After They Were Reborn, They All Became Female Devils.

The logic is full of poisonous points. The first point is that the origin of the maid Qingque is not explained. It fast-forwards to the rebirth of Killing Megan, so why was she sent here, where is she from, and why is she so highly cultivated? At least until I read Chapter 6, I didn't mention a word about it. Secondly, I don't know why Qingque was sent to identify the body even though he knew that Megan Sheng wanted to kill the male protagonist. It was purely for the plot and gave the male protagonist the opportunity to show off his power and kill Megan Sheng. The third point is that the male protagonist read the swordsman's self-learned sword skills and said, "A simple thrust with a chopstick is more terrifying than any exquisite sword skills." Don't you feel embarrassed? It's really hard to brag. You have to be more reasonable when you criticize your bad feet, right? The fourth point is, is the male protagonist too trustworthy? Qingque praised the male protagonist Tiancheng Jianyi as a disciple of the seven sects who had practiced for 20 years. The male protagonist asked, "Just a disciple?" He is new to cultivation, how can he be confident? I was still doubting my own fighting ability before, but now I feel that I am invincible?

The first chapter is not bad, but the martial arts category + Sister Chuan's eunuch reputation, the debuffs are also stacked 🤫 I don't know if I can read 500,000 words

However, the cover was hand-made by AI, but I added the starting point logo myself using PS

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It's not that you can't go back. It's too long this time. Why don't you start from the beginning? You really treat the novel as a game and write an if line. I don't understand and don't want to respect it. I really feel that the writing is not as good as before 😁😁

When I have almost forgotten the plot, I will come back and read it as a new book from where I left it. I don't care if there are any twists or turns later, but this situation is too uncomfortable. It's strange that I can't finish reading it. You forcefully take the protagonist out of a comfortable environment and pull the reader out of the silent pleasure. This feeling is almost like you are about to emit in the middle of doing it, and you are suddenly asked to take a shower and start over from the foreplay. It is really uncomfortable.

To be honest, it's not very good to read. It's not that the author's writing is faulty, but that the plot is a bit awkward, or that I read too much of it. In my opinion, this book is as enjoyable as Chasing the Husband's Crematorium, which is as enjoyable as the AI short drama. However, the author may have some literary youth or ideals. On the way to saving people, when I reach a place, I have to compromise first, then discover the darkness, and then kill. The routine is relatively classic, but the author's writing skills may not be up to it, and there is no way to portray it, which leads to the feeling of being out of touch, at least for me.

I didn't understand the first chapter. Since the protagonist's trip to the sect was an outcome acceptable to both sides after negotiation between the sect and the court, why did he kill the protagonist on the way to the sect? Isn't this just taking off your pants and farting? Then wouldn't the previous agreement between the court and the sect be broken? From the previous point of view, since the court wants to send a proton to the sect, it can accept such a shame and humiliation. Then we have to kill the male protagonist. Not only is this a shameful fact, it has not changed. Negotiations with the sect have not been concluded either. The sect suffered 0 losses. The imperial court lost twice. Since the emperor really wants to kill a prince with no real power or ability like the male protagonist, why should he trick him into leaving the palace first? Wouldn't it be simpler to just let the male protagonist choke to death from drinking water, die from illness, fall from horseback riding, etc. Directly in the palace? The emperor and the eunuch simply took off their pants and farted. By designing the conflict and tasks at the beginning in this way, I no longer feel like it was written by an old author. After all, I have read several of your books, although I didn't finish them every time.

Really going back? I thought I was hallucinating the Buddha's mind, I can't stand it anymore

No, buddy, are you saying that a person has been stupid for 16 years and then practiced swordsmanship for ten years to seize the throne? Is it right? Even if the emperor asks his ministers to give in, isn't it troublesome for an emperor who knows nothing but only fights?

Speaking of which, is Fox Lady really considered a martial artist?

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 7. The protagonist is like a sb. He spent all his loose money on the road, leaving nothing behind, and he can't even afford food.

Thank you, author. It's been a long time since I felt like I was suddenly fed a piece of shit halfway through a novel (Chapter 90).

In junior high school, I stayed up late reading on QQ to watch your rebirth of Big Boss, and now I'm about to graduate from college 😠

Now we see martial arts, whether it is traditional or modern, paid or free, the green hair gene basically runs through it.

Oh, the Golden Finger plug-in only appeared after a hundred chapters. The first one should be regarded as a talent. I have read a few chapters, but I don't dare to order it now, hahaha, I look confused.

Oh, the real plug-in is actually death and rebirth? The problem is that I'm tired of seeing this ability, and what you wrote before is pretty good. Isn't there any other way to get through the ending? Do you have to arrange a rollback after death?

This writing is like an assembly line, and they are basically the same.

I didn't pay attention to the comment section before. After it was put on the shelves, the more I looked at it, the weirder it became. When I came to the comment section, I saw that all the comments were scolding. Is the writing really bad?

As I expected, this book didn't do very well. I can't even figure out what I'm writing.

I get scared when I see the martial arts category 😭

It's boring to watch, but if you still want to fulfill it, I'll book it if you don't mind.

Wen Rui'an's Weibo name is Zi Cheng Yi Wen Rui'ian, and he has never posted anything about the situation in the picture. It was someone else who started the rumor (and I haven't posted on Weibo for a long time). Wen Ruian and Naihe Xiaowangchuan are both very good authors. I hope that everyone will not be led by someone with good intentions. Martial arts is already a small niche, and there are so many people who like to spread rumors and follow the rhythm. I hope everyone can stop the rumors among the wise.

Looking at the current books, many female protagonists like the male protagonist and identify with him because he has a sense of justice, or because the male protagonist saved the heroine and then got along well with her. But what is the reality? It was the heroine who suffered from leukemia and the hero spent more than 400,000 yuan to save her. She changed hands and ran away to marry someone else and gave birth to two children (of course, her leukemia relapsed later, and the husband did not save her). That's why the first sword on the shore is to kill the person you like first. Is it just the ungrateful few that make the news, or is it the appearance of one cockroach that has already made cockroaches everywhere?

To be honest, I have never read the ending of this book he wrote. The beginning is very interesting, but in the middle I don't know what it is about.

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Maybe I'm not following it. I'm following it when I read the second episode of the male protagonist's trip to Luoyang. I feel that there are some twists and turns in one go, and the plot is gradually unfolding. And since most of the female protagonists appear, they are very fond of it, so it's okay not to play through it. However, the new bonds formed between the male protagonist and each female protagonist in each episode cannot be preserved. Speaking of which, the male protagonist is not Is it the first reincarnation? The minds of each female protagonist are the male protagonists of different timelines. But this time they all awakened. It is probably that the female protagonists who were conquered by the male protagonists in each line for the first time will retain their memories in subsequent reincarnations. If the male protagonists do not achieve a perfect ending, they will be overturned by various behind-the-scenes forces, and then each female protagonist will be blackened and enter the bad line.

It was done by a friend

It suddenly occurred to me that your novel is suitable for a short drama, and a comic drama made with AI would be very interesting.

Sister Chuan's writing is still good, but it's boring and boring to read. There is no sense of expectation. I keep scrolling backwards.