The Old Demon of Shu Mountain in the Cultivation World

The one cultivated in the Shushan world is not an old coin, except for the flowers in the greenhouse, and that one is not scheming. The author looks at the protagonist he wrote, does he look like a scheming devil? Things are dealt with based on strength when they come to you. How did this kind of protagonist with no ability to plan survive to become a Sanxian in his previous life?

The writing is quite good, and the look and feel is great so far, but accepting a disciple is quite abrupt. After all, your disciple's character is not established, just like a passerby, and then he said a few words about destiny and the disciple has good qualifications and then accepted him as his disciple. It seems a bit strange. At least take some time to describe the characters' experiences and establish their personalities.

It looked pretty good from the beginning, but suddenly a certain Zhong Shenxiu appeared and accepted him as his disciple. . . . . .

Can the protagonist figure out the right path of Shushan even with his strength? If you are good at preaching in Shushan, others can see clearly what evil schemes you have up your sleeve.

It's okay to eat evil monsters, but it's best not to eat living beings that are intelligent and do not do evil. This is not because of hypocrisy, because in the real world, we are the sentient beings who are eaten.

Win in a battle of wits? This is the chief eunuch in Toad Gongshu's book 🙂

Anyone who can write about Shushan and remember the background information very well must be an old author. But what you wrote seems too old and decadent. I dare say that your books must have a few fixed points, and they are your own habitual writing points. After seeing what you wrote, I really feel that writing really needs to keep accumulating and growing. Your stuff is too old and lifeless. You need to reflect on your own writing style, improve yourself through multi-system learning, and don't always rely on previous experience. Especially if you look at the advantages of new famous online articles, you have to step out of your comfort zone, otherwise you will be abandoned by readers. Today's readers' tastes have changed greatly. Keep up with the times and don't waste your previous writing accumulation.

The author should write Infinite Flow. The protagonist can kill the gods in just a few chapters, and your Shushan Taoism doesn't feel that powerful. The power of cultivating immortals is huge. If your cultivation level is stronger than yours, you can beat the protagonist in seconds.

Everything else is fine, but the apprentice is really a failure. Can't the author see the readers' great wishes and write this poisonous point?

There every day, Leader Chen, Leader Chen, what if Leader Chen cuts you with a sword, what should I do if Leader Chen senses you? You are so afraid, why don't you say he senses you? It really made me feel the diversity of species.