood from another world to resell it in the world and become a Taoist, the description is also extremely sloppy, and the process and results are completely ignored. How to hire people, cut down, transport, resell, profit, and influence I skipped all the elements and didn't write them down, and avoided the cool points of the Taoist masters of the two worlds; 4. When the protagonist has enough experience in fighting monsters, he can add an extra Pokmon Ball to collect a younger brother, but the process of recruiting a younger brother is also very simple, just asking the other person if they want to be a younger brother? The other party bowed to him without any twists and turns, and there was no foreshadowing or description of the younger brother, so the feeling of subduing the younger brother was also skipped; 5. Although the protagonist and the younger brother built a temple in another world, they had no idea of ​​using it as a base to conquer and conquer the other world. They never thought about expelling the demons and then ruling and taking over the surrounding territories, starting a farming model to improve people's livelihood or engage in industrial development, and avoided the excitement of farming for hegemony. The setting of this book is okay, but it is dragged down by the author's writing style and thinking. It clearly has the possibility of becoming a masterpiece, but the author chose to use strong writing skills to avoid all the exciting points. At least in the early stage, it presented readers with a plain-boiled novel with a dull plot, a bland story, and pale characterization.

I can't stand stallion stories, everything is female, and all animals are female

If the author can't write about women, don't write about them. I read more than 20 chapters in the beginning and it's really annoying. The women are stupid and looking for trouble. An ancient rural girl is hungry every day and hasn't cleaned anything. It's normal not to take a shower for a month in the environment with monsters and monsters everywhere. She often does farm work and is exposed to wind and sun. She can't be beautiful. There are also class distinctions. How can she find the confidence to stick to the male protagonist? The male protagonist often touches his head and gets close to him. He is a rich second generation and has not just been released. Normal people will not get close to him and will only keep away from him.

If this one doesn't work, I'll write a book called The Melon-eating Swordsman from Jin Yong's World.

The last book on martial arts was very popular. I look forward to your new book continuing to write about martial arts. Waiting until now, it turns out that you will write about the Second Realm Immortal Cultivation style. And there are too many people writing about this genre. All kinds of fun routines have been written. People who are looking forward to you hope that you will continue to write about martial arts. I have been advised to eat enough. Don't you understand?

Analyze the poisonous spots that take experienced people through. The time is too early. The protagonist has just developed and leads people through time in a hurry. It is unstable. It is more reasonable to put it back a little. When the strength is strong, it will be more reasonable. Moreover, the identity was exposed directly and voluntarily, and the contact was only for a short time. Do you believe in the character of the veteran so much? The third is that it destroys the uniqueness and becomes a cliché. The protagonist loses its specialness and the sense of satisfaction decreases. I still feel anxious. The protagonist should first develop candidates for thunder, then slowly lead people, and then design a place to make people who travel through the past think it is some special secret cave.

You have to let the Taoist priests roll up, who they want to pull, whether they want to pull in fellow disciples or juniors, you have to have rules and regulations. Use contributions in exchange for places. The protagonist takes a cut.

Who the hell wants to see you picking up girls? You're grinding and moaning and sticky and you're so tired. What I want to see is pig's feet pulling people's heads to form a team in the modern world. Cutting down mountains and ruining temples in other worlds. Killing demons and monsters. I want to see rivers of blood. Who the hell wants to see you fall in love?

The dialogue has no depth, the characters are not fleshed out, and it easily pulls people into another world, which is a mouthful of poison.

It's so ugly that I don't even know where your score came from. Did someone else give it to you?

Why don't you just write a book about Jin Yong's world?

I can accept rescue of disasters and people in reality, but what is the purpose of flying to the moon to cause trouble? Are you writing a fantasy story that has to be tied to patriotism? Do you need to support the development of science and technology? It's understandable that you insist on publicizing your stance on national struggles, but you can't force them to be drawn together. Isn't this forcing you to write a drama? The protagonist you wrote is a Taoist, a Taoist, a Taoist, a Taoist. Say important things three times. This is like adding a piece of bacon to a cup of ice cream. When writing fantasy, don't talk about international struggles, okay? Just let what we get in the fantasy world feed back into reality. Do we really want to create a heavily armored combined force in the fantasy world to make a show?

A very classic stallion harem online novel. Only 353 chapters have been read, including Wei Kunzhuo Qingyan (ghost), Jiang Shishi, Xiao Ya, Li Qingshuang (bird), Ye Ruyan (snake), Wei Kunxiu Niang, Bai Ke (arc), Chen Zhi, etc. (Unlimited). Those who like to read it are recommended to read it, and those who don't like to read it should run away.

Why are you being persuaded to quit? Let me start by saying that I was the host of an up after recording a video in another world. In reality, I was persuaded to quit by pretending to be smart. I don't know why I have been particularly annoyed in recent years, such as live broadcast articles and up main articles.

Let's just write about martial arts honestly. I thought Swordsman Eats Melon was a book on the same level as Sword Out of Hengshan. Their second book Sword Out of the Tang Dynasty directly broke into the top ten of the monthly ticket list, but you still put this between two worlds.

Bringing other people to another world is absolutely poisonous. I don't know what the author is thinking.

I am quite speechless. After reading your introduction, I have no desire to read your book. From the age of the end of the Dharma to the world where people can practice cultivation, the two worlds are still intertwined. Don't want to become an immortal and become an ancestor, but do you care about ghosts and witches? ? ? ? Is the sperm in your brain? ? ? Will you die without a girl? ? ? Can you become an immortal? ? ? Why not find a like-minded female cultivator? Do you have to cross species to make yourself uncomfortable?

An obscene book that everyone posted. Isn't it okay without a heroine? You are not suitable to write about women at all, you write like a chicken.

Praying to give people opportunities and take modern people through the past. . . . Author, you are God, goodbye

A female character who doesn't pay attention to practicing purebred horse writing and doesn't stand out

I really want to see "Wandering the Dragon's Mouth, Gold Mixed with Flowers" to continue its glory. Author, please write another martial arts book.

I really think the book "The Melon-eating Swordsman" is very good. The writing is different from others. The author has a unique aura, but this book can only be read for free.

Will your next novel be about martial arts? Coming from You Longsheng, I think that one is better 😃

What genre will your next book be? Are you planning to write about martial arts? I feel that You Longsheng's book is better 🙂

I didn't want to read this book after reading it for a while. It's very different from the Chigua book. Although there are more women in the Chigua book, the story is really well written.

I haven't even gotten through the free part yet, and the writing is comparable to the two books you wrote in the early years. When I was updating "Seal of the Two Realms", I looked back at them and lost interest after finishing the free part. Did "Seal of the Two Realms" exhaust your inspiration for classifying the two realms? For your next book, you should consider a relaxing martial arts fanfic similar to "The Melon-eating Swordsman". I haven't seen any similar books that can compare with it.

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