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I couldn't stand it after reading more than ten chapters. The main body is a human-machine local male protagonist with weak emotions + an old man (a female CP player). After more than ten chapters, the author has thrown in countless main characters with distinctive characteristics, as well as background settings. However, the protagonist is a human-machine character, and there is not much interaction at all. Therefore, I can't remember anything I threw away. After reading more than ten chapters, I remember the original plot of Mercy, the number one female student in CG. The writing style is considered good for online articles, but there are some strange sentence breaks and extra ""s".

The "player" in it is a woman, which is not a big problem, but her character is too "feminine". As a result, people feel that this woman is really annoying. I haven't felt this uncomfortable even in Danmei. Put this aside, everything else is fine.

Is this article posted in the wrong place?

It is obviously a good light novel written in a light novel style, but it lacks the most important interaction with the heroine in a light novel, and there are not enough scenes where the protagonist's charm is highlighted, but it is not a group drama. . . . . So who is the target audience for this book? How do you keep people? It didn't feel as attractive to me as the previous book. Although it may be that my taste has changed in the past two or three years. I felt it was bland. There was something worth reading, but it wasn't enough. I have read more than a dozen chapters so far, can anyone tell me where to start which would be more interesting? Of course, the above are all personal feelings.

I read dozens of chapters. The protagonist is actually quite abstract, he just uses seriousness and stereotypes to imitate human beings. . . .

Let me go, the Bathing Goddess breaks the dimensional wall and takes over the book cover, the customized champion is in trouble😡

The biggest problem is that the emotional line is not developed. I wrote a lot of female characters, but they get along with the male characters no differently. I just wrote a little progress (drawing the coat of arms plot) and then cut it immediately. The transition chapter is filled with trivial things, which looks really boring. Maybe it's because I can't write it that I keep avoiding the emotional line. If I really can't write it, I can just write some ambiguous interactions. In fact, the most beautiful thing about the emotional line is the kind that seems to be there but not teasing, hey.

After reading this game for so long, I still find the author's writing angle very interesting. The dialogue between an indigenous protagonist (a reliable adult male) and a player who doesn't know much about the plot and only recognizes his wife (the unreliable bathing goddess Doge) slowly reveals the plot of the original game. It feels much more interesting than a time traveler with a script or system directly describing the script.

Is the name changed because Professor Li wants to pursue the harem line openly? (Error)

It's a bit literary but not a big problem (for the time being). At least it's much better than those people who click in and feel like they're spending money before they even see it on the shelves.        The narrative rhythm is slow and the writing is relatively detailed, but because the perspective is often not on Ritas (the protagonist), and when it is rare to turn the perspective back to Ritas (the protagonist), most of the text is an explanation of principles, Although this can enhance the sense of substitution and immersion, However, the space belonging to Litas (the protagonist) is not much, but it is also occupied by words that do not advance the plot. As a result, the proportion of the protagonist in the plot is much less than that of the group portraits, which aggravates my irritability. The reading experience after reading the whole article can only be said to be difficult to describe in one sentence. It is recommended to finish the book or read one volume at a time. . .

I heard that you are the author of The Weakest of the Four Heavenly Kings and The Cold-faced Earl, and I have read both books. The settings are rigorous and the writing is smooth. They are indeed good books. But other than that, after reading these two books, I have the same feeling. Your book is like a light novel, but it is too heavy to read and carries too many things. Not only did you work hard to write it, but so do the readers who read it. A suggestion here is that you should try writing 200 to 300+ chapters to end this story. If this story continues, let it be written as a trilogy. The world structure of the story you wrote is very large. It is a pity to end it after two or three hundred chapters. However, the world is too big, and it is easy to cause reading fatigue if it is always a visual description. It might be better to change the vision or 20 years later, and different protagonists or the original protagonist has a different mentality after growing up.

Everything else is good, but I feel like there is a little less interaction with the heroine. Writing a group portrait can also emphasize the role of the male protagonist and strengthen the interaction with the female protagonist. There is no need to make it look like he is not close to women. After all, this book looks like a light novel in every aspect.

I finished reading it in a few days. It is a good book that I gave up several times because of its name. It can be seen that the author is not a novice, and the world he created is very real, not a featureless Western fantasy setting. Now it seems that many of the seemingly unreasonable settings, including the Bathing Goddess, are purely goldfinger settings but also have reasons behind them, just like the "False Saint" I have seen before. As for the heroine, judging from Litas' setting, it is basically impossible to fall in love with a student or have a harem. Instead, a platonic spiritual exchange with the Bath Goddess is more suitable for him. I assert that in the end, either Litas will continue to maintain the current relationship with the Bath Goddess, or the Bath Goddess will come to Ritas' world. The book has also mentioned that the Bath Goddess spends more and more time in this world, and the villain obviously has a player coming in the flesh, so the chance of the Bath Goddess coming is not small.

The fourth volume is completely the adventure of the Bathing Goddess. This volume felt a bit interesting at first, but only Xiaoli appeared later, and the real male protagonist never appeared. Then, there is only one of the four fairy tale bosses in this volume. I don't dare to think how long it will take to write the next three bosses. Personally, I prefer watching plots with male protagonists. I'll give it a try when the real male protagonist appears.

In the early years, I was not opposed to multiple female protagonists, but in recent years, all harems or multiple female protagonists do not like one thing and are ambiguous about that at the same time. Even the main plot requires several women to be jealous to develop, and even a new one appears inexplicably in the middle and late stages of the book. Group portraits in the traditional sense, those with distinctive personalities and multiple female protagonists that have a beginning and an end, are almost extinct.

It smells like a light novel, and it should be written by Mao Zhan. Fortunately, the characters are well created, and all the holes that need to be dug and filled are well arranged, and there are no poisonous points. I hope it won't end unfinished and become a eunuch.

Is it a harem? It should be from the harem, right? It must be from the harem, right? There will be an emotional line unfolding

It feels worse than before(

To be honest, it is very difficult to prove this kind of original worldview and non-traveler novels at the starting point. There are many that are not considered poisonous at all on Mao. Com. If you click on the chapter review at the starting point, you will find that someone has been persuaded to leave. And the title of the book is too ancient. I am not a master. How dare I use this kind of title. I think "The Cold-faced Earl Doesn't Want to Trigger the Option" is quite good. It is obviously a good book. It would be a pity to bury it.

Like the title, please, please update it for the rest of your life, book lovers will do anything.

"The Bath Goddess has rushed onto the track!" "Saint Irene has also started to warm up!" "What do you mean a student-era semi-roommate named Phoebe pops up from the outer chapter?"

The parasitic female ghost who jumps up and down with all kinds of dancing faces is finally going to get gold coins, just like meow😋

Parasite jumped out and showed off his power for two chapters before being elbowed and crashed at the speed of light. He smiled.

Why are Cecilia and Mercy not the heroines? Author, please either stop the ambiguity or just reject it. This is really disgusting.

Damn it, the information gap between the protagonist and the villain is too big, and the protagonist's strength has not grown much, not to mention that the protagonist doesn't even have a good teammate around him. Can you believe that John of Litas has fought so many games, and his best teammate is Sophia. Although the Bath Goddess also played a lot of roles, they are basically all very deliberate author machine deifications, and there are more cases where they can't play a role.

Can anyone see the back and tell me who Mercy and Cecilia are as the heroines? If not, I will give up, or don't make too many female leads, and if there are too many female leads, don't leave out female leads, otherwise I won't be able to accept it.

After seeing the end of the college exchange meeting and advancing a few chapters in the Western Region, I felt so tired that I couldn't stand it anymore. I actually think the setting is pretty good, but I'm tired of reading a lot of setting explanations that are almost the same as those I haven't read, endless water dialogues, random descriptions of scenes, and nested clauses with lots of adjectives. Now that I see it, I want to watch the sugar-giving session. Even if the female students and the female characters are teased one after another, even if I flirt with each other, as long as there is candy, I feel that I can persevere. The visuals are really not suitable for online novels. Someone tell me what else is worth holding on to

For me personally, I cannot accept the situation where the male protagonist is surrounded by a bunch of women but only chooses one or none at all. Can anyone tell me the latest progress? Could he be a wooden man-shaped male protagonist? I think he is quite dull. Is there any female character who can touch his heart?

I thought Hate was going to turn into a ring grandpa, but it just exploded 🙂

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