I Want So Badly to Be Reborn

Big Bubble

Xia tide

Sao Sao, pure Momo.

I started reading this book because there was an English teacher in the review, and I really took advantage of it 🙂

As of Chapter 100, I feel that Paopao cannot be let down the most. This is really what I owe in my previous life and I have to pay it back. Forget it about Lian Yi, it's best not to provoke him. However, considering that this is a harem story, it is unlikely that the protagonist will not provoke others. If he starts a harem, he can only marry Pao Pao, and Lian Yi will be the third one. This is different from Xiao Rongyu and Shen Youchu. Chen Gou did not owe the heroine any debt of love in his previous life, and Chen Gou did not promise to get married every two days. It was obvious that he was a scumbag.

I really liked the process of chasing Bubbles at the beginning of this book. Later, when I entered college, my career became worse and worse every day. It was okay at first, but every chapter was like this. Who can read it anymore? The key plot and Bubbles' confession actually use ellipsis "like this... That's it..." It was skipped in one stroke, and it was completely shocking. It was so disappointing. I would like to suggest that those of you who like to read this book should take a look at the way they handle it in "Revival" written by Chang Yu. He is also a master. Why does he handle it so smoothly? The more you go to the back, the more exciting it becomes.

Don't get entangled with Ripple anymore. It's very strange. How did you start the chapter? He will not confess to her, and in his previous life, he married the protagonist and still missed his ex-husband. After leaving, he came back (Ripples came back and broke into the lives of the protagonist and Xiao Momo, which may have been the last straw that influenced Xiao Momo's depression and suicide), and then divorced. There are so many points, but we still have to create this ripple.

After reading the first three chapters, others would write them as three golden chapters. You are a cesspit. You are a fool, ungrateful, a cuckold, and a dog licker. The reason why you are not scolded as a cuckold is because you finished early.

The beginning was amazing, but then the pace started too fast, with no foreshadowing, no detailed foreshadowing, just a pure plot. The later became more and more like a running account and a diary. In the middle, it didn't look like it was written by one person. It wasn't considered perfunctory, but the level was really not up to par with the beginning.

The work gave me an amazing feeling at the beginning. The impact of the plot, the control of the rhythm, the portrayal of the characters, the output of values, and even the casual hints made people feel excited. But as the number of words progressed to the latest chapter, I felt that the writing was very watery, the pace was very watery, and there was no description at all. The first-generation mobile phone had a very good sentence when it came out. The proportion of protagonists appearing is less than 10%. Each chapter is listed with data, box office number, sales volume, occupying most of the space To be honest. Seeing this is completely a habitual subscription, because the author has no design for this part of the plot, and the narrative is straightforward. Maybe when I started the book, I started with the purpose of "thinking of a beginning, and I will cut it if the results are not good". As a result, the more the word count goes on, the more it continues. The author's description of the female characters and even the characterization of the characters are often amazing. But as the chapters progress, more and more content is filled with "box office data" and the characterization of the characters becomes less and less. The plot is losing more and more surprises If the work reflects reality, I hope the author can pursue excellence like the protagonist, rather than completing mechanical profits.