The Old Demon of Shu Mountain in the Cultivation World

In the world of Shushan, who isn't an old hand at cultivation? Aside from those hothouse flowers, who isn't cunning and calculating? The author should look at his own protagonist; how does he resemble a cunning and calculating demon? They all deal with things based on their strength when faced with them. How did a protagonist with no scheming ability survive to become a wandering immortal in his previous life?

It's well-written, and so far the reading experience is great. However, the apprenticeship part feels abrupt. The apprentice's character isn't well-developed; he's like a random passerby. Then, after a few words about good aptitude, he's taken under the wing, which seems a bit strange. At least spend some time describing the character's background and personality to establish their character.

The beginning was going well, but then suddenly someone named Zhong Shenxiu appeared and took him as a disciple...

With the protagonist's strength, how could he possibly outmaneuver the righteous path of Shu Mountain? Shu Mountain values ​​cultivation; whatever sinister schemes you have, they can see right through them.

It's fine to eat evil monsters, but it's best not to eat sentient beings that don't commit evil. This isn't because I'm being sentimental; it's because in reality, we are the sentient beings who are being eaten.

Winning a magical duel? This is the top character in the book by the Grand Eunuch Toad! 🙂

Anyone who can write about Shushan and has a very clear memory of the background information must be a veteran author. But what I read in your writing is too outdated and rotten. I dare say that your books must have a few fixed flaws, and they are your own habitual writing flaws. Seeing what you wrote, I really feel that writing requires continuous accumulation and growth.

The author should just stick to the infinite flow genre. The protagonist has already killed a Nascent Soul cultivator in just a few chapters, and the Taoist magic of Mount Shu doesn't seem that powerful. In the world of cultivation, strength is so great that bricks fly; if your cultivation is stronger than yours, you can instantly kill the protagonist.

Everything else was fine, but the apprentice was a complete disaster. Didn't the author see the readers' strong desire for it, and instead had to write this terrible part?

They're always there, calling him "Master Chen," "Master Chen," what if Master Chen cuts you down with one sword? What if Master Chen senses you? You're all so afraid, why don't you say he senses you? It really makes me appreciate the diversity of species.