Becoming a Saint Through Poems and Books: Starting from the Contract with the Fox Demon Sister

The plot and writing are good, there are too few updates, and there are some small flaws, but the flaws are not hidden. Once the flaws are gone, you will be a master. I look forward to more updates in the future.

This book will continue to be updated, and it will never be eunuch.

It's so hard There's no matchmaker on the screen 😭

The author writes very well. But I feel that the plot design is not that good. Mainly I feel like there's something wrong with the map. The beginning of this book is too big. The entire map is depicted at the beginning, and the beginning is still at the top of the entire map. It is difficult to change maps later. It feels uncomfortable not being able to change the map, especially when the protagonist is a big one from the start. If you said at the beginning that part of the map was okay, or that you started in the novice village instead of the main city. A lot of novels don't always have the protagonist go from a small place to a city and then to the main city. In this way, readers can feel the protagonist's growth and excitement. I find this kind of map difficult to work with. The only thing I can think of that has no fog on the whole map at the beginning is the Infinite Stream which is very easy to change the map, and the change is very reasonable.

The subject matter is very good and the creativity is very good, but the author's logic is still not enough. I hope it won't collapse later.

Abandoned, posted as a souvenir. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into it, ranging from some poems to the setting of the world view. The writing is also okay. Personally, I feel that especially the first half of the chapter is well written. Unfortunately, it got worse after that. Let's briefly talk about the issues 1 Plot. The first few chapters highlight the theme, which is good. But then I spent three chapters writing about going to the Shadow Pavilion. It was necessary for the plot, but the author used the protagonist's words to say that being made difficult for is too common, but he still wrote it like this, which is inevitably cliché. 2 points of combat skills. It is not surprising to use the first to ninth grades, but the names of the combat skills are too childish, such as Foxy, Mouthful Honey Sword (it should be a typo by the author, the Mouth Honey Belly Sword is correct). I don't know if the author has read Chixin Xuntian, in which the Taoist skills are named like Fireworks Burning the City, Six Desires Bodhisattva, etc. Of course, this may be my personal reason. 3 The fighting scenes are too bland. The heroine is a second-grade great demon, and the fights are too bland. The second-grade at least has high-end combat power, but the fights are sparse and ordinary, and she doesn't have the spirit of a great demon at all. This cannot be explained by the opponent being too strong. All in all, I still hope that the author will write well. I believe that meeting is fate. Since we happened to meet in the book review area, I came to take a look and make some trivial suggestions. Although I still gave up, I still hope that you will write better and better. I am indeed a bit harsh on you as a newcomer, but come on. I hope I can be surprised to find your book when I scan the list again in the future. Let me just say, hey, I have read his book! Come on! 😁😁

If your grades are too bad, start a new book.

I still feel that there is too little, and it looks a bit uncomfortable. I still hope that the author can stabilize his mentality

I've finished reading it. It's very good. It's just that it's stuck in the early stages. One update a day is not enough. It's usually difficult to get up if you get less in the early stage. I hope the author can release it sooner

I've read three chapters, and it's good. The first half of the first chapter is even better. At first glance, I thought it had the potential to be a great writer. Unfortunately, it fell short later on, but the writing is good. Although the plot is a bit mediocre, it's good enough. I look forward to the author's subsequent performance. Come on 😁

It doesn't matter, I'm still watching

Is there a book similar to this? I like it very much, but the author is too slow to update)

It gives readers too much tension, which is not good for a web article.

I was passing by, did the cover of this book hit me 🤫

Congratulations to the boss! I hope you guys will continue to work hard and your results will get better and better! Ahem, that big guy, now that it's on the shelves, when will Riwan think about it? 😏

As the title says, I didn't expect the eunuch, so I have a moment of silence.

I don't know if you have seen it. 😭😭😢😢