Red Sky!

I cultivate the Shu Mountain techniques in the world of immortal cultivation. Immortality begins with the Gourd Sword Technique The Old Demon of Mount Shu in the Immortal Cultivation World They were all eunuchs.

The female characters are written so awkwardly. If you can't write a female lead or female characters, I suggest you go have a romance or get a foot massage. Don't be like a virgin, full of fantasies. Or you could just learn from Squid and start a book to practice your romantic scenes.

Your name sounds familiar. Where have I seen it before? Are you the reincarnation of Old Deng?

This is not a live stream of a eunuch toad eating shit while doing a handstand!

I thought this was a legitimate genius story, but it turns out it's just another cheat-giving game. If you're going to give away cheats, then don't call yourself a genius. Anyone who gets your cheats won't be able to cultivate.

A hodgepodge of toad-related things. In the past, when Hama wrote books, he had a good balance of pacing and relaxation, logical thinking, and youthful spirit. Modern writers, like Toad, rush through their books, like a man struggling to urinate, pouring out the impatience and powerlessness of middle-aged men. This book is cluttered with plot points, the story moves too fast, it lacks logic, and feels rushed.

It was such a mess 😰, and then out of nowhere the protagonist's foul mouth attracted women. This is going to ruin your career. I'm telling you, 😒😒 you deserve to fail. 😒😒 You have no ability to write female characters, yet you write nonsense. Do you think your female characters are particularly good? 😒😒😥😥

It was okay before, but after it was listed, it suddenly became trash. I suspect it has been sold to a studio.

This was originally written based on Akagi. 😁😁😁

Was it cut from somewhere and brought here?