A Brave Man Can Live Without Living, but He Cannot Live Without Living.

Depressed, the protagonist is really awkward

Reading feels like milking a cow. Only a little bit of milking makes me feel so uncomfortable that I want to suck it. If I don't update, I'll milk you (tag1). Your milking. Your milking. Your milking. Your milking. Your milking. Your milking. (Goto tag1)

I forgot about the plot and re-watched it to catch up to the latest. I believe he has an outline. The plot related to the ex-girlfriend is not written in one go. There are foreshadowings not long after the beginning, including the jewelry store. There are so many foreshadowings that it seems to be buried and buried randomly. However, it is quite refreshing to read it in one breath and feel that it can be connected together. It really gives you the feeling of writing Xiaogao's fragmented narrative. The stitching is complicated but unexpectedly rigorous, and the emotional line is better than that of the first episode. This week's episode has no beginning and no end. I remember a lot of people scolded me for the part where Amamiya Yui was drunk, but it seems that the goddess matched up with Xia Bao'er. Laosha is really cruel. He seems to have deleted all the spoiler comments about the chapter "Love is Like the Rain Only". Don't want to subscribe? This book is a masterpiece when it is finished, but the prerequisite is that it can be finished. Question it first, then question it, and then question it again.

As a reader of Dragon Clan, I have already stood at the top of the contempt chain of online novels (dog head saves life) Personally, I actually like the more relaxed novels, just like I particularly like Dragon Clan, and I am interested in his fighting scenes and conspiracies. I can only say that I am more interested in them. What really makes me addicted is the delicate emotional descriptions, such as the beginning of Dragon One, the beginning of Dragon Two, the beginning of Dragon Three, and the part about the real lady in Dragon Three. Having said so much, I actually want to express that the character creation of this book is actually very successful, but it is a bit thin. I think the main reason should be attributed to too little writing. It is recommended to update every day. Of course, I have seen other people say that the author has eunuch cases, and it seems that he has been eunuch many times. And from the perspective of some readers, some of the content in it seems to be a continuation of the world view of the previous books. So I hope that after so many stories, the world of this book can be unprecedentedly perfected, and the emotions of the protagonist can be more delicate. Now, the plot settings are relatively novel and good, and the proportions are also good. However, the portrayal of the protagonist is relatively thin, that is, the personal image of the protagonist is not that prominent. Of course, it may also be because of the early stage that the protagonist is relatively weak. Then, the eldest male supporting actor, I forgot his name (Western names are too hard to remember). He feels that his personality is quite strong. Of course, this is not a shortcoming. What I mean is that the protagonist also has a considerable personality. We can accept the protagonist growing up slowly, just like the protagonist now. I hope to see the protagonist become more and more perfect little by little, and there is nothing left to say. But if the book reaches three or four hundred chapters and the protagonist is still like this, then the portrayal of the protagonist will appear quite weak. Of course, the world of novels is actually more of the author's world. We are just spectators. I hope to see what I want to see, but the author also has things that the author wants to write. I hereby implore the author to combine my views I have been following this book. If I don't have any support, I will just subscribe to one. Well, if I have a monthly pass, I will give it to you. If you can show a scene that shocks me, for example. In a grand escape to the sun, the gods acquiesce to the Fool's objections. I will never be stingy with rewards (although there are not many dog ​​heads to save my life) Finally, if the author has any discussion group for this book, I hope you can send a group account, I would like to join In general, this book so far is a high-quality work. If you prefer this combination of Western magic and Japanese light novels, then this book is undoubtedly an excellent work worth choosing.

At present, I have been following it, and I haven't done much to support it. I am afraid that the author and eunuch will die. Maybe it's because this book has already been based on 5 books (or 4), and the world view should be very clear and clear. I personally also like this style of painting. As a senior dragon fan, although it feels weird, let's put it this way, if the author had written this novel in the 2000s, it would definitely be a dragon novel of the same track and level on Zhiyinmanke. Some people say that there are too many emotional scenes in it, which is inexplicable. I don't think so. Emotion is the basis for making a novel truly excellent. It sounds weird to say that male videos are not romance, but they are not conflicting, and this book is not romance either. But there is only one requirement for the author's history of eunuchs, no eunuchs. I really like it and I have already voted for all the monthly votes, but as a student party, I am relatively poor, so I tried my best anyway Every book friend, please vote more, otherwise the author will commit suicide again.

The story is good, but there are too many old jokes that make it feel watery.

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The writing is very good, a rare masterpiece. If you want to fully catch the airwaves, you may need to surf a lot. There are a lot of bad jokes. Updating is like squeezing toothpaste, but on the bright side, at least it has not been cut. It is full of bad things, the author, (Actually, I am a fan of Quin brother for 10 years, rua, (Can you delete the other scenes and replace them all with Amamiya Nene,

In addition to the system, what other powerful features are there?

If you, the author, stop updating, I will give you a copper wire! No kidding meow!

We won't rush you anymore, just write it down, come on 🙂

To be honest, I'm quite disgusted with the idea of ​​summoning heroes from another world to save the world. The human brave has no sense of identity with the natives of the alien world; the second is that they are probably not the same species, they just have the shape of a human; the third probability is that they will not be able to go back; the fourth probability is that they will be killed. Why should people help you, a native from another world? I will gain the strength to find a way to lift the restrictions, and in the end I will transform from the Demon King VS the "Human" Kingdom into a three-way chaos. It would be best if I could kill the group of BYDs who caused me to fall into another world, and then turn this world into my back garden.

The attitude of the demons is also rubbish, the humans obviously have problems, and the gods are all problems. In this case, just kill them all.

After reading three chapters, the writing is high-quality, the fantasy is beautiful, the pace is tight, the style is humorous and interesting, and then a few more chapters of the flowing fantasy light novel will create new glory. Until about 20%, you can say that the plot is crawling like a zone, and the amount of information is often explosive. It can be said that the group portrait is completely polluted by the funny protagonist, and the first-person perspective is very unrestrained. It can be said to be a refreshing novel or a light-hearted comedy, but the twisting energy and the ingenuity of the literary youth that appear and disappear cannot be ignored. Infernal Affairs is all about trance because of the arcane magic sequences. Hundreds of thousands of foreshadowings are laid in anger, myths, sects, arcane sequences, political warfare, infrastructure, farming, campus love, time travel, fate system, group time travel are all written down, and the gods scratch their heads after reading them. There is a serious sense of dislocation, one end is holding a piece of bread and hitting JK, and the other one is facing the secrets of the world; just now, his life is hanging by a thread, he is playing the piano with his backhand, engaging in art and solving problems; on one side, Chu Zihang leads the way and Mingfei sings a double act, while on the other side, the industrial revolution sheep eats people. I can feel that the outline is very hard, not confusing at all, and it can be covered by the excellent writing and the riddler. It is indeed lively and refreshing, but it is a pity that there are always dark clouds floating over great buildings. Let us hope that they will remain standing.

It's very good to watch, and it has the feel of watching Crazy Lich back in the day, but one thing that's not as enjoyable as Crazy Lich is that the plots of the female protagonists are really screwed up, and the male protagonists made me laugh while they were reluctant to accept it, and they were full of love words. In fact, twisting is not a problem. The problem is that the writing is slow, which made me stop twisting after reading it in one breath. I feel that this book is on par with the Quadruple Split next door. I have been reading that book for 56 years. I can just keep writing this one.

When I open it every day, I see either a lot of descriptions of the environment or a bunch of dialogues with unclear meanings. The main plot is something I don't want to push at all. Even if you write about your interactions with women like before, I would still be happy to read it. It was promised that I would start double updates in May, but it's fart. It's already July, and now I'm still struggling to write 4,000 words a day without any content at all. I thought this book was well written after I killed Lin. However, since I left the smell of booger, the whole plot was smelly and long. The only thing that kept me going was the emotional scene with Ning Ning. I really don't dare to think how boring the plot would be without Ning Ning. Really, instead of just messing around with each 4,000 words here, why not take some time off to think about what to write next. Originally, I would write less every day, and there are still a lot of things with unclear meanings in it. Do you think it is foreshadowing? To be honest, I didn't see any foreshadowing. I really need to change it, otherwise the results of this book will really be like this Also, my cousin next door is also updating once a day. You can go and see what they write, how much content is in their first update, and how much content is in your first update.

Regardless of whether readers think the plot is good or bad, let me explain a few points first: 1. This book has an outline, an outline, an outline! This is the book I have been conceiving for the longest time. It took more than a month to optimize the details of the plot of the brave part. I suffered a lot in setting issues. There will be no deus ex machina plot this time, nor will there be conflicting plots. I will try my best to ensure that everything is "reasonable". 2. All descriptions are written only when I think they are helpful to the shaping or the plot. There are no meaningless plots. All chapters have detailed outlines before writing, and they are all progressing according to the imagined progress. Maybe occasionally I will add some plots when inspiration strikes, but I will not deliberately go overboard. If I get stuck, I will directly ask for leave, and will not write hard to catch up with updates. 3. Readers who have read to the back, please don't rush to the front to spoil the story, please! 4. There is no plot in this book that needs to be filled in before reading. All plots will be explained in this book. 5. I just thought of something but forgot about it.

After watching the climax of "Kill the Hero", I started to get into the daily routine. The story at the beginning is indeed watchable. The author no longer talks about his riddles, and the protagonist doesn't seem to be schizophrenic. To be precise, the first part is difficult to watch mainly because of the various riddles and the lack of character creation. Now and then this character will be filled with riddles and pass, and then which character will be filled with riddles. The author should have wanted to add some possibilities to each character in the early stage, but he started to fill in riddles before the characters were fully established, and then some bad jokes were narrated from the mouths of the natives. To be honest, as long as the author doesn't worry about the riddle, it would be much better to first establish the characters.

Xia Del

Why are all the light novels in Qidian written about harems? If they are too common, they are... Qidian keeps recommending these to me. Next time, can the author put a line in the introduction about harems? I only found out about the harem when I was halfway through. There were several previous books with the same theme. There was no sign at all. The emotional line was still slow to develop. By the time I found out, I had already seen it very far back.

I think this book is quite good, and the settings are also to my liking. Why do I get such poor results?

I pulled a big one, and the more I wrote, the less I wrote. I can predict the result of the eunuch who will have bad grades in Kawenga later.

Laosha, you have been a eunuch three times. To be honest, your trust level is too low. Alas...

I have been reading novels for sixteen years since I opened "The Peak of Martial Arts" when I was ten years old. During this period, I encountered almost all kinds of authors. There is a type of author that is the most depressing, that is, the kind mentioned in the title--authors who are spiritual, but prefer to end their works poorly, or even become eunuchs. The things written by these people are really interesting: some people can come up with unexpected ideas, and some people can use words to make people read interestingly even if they write very cliché content. Many novels are four to five million words long, and the stories they tell do not have any major problems, and the endings can be considered as smooth to collect all the main lines. But when I read it, I couldn't feel the author's soul and emotions at the time of creation at all. In a work of several million words, the content of the author's own soul is almost zero. However, the works written by authors with souls read completely different. Even if there are not many words, people can clearly feel the author's emotions and soul. Reading a book like this is like having a face-to-face conversation with the creator. This feeling is unmatched by those smooth works. But after so many years, I have found that among these spiritual authors, one after another likes to be a mess, or simply a eunuch. From the dancing "Tianjiao Wushuang", "Eternal Night King" in Yanyu Jiangnan, "Dark Blood Age" with the world in flames, to the "Amber Sword" that I came into contact with later, and then to "The Fist of Utopia" that is inescapable in hip-ragging literature. While these books are crazy "constipated", without exception, they like to publish various single chapters. As long as a book is good-looking but also unstable in updates and explanatory chapters appear frequently, the future of the book will become visibly bleak. Each of these individual chapters is full of sincerity, and the guarantees made become more beautiful every time. However, the more you adjust and the more you make a commitment, the easier it is for the book to end. In the final analysis, commitment itself has no effect, and the actions brought by commitment are the effect. Analyzing one's own state all day long and explaining the reasons for missing updates is nothing more than subconsciously avoiding solving problems. A hundred commitments are no more convincing than a double-digit streak in the past week. If you want to go uphill, there is no point in making decisions and making plans. Only by taking the first step can you improve your chances of improvement.

I feel like I'm going to be a eunuch again. You said you wrote Happy Harem so well, it's better and more stable, but you insist on being a literary youth. With such a big world view, you still write about bitterness, hatred, heavyness, and awkwardness. You can't write it, and then the eunuch is reincarnated. I think you just deceived everyone's money. You did take the money, but you can't satisfy everyone who wants to watch a relaxing and joyful relaxation. Please be a eunuch earlier, don't be disgusting and unfinished.

Don't hold back, it's because of this reason that I returned to the monthly vote list. I am still raising books. When will I finish drawing my sword and kick me? 🤭🤭

1. Your introduction was very long and disgusting, and I was persuaded to quit once before. 2. The first and second chapters feel like they were written by primary school students, and the male protagonist and the devil are both quite childish. It doesn't have much connection with the following content. At present, it seems that 3. The progress of the plot is a bit slow. It is more than 1.5 Million words and it is only sequence seven. Of course it is well written, but it just feels like it is deliberately suppressing the level. Except for these 3 points, everything else is good and to my liking. I hope the author will update more and be inspired, update hundreds of thousands a day, and earn a million a month😌😌

Why be so tolerant of authors with no credibility? The eunuch is not written once or twice, every time it is guaranteed, and I let myself go when I write it at the end. The previous book Brave Teammates is even crooked and has no edges at all. The title gimmick and the main line are not written, and only one line is written (reposted by screen b)

I hope not to spend too much time on the emotional line of the supporting characters. The amount of updates is already small enough, so I really don't want this aspect to crowd out the content.

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