Daluo Hunyuanxian

The previous book Journey to Eternal Life was also a eunuch and a bad ending!

Since your book "The Journey of Changsheng" is very good, I will add it to the bookshelf first, but you are a eunuch, so I will keep it for now and wait until you finish it before reading it 🙂

Ah, it's the indigenous protagonist, run!

There is no problem with the author's writing style, and the underlying logic design is also very good, but the plot is always unconsciously biased. The first book was okay at the beginning, but then it became a seeder. In this book, you little Karami who practices Qi, don't always focus on the characters of Jindan Yuanying. It is like writing an official novel about you, a clerk, and always describing the daily work of department and ministerial levels. Is it appropriate?

To be honest, the writing is okay, better than many novels from Qidian. , I hope the author will insist on writing more. I've finished reading The Journey of Everlasting Life, and now my writing has improved, but I can't stand the original system.

I've watched Journey to Longevity, but I didn't like the system flow of the second book. After reading this book, I feel that the author's writing style is more sophisticated.

It turned out to be an indigenous protagonist. After watching it for a long time, I didn't even know who the protagonist was. It didn't suit my eyes.

It's already been seventeen chapters and the protagonist hasn't cultivated to immortality yet 😡

I don't even have the time to say why.

The author's writing skills are not bad, and the plot is also okay. However, when I first started writing group portraits, I didn't know which one was the pig's foot. I felt that I had discouraged a lot of people, and it was a bit indifferent.

I still prefer the writing style of Chang Sheng Lu Xing, which seems frivolous compared to Lu Xing's. The author's writing always contains private information from time to time, which is too out of the ordinary.

At least the book you wrote is not for students. It is not verbose or childish. It is readable. You see, it has not been updated for a year, so hurry up and open a new book. No nonsense. I will wait to read it. I can support it with a few monthly votes.

This is too group portrait. Less than half of the entire book is devoted to the main character. The latest chapters have been devoted to that sect, and I can't stand it any longer. I fully subscribed to your last book. Even if it sucks later on, will this one be like the previous one and will suck after the second chapter of Incarnation? In the previous book, there was no need to go through the tribulation after becoming a god. The more I wrote, the better it became.

A rare masterpiece, much better than many great masters. I hope it will be more exciting in the future. Keep it up.

Writing about indigenous people can only be done by masters who have a fan base. Time Travel + Deep Blue is suitable for all authors

Stop writing and start the next one. The purpose of writing books is to make money. If you don't make money, just change another one and continue. Let them spray it.

Another bad book. Both books are bad!

I couldn't understand it after watching it for a long time. It was a mess with no main thread and it was very boring.

Are you feeling better? If it's better, update it soon. It's best to make up for what you owed before.

Your last book, Journey to Eternal Life, was so good, but it's a pity that it sucked! This new book is not as good as the last one!

Let's make a secondary post. Friends who need it can write it down. You can write down basic information, such as name, qualifications, cultivation, skills, weapons, and origin.