Holy Lady, I Am so Blind!

First, about the title and content of the book The saint in the title is the core character, and the story of the first volume revolves around the saint. In terms of content, this book is actually more like a Western fantasy in the traditional sense. If you want to read light novels, such as time-traveling stories in Western fantasy games and Western fantasy novels, this book may not meet your needs. The tone of the story in the first volume is depressing, because the original source of inspiration was the astrological killing magic, which determines that the first volume will not be too easy. I have also prepared the subsequent story outline. I have an obsessive-compulsive disorder when writing books, which is what I wrote earlier. I would feel uncomfortable if it didn't come true in the follow-up, so I will recycle most of the foreshadowings. Second, about the author It is very difficult for me to update. I am stuck in updating every day. I would like to thank every reader who voted for recommendations and monthly votes. If it were not for your support, it would be really difficult to persevere. After all, every time I see a comment saying that what I wrote is shit, I feel uncomfortable all day long. I don't quite understand the mentality of such comments that directly criticize, at least I never criticize the author when reading a book. Rewrite a sentence said by Fu Hang to express my thoughts. If you think my writing is good, it is the benefit I give you. If you think my writing is bad, it is your punishment. But I'm sorry, this is the book I wrote. Third, regarding the subject matter and further content additions This is not a pornographic article. And I didn't throw away the settings all over the place. All settings are induced by the plot. The following is the content supplement: Chapter 1-13, the first plot, starts with the contract of the saint, and the first step is to reveal the world view. Chapter 14-25, the second plot, supplements the surroundings and transition of the Far North City. Chapter 26-38, the plot of the Gore family, here has hinted at the truth about the saint and introduced new characters. Chapter 39-49, enter the plot of the trial. 50—55 transition paving the way. 56 Up to the climax now, the mystery is revealed step by step. Fourth, think of adding more… First edited on 2024.1126

Let me complain a little bit: this description is much better than the sadistic and dark novels of 5 years ago, but the depression in the early stage is a bit too much for today's era where relaxation and tension are the mainstays of thinking and living. I can't even bring the protagonist in, but the scene can be simulated. From personal experience, under normal circumstances, the author either makes a big splash or holds back a big joke (well, when I wrote this review, I only saw Chapter 7) But some of the atmosphere in the article is too strong. To give an analogy to the author, if you create so many Riddlers in the early stage, and then don't fill them in a little bit as soon as possible, with your depressing style in the early stage, you can directly persuade a wave of people to leave, for example, You went to draw pictures for others and were taken away by knights. In this paragraph, when others read the title and introduction of your book, the article suddenly described being blinded by someone and using a knight's sword. There is no reason. It was repeated twice. Are you sure that you are blind and you are blinded by others? There is no overreaction in the body? You are either asking us to take on the role of the protagonist, or you are asking us to imagine how awesome the protagonist is at this time. (Would you like to try it yourself, put a sharp object close to the eyeball, and then stop it for a while? Do you think you have the courage to plunge it in?) The protagonist is still a time traveler, which means that the protagonist was an ordinary person before time travel, and his body was originally blind. Well, the body, then the soul was gone, and the protagonist was replaced. It was amazing that the previous memories were not lost in the Western fantasy world. Let's not mention how a blind man could understand the knowledge in the alchemy book. For a blind man who finally gained the light, when he was about to lose the light, the body did not have any instinctive stress response, so how powerful is the mental power of this time traveler. (For ordinary people, the premise is that you didn't dig a hole for me in front) Then let's talk about the issue of saints. In a poor and backward place where people's lives are like grass, faith organizations like the church can no longer survive. At this time, a saint comes and brings wealth. This saint has never shown her true face in any public place. Even the maid who changes her clothes has never seen her face, but she has a strong influence. The city is divided into two districts, one is the east district and the other is the west district. The east district has become relatively stable under the influence of the church where the saint is located. The west district is, as far as Chapter 7 is concerned, it feels like looking at a garbage dump, the site of the original Church of Death, and at this time it is said that the saint was born in this garbage dump.         ，，，，，，，，，？ I have read seven chapters, but I feel that this book has a level two of its own and is a bit niche (I put the book in my bookshelf and will read it for you every day until you finish it) {"NickName":"lylexub","UserId":445063063}

I don't think it's good to close your eyes. Wouldn't it be better to just write that the eyes are pale and unfocused? A blind person must have the same state as a blind person.

It looks unclear, a lot of settings and cover-ups are rushing towards me, everyone is a Riddler, I feel dizzy and confused, as if I have watched dozens of missing plot synopses.

The protagonist is a real person, someone else paid for it, and the protagonist sacrificed the person 🙂🙂🙂🙂 (This woman asked the protagonist to paint, and paid for it, and the protagonist sacrificed the person in order to improve his painting skills.)

1. The beginning is very discouraging, this world is not a positive thing. 2. The rhythm of the plot is very strange, and there is an excessive sense of tension despite the lack of a main line. 3. The combat power setting and character setting are both the shadow of Western Fantasy 4. If you search carefully, you can still find the main line, and then throw out many branch lines and foreshadowings in the main line 5. The author's secondary aura is full. 6. The protagonist has no lofty ideals and no positive energy, and there is no sense of relaxation in the early stage. If you want to introduce the protagonist, I suggest you change the book. 7. Summary: If you have the patience, you can try reading 50 chapters or about 60,000 words. It may become more interesting to read later.

It's so crazy. There is too little information. It's very depressing. It smells like I want to be. It feels like I will die in the next second.

I really tried to persuade you to quit at the beginning, emm

Taking money and killing people, if such a protagonist can get angry at Qidian, Qidian will really have no books.

It's a long and stinky introduction. The two paragraphs before and after are obviously completely unrelated, but you insist on putting them all.

It's too messy, there are too many extraneous things, which affects the look and feel.

The name of this novel and the content of the novel are completely different styles. They are a scam. The title of this novel is obviously meant to be light-hearted, but it turns out to be so depressing.

All for you, well written

So far, except for a few pictures, they are all good, and I really like the latest chapter.

As long as you keep updating, I will do anything. 😌

I personally think this article is very good, but there are a few people who haven't read the article and are posting in the discussion forum. The article has an obvious Western fantasy style and a strong sense of epicness. It is considered to be more than just food and grass. The disadvantage is that it picks people and has many characters. It may not be friendly to some readers who cannot remember the names of the people and the previous articles. This is a common problem in Western fantasy. I think this book is worth reading. Anyway, I voted, and I hope the author will write better and better in the future.

Writing a book can't happen overnight. Maybe you should try to finish it, which will gain more. Cutting off halfway will not only lose readers, but also mean that the world you constructed in your mind, these inspirations, are invalid. Work hard for the next book. If you are afraid of doing something, you are self-defeating. Go ahead and write it boldly.

The title and introduction of this book are like Cyber ​​Fraud, and it looks like a light novel, but it is completely different. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good. The content is also wonderful. This is a very good novel.

If only 1/3 of the article could be as easy as the introduction, I wouldn't have died violently.

Please report it quickly. It makes me sick and uncomfortable.