Tokyo Wanderer: The Yorozuya X Files

I don't know why so many people say it looks good. So far, it's nothing impressive. Without exception, all the characters are very thinly drawn. The only ones that stand out a little are the cat eyes, but they are also of the blank slate type. Furthermore, the author's writing is very smooth, really very smooth. It belongs to the kind of character whose dialogues are all carved out of the same mold, and the plot is entirely driven by the author's narration. For example, when the protagonist and the wolf went to cause trouble, the location and environment were not described, and the infiltration process was not described except for picking the lock. What was outrageous was that the protagonist, who had previously sensed the cat-eye sisters, did not sense the wolf patting his shoulder. Then the villain at the back gave an order, and a bunch of muscular men appeared out of nowhere... The original text was really onomatopoeia describing "swish"... I have only seen this line of writing in elementary school essays, and it was the kind with low scores. And it stands to reason that each copy should have at least a dozen chapters, but so far there have been at least four commissions. Without exception, they have all ended very quickly, and they are not simple commissions. This is because the author simply describes the template to receive the mission, find people, fight, and end the commission. There is no additional description during the period. It is just to find the person, fight, and it is gone. It is not even as good as the protagonist finding the dojo to describe. It was written with great care, although that paragraph was quite awkward. Anyway, the most basic description of the character's psychology is not included. Two more paragraphs on the process of contacting the mission target are too much. The fighting process is also Baishui. The protagonist makes moves and the enemy is hit, but the feeling and situation of the enemy being hit are the most traditional "xxx is shocked, how can such intensity and power be possible!" There are no such paragraphs. It can be said that Baishui has reached a state...

What fucking year is this eve? Someone has written about the three sisters of Maoyan

The theme and setting are very good. After reading five or six chapters, there was almost no awkwardness. I personally just don't like the kind and honest character of the protagonist at the beginning, coupled with the magic skills of wedding clothes, which is directly telling the readers that I will give my skills and martial arts to my harem and friends in the future. I act like a cow and a horse, and the harem gets generous rewards out of thin air. It feels like an honest person, always supporting others 😅😅😅 The setting of this magic wedding dress is the beginning of the author's reader screening, but when it comes to conversation, generally few people will screen readers before putting it on the shelves. Isn't it normal to divert traffic first?

The Hojo Division has opened the cat's eye too much. It can dispatch fighter jets, American F15s, aerial tankers, Sea King helicopters, and American nuclear submarines. These are not ordinary rich women. The winery is nothing compared to Maoyan, except for the small medicine.

To be honest, the three Maoyan sisters either only accept the eldest sister, or all of them. It seems awkward to accept the second sister and leave out the other one. If the author said that it is because Xiaotong has a boyfriend, and not for the character of the protagonist, but have you ever thought that Xiaotong is the second child? The protagonist and Xiaolei Xiaoai are together. What should the protagonist and Xiaotong call each other's brother-in-law? (Sister-in-law) or brother-in-law (sister-in-law), wouldn't he be embarrassed or uncomfortable when meeting the protagonist based on his current personality? But the Maoyan sisters are so deeply in love that they can't be separated from each other for a long time, and after separation, the eldest sister and the younger sister are together, while the second child is alone. Uninformed people thought that she was excluded by the sisters for some reason.

I called home and didn't speak. The male protagonist was doing well and even sent money to his hometown. Why did he somehow dare not contact his family?

The boy didn't know how good his eldest sister was, and mistakenly regarded his second sister as a treasure

Will this heroine book be read by the three Maoyan sisters? After all, the introduction mentions Maoyan Cafe.

After all, this is an online article, so there is a natural gap between you, the native, and the readers. Why do even urban novels often have protagonists who travel through time or be reborn? The main reason is to make readers feel comfortable and to reduce the barriers between them. In the first place, there is a wedding magic skill that works for others, and then there is an indigenous protagonist who makes it difficult for readers to take on the role. It's also very good. If you screen it like this at the beginning, you won't have to worry about it later. I wish you can go through this road

There are no major poisons, but minor poisons are constant. This continuance is really constant. From the free chapters to the release of dozens of chapters, the poisonous points have not stopped. Of course, everyone has different opinions on whether some plots are poisonous or not, but there is a controversial point every few pictures, which can explain something.