World Version Update

This book is definitely a magical book. Of course I'm talking about the early stage. Where did this book fall apart? It can be seen clearly. It is the author's golden finger that can change the whole world. Only the author can maintain his own independence and can also use things from other worlds. No one else has this memory. The key is the world of immortality. It can actually interfere with the protagonist's golden finger. Then drive the protagonist to death. This is forced interference by the author. This plot is too rigid. It feels like a script kill. You can't just shoot a movie and solve it in two hours. I guess you can only write this boss in the last 100 chapters. Because once you solve this boss, your book will be finished. In terms of combat power, this boss is close to an immortal. And the protagonist has just established his foundation. Plus the author's various abstractions. There is definitely nothing wrong with the content. The plot just fell apart.

The world view described by the author is very grand, and he uses a eloquent way to gradually introduce everyone into this grand structure. This process tests the author's writing skills and complete outline. But at present, it seems that the author has very good control in this aspect, and has performed very well in various world versions. The contrast and collision between the systems of immortals, psychics, machines, and gods makes people feel logically self-defeating, with a lot of foreshadowing, but the reversal does not make people feel abrupt. I think it is one of the most amazing books I have read in the past two years. In terms of comfort, logic, writing, structure, and novelty, I would like to call it the most powerful masterpiece of becoming a god in 2025! As the title indicates, if the author can maintain this level until the completion of the book, he will be considered a god! But as the structure, the protagonist's power system, the situations and opponents faced become more and more complex, how to make the plot and system logic self-reliant is the most difficult. For example, I have a masterpiece of fairy tales that I have updated before. I have a world of cultivating immortals. It was also a rare masterpiece in the early stage. The protagonist pretends to be invisible, but as the system When the structure is getting bigger and bigger, when the author is obviously unable to make logical decisions, he falls into the biggest problem of fairy tale novels. When the power system is getting higher and higher, what should I do? I can only start to change the map and add characters to the protagonist. The original settings can no longer be justified, making it difficult to read later! I hope the author will take this as a warning. I will give you two small suggestions. First, with the breakthrough of the power system, you should pay attention to the thinking level of the characters. Big figures who have lived for thousands of years are not fools. Many authors find it difficult to control in this regard. The layout and confrontation take a lot of thought. Therefore, many of the current fairy tales were written very well before Yuanying. That is because they were written about people. But when it comes to the power system above Yuanying's transformation into gods, if they are still written in the previous way, they will only become a running account, constantly changing the same pattern of map sets, which is boring. Second, don't give the protagonist a random character. For example, to justify the reason why the protagonist can travel between versions, or to show that the protagonist's origin is not simple. He is the reincarnation of a certain big boss. It's not impossible to add it this way, but you must consider that this is already a bad cliché. If you want to be a god, you can only achieve the only way, otherwise you will just disappear into oblivion.

I personally feel that it is not a bad thing to introduce the setting of the only one in this world to give the plot a sense of urgency. It is actually quite interesting to even be able to patch the sect's cultivation of geniuses. If you just rely on changing versions to keep reducing the dimension to attack the boss, it will collapse in a short time. These settings are not poisonous or obtrusive, but not everyone may like them. There are several critical points below that are quite reasonable if you just read them without reading them carefully, but if you read them carefully, they are not that difficult to understand. If anyone new sees it, don't be dissuaded and read it yourself to experience it.

The idea is very interesting, I like it, it doesn't matter if there are some bugs, the most important thing is that it is interesting! There are a lot of cliche articles, but not many stand out.

Come on

Spend 200 yuan to get a certificate from the Tianshi Mansion, and instantly become a disciple of the largest sect in the world of immortality. Find a villa to build a fortress and turn it into a doomsday fortress. Find a university to study as an adult undergraduate, and the magical world becomes a research school for adult students.

This is the first time I have heard that building a foundation can kill the Golden Elixir and Nascent Soul. You just have a deep foundation, right? You are the only one with invincible powers, right? You have a lot of resources, right? Are other people's foundations, resources, and magical powers all parallel imports? Are you the only one smart? Are you the only one who has a chance? Why do today's authors always think of others as fools? If there is a real cultivator of immortality, believe it or not, I guarantee that the other party has the same idea of ​​becoming a supreme being as you. They will definitely go to the next stage in order to deepen their foundation and reach the point where there is no further progress. They will also build the foundation to kill the golden elixir. Haha, believe it or not, when you say this, those people who want to become immortals will definitely laugh to death, because garbage cannot become a golden elixir.

You can see it from the front, but you don't need to see it from the back. It's so hard to pretend to be slapped in the face because of its overwhelming combat power. It's been chased and killed, and then it eats the materials to transform the gods, but it can't even upgrade to the golden elixir. It's just stuck at the last level and can't be upgraded. It's disgusting. The pattern behind it is already obvious. It's just going to a competition and being ridiculed and then slapped in the face. I can only say that there is no outline and I start to cheat money.

These two chapters have become so popular recently that I no longer want to read them. You said that if you wanted to read more, you could finish the entire plot, and write it all in one go. If you want to express your feelings, you should suppress them first. That would be okay, but just a little bit in one day is too disgusting.

Ranked 180th, am I qualified to speak? Forcibly creating a crisis, the God Transformation resources could not even produce a golden elixir, and a large version of resources was consumed before the foundation building was completed. The only version of the Immortal took action, but it couldn't even build a small foundation, and all the strength was lost. All kinds of hard-pressed combat capabilities, and then forced to face all kinds of invincible opponents. The interesting thing about this book is the version update, rather than the battle of cultivating immortals, building the foundation to kill the Nascent Soul, and killing the Transformation God. The more I write, the worse it gets. Even if I give up reading the book, doesn't that mean there's something wrong?

It's a bit nonsense. You can boast about a big realm by building a foundation. I can understand you showing that the protagonist is awesome, but it's nonsense if you pretend to be awesome across two big realms. The knowledge reserves of life levels and realms are not at the same level. Even if you are an elementary school student, no matter how awesome you are, you can't compare to a college student. Your combat power is too collapsed.

The protagonist can choose the version, and an idea is ruined

There are too many bugs in this theme, which cannot be compensated for, especially when the protagonist in the city is alone, the famous mountain sect can guard against the protagonist. The protagonist can easily take away their skills and treasures, and casually kill those top masters. Others cannot find it at all, and there will be no future troubles. There are many more like this So this can only ignore the bugs and see the twists.

There should be many versions of the author. For example, low level, intermediate level, high level, and ultimate version. The higher the version level, the stronger the power. There are also more special versions. For example Low-level versions: urban world, martial arts world, low martial arts world, and middle martial arts world. Low demon, middle demon world. In the future, the highest level of the low-level version is to destroy the city. Intermediate version: high martial arts, high magic, cultivating immortals in the mortal world, cyberpunk, the highest ability to influence the planet. Advanced version: Immortal martial arts, mythology, fairy world, fantasy, can affect the entire universe. Ultimate version: the creator god of all people, the reincarnation of all people, and other infinite multiverses Special version: national destiny story, survival of all people, game for all, game coming. How about the author? What do you think?

I was a little disappointed. I had a premonition when the words "underworld" appeared, and the protagonist's behavior pattern was directly limited. The future outline can also be met directly. A crisis has been chasing the protagonist. In fact, the protagonist is already dead at this time, this character is dead.

I knew it was already broken when the Big Honkai Impact version came out. In fact, it was already gone when it came out of the underworld. You can basically guess the subsequent plot, and as expected, it was eunuch very quickly. The highlight of this book is that the version keeps changing, but the protagonist remains the same and experiences different worlds. However, at the end of the writing, it goes back to the traditional fairy tale, and even builds a foundation to kill the Nascent Soul and manipulate the way of heaven. It's ridiculous.

When I first saw this book, I read it together with "How to be an immortal without money". The beginning is very novel and breaks away from the pattern I have seen in the past. I thought it was another excellent book. "How to be an immortal without money" has become a popular topic. But it turns out that the writing is poor and the updates are delayed. The subject matter is very good and the beginning is perfect. However, it is not suitable for writing about IQ. You can write about cool articles, so there is no need to do so. It leads to a very good beginning. I wrote it bit by bit. I hope you can work hard again in your next book. If you are a newbie, try not to write multiple worlds. You are not very good at controlling many details and the handling of multiple worlds is not very good, including the realm. If you write, you can write cool and systematic flow, which is less brainy and you will like to read a lot.

Well, I feel that the protagonist has been exposed to high-end power too early. For example, during the Qi refining period, you competed with the intelligent god (which is quite outrageous), and later on, you were coveted by the immortal version. The progress was too fast, and I felt that my combat power had collapsed.

When I saw that the main character was killing golden elixirs and Nascent Soul at the peak of his foundation stage like a dog butchering a dog, he immediately gave up the book. The author should either let the protagonist level up, or not write about the ability to control the laws of heaven in the foundation building stage, and the laws of the great road to crush him. Then why do he need to cultivate the immortal realm? Just write a story about supernatural powers. Combat strength collapse + fighting in more than 9 small realms = brainless white text

The further it goes, the more rubbish it becomes👎. My points are wasted, damn (｀Δ´)!

Author, stop writing about your b plots, immortal gods, immortals, etc. Not many people really like to read them. You can treat it as a hidden plot and wait for the finale to surprise everyone, but now you seem to be preparing to use him as the main plot. Everyone is here to see the version bug. What are you serving everyone?

No, buddy, if you come here once in a while, all the suspense will be gone, can't you take a break? Come again. Nowadays, people's life and work are very tight. When writing a novel, you need to be strong and soft at the same time, and avoid all kinds of pressure. I knew it was the protagonist, but I didn't know it. I thought the protagonist was going to be driven crazy. He slowly learned how to develop. Alas, it was tiring to watch.

Forcibly suppressing the protagonist was too heart-wrenching, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up.

I hope the author won't change the character of the protagonist randomly. When the protagonist suddenly said that he was touched after seeing the madness in the cyber world, and suddenly wanted to do something, I had a question mark on my face? Is the protagonist this kind of persona? Isn't Gou Dao fighting for his own interests? Why did she suddenly become the Virgin? And if you see the world changing in a few months, you will still be touched a lot, right? Then you didn't touch the zombie siege and the organ trade before? This is a good book. I hope the author can think about it carefully and not kill his own readers.

Drive high and go low, but eventually it collapses

It's true that it started high and went low. This book was in the Great Honkai Impact version, that is, after the period when I commented like Ye Fan Meets King Jiang Shen. As I played several mechanical civilizations, I found that something was getting more and more wrong, so I started to keep it. Suddenly I found that this book was dead.

Just like the title, I saw that everyone is talking about the underworld, which chapter is it? The beginning of the chapter is really amazing, for example, the fairy is very moist, hahaha

Don't collapse.

After all, I can't write anymore. I'll finish it soon. Good morning.

Why are the new books suddenly gone? !