Long Life Journey

At a time when the Stallion Time Travel System and other intellectual-depressing rubbish are in vogue, this book is already hard to come by.

Now that I'm reading Five Hundred and Eighty-One, I don't know how to review books, but I also want to say something This book is different from the classic mortal flow. The classic mortal flow promotes character development through exquisite plot arrangements and clear plot conflicts. The protagonist obtains resources, exercises, and grows through big adventures. ; Although the main rhythm of this book is still that of a mortal, it is mainly bland and does not have a very strong plot conflict. It also adds a lot of plot backgrounds that are not centered on the protagonist. In this context, the protagonist struggles to improve himself as an ordinary cultivator; Although the book is mainly dull, the plot design of the outline so far is also exquisite. From the protagonist entering the sect, the protagonist is protected by the sect, and finally the sect is robbed, to after the elixir is formed, these are all related, there are foreshadowings, and there are foreshadowings of answers; It allows people to see the protagonist's step-by-step improvement and there is a logical basis for the follow-up. The development direction of the plot has also been arranged in advance, and the concept is quite reasonable. The protagonist Goldfinger is not very strong, and there are plot arrangements in the follow-up; the plot framework of the world of cultivation is also very mature; (it is in line with my understanding of the classical cultivation flow: one or two coincidences means you are lucky, but if there are too many coincidences, it is inevitable) ; But there are also many problems in this book. The details do not affect the viewing. The main problem is the plot and writing (the following contains spoilers); 1. The protagonist's family: it promotes the development of the plot, but it also drags down the development of the plot. The author needs to consider the scale of control; 2. The protagonist's Uncle Zhu: the protagonist's ancestor, the plot design is really good Yes, but the excessive details are not quite right. One is too stiff to die, and the other is too stiff to appear, not smooth enough (ordinary characters are okay, but the use of key plot characters needs to be more subtle); 3. Protagonist Lao Zongmen: When the protagonist leaves this point, the transition is also very stiff and not smooth enough. I spent a lot of space on the descriptions of other people in the past, but most of them were wasted later (either less space when writing it earlier, or reusing it later) 4. I think the biggest problem: the protagonist is promoted to a golden elixir. This plot arrangement is a bit weird (outrageous?), And other people give the resources to their hands. . . . 5. Big pacing problem: Although the main theme of the book is plain, I feel that some scenes are unnecessary and do not add points to the main theme. The control of this scale can only depend on the author; 6. Subsequent development of the plot: After the protagonist becomes a pill, I feel that some of the author's arrangements are messed up, and some scenes are relatively blunt; It feels like these problems are combined : The author's outline and plot arrangement, the general direction is okay, but some points are not perfect, which may be due to the author's lack of experience (the first book), or insufficient writing skills, and insufficient time for conception (not working full-time); In general, this is a very good novel about mortals cultivating immortals, written from another perspective, with different scenery, and it is worth reading!

It was really awkward to watch, everything was Zhang Shiping, Zhang Shiping looked at it, Zhang Shiping stood up, Zhang Shiping..., Haha

There are very few immortality novels with a bit of "immortal" flavor. They are not like those popular family immortality novels nowadays. They are written like rural farmers' sudden wealth stories, full of local flavor.

Life is just a farewell party. Has the author recently realized this? Ha ha

After reading this book, although the previous plot is dull, I think the daily life of cultivating immortals is also like this. The focus of cultivating immortals is of course one's own cultivation and strength. There will definitely be killing on the way to practice, but it is appropriate to be stubborn in the early stages. (I quite approve of the protagonist of this book). The characters in this book are less mentally retarded, making it very comfortable to read. However, in the early stages of the novel, I actually really wanted to know why the protagonist didn't go to the vendor selling bronze lamps and investigate the real source (did I read less here?). This book is about mortals. The difficulty of writing about mortals is the psychological psychology of the people around them. I hope the author can build a better strength system in the future (can directly learn from the same genre, such as Mortals Cultivation to Immortality), and can also appropriately describe the psychology or background of the characters in the plot to increase the thickness of the characters.

Qin Feng looks like a madman. How could the author create such a madman? Haha, I guess Qin Feng is a manifestation of the author's dark side.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, it was too bland, watery and tasteless. The writing style is average, the IQ is relatively high, and the whole text has no ups and downs. It can be regarded as a running account with a relatively clear narrative. There are only a few fights, which are not exciting at all. This is the simplest and most boring foundation building among the many immortal cultivation novels I have read. Didn't you buy the Talisman Golden Dragon Scissors? At least use it to create a wonderful twist.

Has anyone read this book? It has been updated.

Let's get straight to the point. Readers who want to read mindless cool stories or stallion stories can leave now. The protagonist is an ordinary monk from a small family who comes to practice in the sect. He is filial, nostalgic, and has relatively sincere Taoist friends. However, he is definitely not a good person, and his qualifications are neither bad nor good. Goldfinger is to make his qualifications better, which is almost the worst protagonist. The protagonist will not be resented for no reason, because the supporting character has a brain and knows who is right and who is wrong based on emotion and reason. The protagonist will not suddenly appear on the road and ask for protection, because there is no bloody routine in this book. If there is, the protagonist will definitely not care if he does not know her, and will not understand this person. If he does, the protagonist will definitely balance the gains and losses before deciding whether to protect him. To put it bluntly, the protagonist is just a supporting character in Long Aotian's novel. There is nothing wrong with him, and there is nothing poisonous about him. The plot is very bland, very bland, because there are no crazy tricks like the ones mentioned above, and there are not many opportunities. Basically, you follow the sect and do whatever the sect asks you to do. There are some close friends, not many enemies, and most of them have hatred. It was solved on the spot, so there was no need for such a disgusting plot to arise in the middle. There was no intrigue within the sect. Few people were free to harm the protagonist, and there were no jealous disciples from the boss to steal the disciple's things overtly or covertly. However, the protagonist has always been vigilant. After all, it is necessary to guard against others. There are also some cool points. As the cultivation level increases, the existence of the protagonist himself is a kind of fun point. After the foundation building period, there will be very few bullshit and aggrieved plots like being scolded by the Golden Core Nascent Soul and being crushed. If the Golden Core Nascent Soul does not exist, it is worse than the dogs Yuanying walking around. Within the sect, there is no reason for no crime, and the Foundation Establishment monks cannot be killed casually by the Golden Core monks! Overall, it is recommended to read this novel with a relatively peaceful mind, and you will feel a different artistic conception. Looking at it, after finishing the book, I realized that I had read so much. It may be that the author's writing skills were not strong enough in the first book, and the "fairy" feeling was not obvious enough, but it is definitely there! Most of the articles on cultivating immortals do not have the feeling of immortality. They are just a running account of upgrading and fighting monsters. I am a fan of dark novels without a heroine. This book does not have a heroine yet, and it is not considered dark, but I felt very comfortable reading it. I even wanted the protagonist to find a wife and have a bunch of babies, just because it was written in my heart. In this society where demons are dancing around, everyone is busy for life and running for survival. After having a luxurious leisure time, you might as well relax and read this novel. There is not much intrigue, but there are many exciting places. Zhang Shiping is not the top genius in the world of cultivation, nor is he the worst ant. You and I do not belong to the upper class, but it is not impossible to have enough food, clothing, drive a car, and marry a wife. Zhang Shiping (we) worked hard for cultivation (survival), but we had to take time and experience to take care of his family (parents). However, the family (parents) were reluctant to make Zhang Shiping (us) suffer and tired, and they felt distressed. Recommend readers who like this type to take a look😁😁😁

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One day Zhang Shiping met Han Li: Zhang Shiping: Hello, my name is Zhang Shiping Han Li: Hello, my name is Han Li Zhang Shiping: I come from a small family, and my family is very poor Han Li: I come from a farmer, and my family is very poor Zhang Shiping: I My father's connections sent me to the Zhengyang Sect Han Li: My fourth uncle's connections sent me to the Qixuan Sect Zhang Shiping: I picked up a mysterious green lantern, which can speed up my cultivation Han Li: I picked up a mysterious green bottle, which can speed up ripening Zhang Shiping: Later The Zhengyang Sect was attacked, and the Patriarch took everyone away Han Li: Later, the Qixuan Sect was attacked, and I rescued them Zhang Shiping: The Zhengyang Sect was nowhere to be found, so I joined the Xuanyuan Sect again Han Li: Although I saved the Qixuan Sect, I still ran away. , And then voted for Huang Maple Valley Zhang Shiping: I am good at alchemy Han Li: I am also good at alchemy, and I can also make talismans Zhang Shiping: During my alchemy stage, I always dealt with the Yuanying stage, and I was bullied by them Han Li: During my alchemy stage, I always dealt with the Yuanying stage. , Were also bullied by them, but I stole their treasures and ran away Zhang Shiping: ......... Han Li: I have wind and thunder wings, and I can run very fast Zhang Shiping: I have Kunpeng Feather Wind Escape Technique, and I can also run very fast Han Li: I There is a kind of strange fire called dry blue ice flame Zhang Shiping: I also have a kind of strange fire called black flame Han Li: I practice a body training method called Fansheng True Demon Kung Fu Zhang Shiping: I also practice a body training method called Wucai Glazed Body Han Li: I am six hundred Chapter 34: Giving birth Zhang Shiping: I am still in the Golden Core stage Han Li: I can escape from the hands of the late Yuanying stage in the early stage of Yuanying Zhang Shiping: I am still in the Golden Core stage Han Li: I can escape from the hands of the late Yuanying stage in the late Yuanying stage Zhang Shiping: I'm still in the golden elixir stage Han Li: I can escape from the hands of Lianxu by transforming into a god Zhang Shiping: I'm still in the golden elixir stage Han Li: I can escape from the Mahayana by combining my body Zhang Shiping: I'm still in the golden elixir stage Han Li:..........

Returning books are good books that are slow to update and are popular among mortals. What are the things that are written at the top of the rankings now? They are similar to the forced comedy-style routine novels of the Great Wei Scholars. Such works are very popular and have high monthly votes. What kind of taste do readers have now? Not many people read truly good books, and trashy novels are all at the top of the rankings. I am really speechless.

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I couldn't help but complain about it halfway through. I really don't know whether the author did it intentionally or unintentionally. He perfectly avoided all the cool points. He knew how to make elixirs but not refined them. He just learned a second-level tea elixir that the family had the raw materials for and then left. He didn't practice more to help the family. The monsters I raised were never used, and the effects of enchanting weapons with monster eggs were never described. The planting conditions were so good and I never wrote about my favorite part of farming. There were only a few battles in so many chapters, but the writing was not interesting at all. I didn't buy any good things at the auction house exchange meeting. I usually love my family so much that I didn't go home for so long and just immersed myself in practicing without saying goodbye to my family. As a result, I didn't see my mother for the last time. I never got any good results when I went out to explore and hunt for treasures. I also committed murders to seize treasures, and I became good friends with the people who killed each other. This is what I find very disgusting. Wouldn't it be better to write about a life-and-death friend who shares the same joys and sorrows together? It's been hundreds of chapters, and there's not even a small climax. Whenever I feel like the climax is coming, the author will cut it off right away, or is that it? The skills practiced by the protagonist really have no special features or power at all, and his temperament is average. He is either suspicious or irritable. He holds a first-level magic weapon used for Qi training and uses it until the middle stage of foundation building. He doesn't have the money to buy it, but he just doesn't buy it. It depends entirely on this. In the middle stage of foundation building, I was so frightened when I saw Lei Jie forming elixirs during foundation building. How will I be able to form elixirs in the future...

Long review of "The Road to Immortality", currently 75 chapters Advantages: 1. Mortal flow, I am more fond of this kind of novel recently, the indigenous protagonist has three spiritual roots, has a stable personality, practices hard, is relatively able, has few girls and women around him, is devoted to the Tao, during the Qi training period, the family wants to introduce marriage to the protagonist, but the protagonist refuses because he wants to concentrate on cultivation. 2. The golden finger is a lamp holder. Under the light, not only the spiritual energy is abundant, the cultivation speed is accelerated, but also it is helpful for the cultivation of exercises, wound healing, etc. The protagonist has always used it very cautiously, and his cultivation speed is equivalent to that of someone with Tianlinggen. 3. The protagonist has both parents. The family is warm and harmonious. There are many brothers and sisters. The protagonist is also very filial. It is rare that he does not have parents who worship God, and he does not have any cruel relatives and friends. (The protagonist's father went into seclusion and built the foundation by himself without the foundation-building pill. He almost thought he would be sacrificed by the author, but luckily the foundation-building was successful) Disadvantages: 1. I don't have high requirements for writing, as long as I can read it, this book is also the author's first book , I originally wanted to be more tolerant, but some things in the article are confusing and unclear, and some places are too martial arts and have no fairy spirit, which greatly affects the reading experience (the protagonist is building a foundation, facing the scornful doorman, grabbing his neck with his hand...). 2. The early stage of shaping the protagonist was really a failure. The author wanted to write about a child of a small family who joins a sect, half of the family and half of the sect, with a stable character. However, in the early stage, the protagonist is really like a mortal who accidentally stepped onto the path to immortality, and has gone through many pitfalls in cultivating immortality. 1. After leaving the market during the Qi training period, I was targeted by three casual cultivators. I suffered a big loss and ran away for two. When I returned home, I didn't say a word to my family who cared about me. It was as if nothing had happened. The next time I went to the market, there would be another problem. (Even if you don't want your mother to worry, you should at least tell Ji Zhu's father in private. After all, others want to kill you and the enemy is out there. Use the power of your family to investigate). 2. In the trial in the secret realm, he killed people and licked the bag, but he did not check the contents of the storage bag carefully after coming out. He was very careless. There was a tracking object in it. Later, he was quickly chased and surrounded by three people. Afterwards, the protagonist reflected and went to the sect to check information, only to learn that there might be something to track and check it out. (Don't your family tell your children about such an important thing?) 3. After passing the secret realm trial to obtain two foundation-building pills, normal people would build the foundation in the sect first, but the protagonist does not. With the huge sum of money from the two foundation-building pills, he hides I went to the market to repair the magic weapon and buy elixirs (can't you repair the magic weapons and buy elixirs in the sect? Besides, the sect is very stable, it's not too late to repair the magic weapons after you build the foundation). As a result, after leaving the market, they were chased and the protagonist was seriously injured, which almost ended the story. (If there is a fanfic, this is the best time to kill the protagonist. Not only can you easily get two foundation-building pills, but you can also get the protagonist's golden finger.) 4. The protagonist needs a fire demon to practice the technique. This technique is emphasized, but the protagonist is stubborn, so he has to try how he will practice without the fire demon. As a result, he is injured and needs to rest for a week. (Didn't your family tell you not to practice without permission? Are you a mortal who has just stepped into the path of immortality? You have already established a foundation, and you still make this mistake. The protagonist of this chapter is too stupid. Deleting it will not affect the subsequent chapters at all)

Your first book has no fan base. This achievement is already the envy of many authors! One bite can't eat a fat man. Is it because you are slow in updating, slow in pace, and making excuses for poor grades? Then your new book won't have any good results. Wrong payment, goodbye

See chapter fifty. Let me talk about the conclusion first. Bai Qie is not very happy, but it can be watched. From the current perspective, he is a mortal, comes from an aboriginal cultivating family, and has three spiritual roots at the beginning. He is not a waste material and fake spiritual roots. Based on this, you can continue reading. After entering the sect, there is no need to make things difficult or pretend to be in the face. Although the plot is dull, the protagonist has no highlight moments, and it is not exciting, but after all, it is a mortal stream, this is still okay, and you can still watch it. The appeal is a positive review, and the following is a neutral review. The protagonist's golden finger is obtained after the first three chapters. It can currently speed up the practice and repair the physical body and soul. This type of cheating, coupled with the protagonist's neither reckless nor meticulous character, will create a very embarrassing situation, that is, his level has gone up, but his combat effectiveness cannot keep up, and he will appear more passive. The article describes in detail the four times the protagonist left the sect before establishing his foundation. Except for one time when he followed the sect to the secret realm, the remaining three times he encountered problems. It can be said that every time he went out, he was unlucky. The first time he relied on the protagonist's halo, otherwise he would have died in Chapter 20. (It can only be said here that the author specializes in reporting worries instead of good news. He is embarrassed to write if he encounters no trouble when he goes out) And there is no benefit from this encounter, and nothing good is gained. The biggest benefit is probably combat experience. Then there is the upgrade speed of the protagonist. After eight years of training, he reached the fourth level of Qi training. After getting the golden finger, it took six years to reach the ninth level of Qi training. You can say that it is cool, but it is not bad, but the protagonist is not a waste. Without the golden finger, it would have taken more than ten years, and he would not be unable to rise to the level. And the plot seems very bland, there is no sense of ups and downs, and there is no sense of satisfaction that the protagonist gains something or improves after encountering danger. It can only be said after a plot is over, oh, there is no room for aftertaste. In general, I am taking the mid-level route. It is not a genius or a cool article template with big tricks, nor is it a real rise from the bottom to fight for life. I recommend that friends who want to watch it give it a try, maybe they will fall in love with it.

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15 15 ？ Not closed for a long time? Even if you don't let the golden elixir take care of it like a mortal, it's okay to let the five Nascent Souls take turns once every 100 years. This secret realm can be entered from Qi training to Nascent Soul. Is it to collect medicine or to reduce the number of people? The collection of medicine can completely make the Nascent Soul pick up a wave, and the remaining ones that are not suitable for outside growth. The golden elixirs of several sects come in together regularly. If it is to train the disciples to moderately reduce the number of people, you did not write down the atmosphere. The sense of urgency is inexplicable After reading 80 chapters, everything is natural and a matter of course. If you have followed the updates of mortals, you should know that one of the great charms of mortals is the unexpected. The bizarre and reasonable design that is often forgotten is amazing. You look like a kindergarten composition. Chronicle And there are also the sect, the family, and the protagonist. As a result, the three are not written well. It is far-fetched to have any connection. Besides, the character of the protagonist is, to put it bluntly, the Phoenix man in a small family. He does not follow principles and does not know the methods of his family. He is not used to some things in the world and insists on taking care of them. But when encountering hostility, he kills indiscriminately. It is too binary, black and white, like the mortal Senior Brother Liu. What is the end of this kind of person? Mortal writes very clearly You think about this and that, you don't know the choice, you don't even live to understand how to write a good book This protagonist has no motivation, no obsession, no ambition, no Taoist companion, no love and hatred. If you have to say that there is, it is just dragging the family, like a weed, it is growing blindly. Pulling the family is contrary to the spiritual core of the mortal flow. I watched the mortal when I was 14/5 years old. I gave up the book immediately after seeing that I don't care about my parents, but I'll read it again on 18/9. After more experience, I think it's very reasonable. In fact, if you give some things to the family in moderation, you can withdraw it. Your family can't give you any benefits. It's completely blood-sucking. The reader's sense is very poor. It's like a bug in the rice. It comes out after a while and makes people sick and disgusting. It loses appetite Originally, this book is more enjoyable and not dense. It's a mortal flow novel, written to 80 chapters, like a farming novel, Dong Yi Bangzi Xiyi Hammer has no explanation. I earned 10 gold coins here today and 10 gold coins there tomorrow. There is no qualitative change in the point of enjoyment. The protagonist is in the foundation building stage. He doesn't have any skills, skills, spiritual pets, or magic weapons that can be used in fights. It's so real. I spent a lot of time to buy that rich treasure and wasted several chapters. Then I just killed a path-cutting thief and used it casually? What I read is really disgusting. It's not big, it's not thrilling, it's not tough. In fact, I'm really annoyed by novels that scream and suddenly trigger enlightenment. But you're like a bowl of white water without coriander. I don't hate it, but I really have no appetite. Can you give me a little more? Even if I add mustard, Han Li still has some top-notch materials in his hand, such as magic weapon fragments. Although he won't need it for a while, at least it's valuable. It's like a level 60 epic. I'm not at the right level for the time being, so I can't use it. But I still have a few pieces of loose powder and small purple outfits on me. I'm at least in the middle and upper reaches of the same level. You, the protagonist, have a backpack of white equipment. Switching from level 10 white equipment to level 20 white equipment is boring to the extreme. It takes a lot of effort to practice Qi. I even doubt whether you can be killed by one move in the same realm as the foundation building stage. And you're not close to women. You don't even have ambiguity, and your early combat power is not good. Why don't you make some ambiguity? You are usually stupid and talk to yourself. When you meet a woman, your wholehearted energy comes out. The description of supporting roles is too poor, especially the female supporting role. The only one who has an impression of me so far is the fat man Jin Dan. The old man Cha is half of it (he wrote it but his writing skills are not good. He has no free and easy energy, but feels pretentious) A Qi training and foundation building will bring a qualitative change. People can't help but ask Yang Yang. Those Nascent Souls, what is the method of incarnation? Your Qi training to foundation building is like increasing your combat power from 100 to 101. There is no qualitative change at all. I feel that the Nascent Souls here are not as powerful and mysterious as the officials in the mortal world. Although you keep mentioning it, that kind of immortal Qi that separates the world from the immortal and the chasm of the sky. I really can't write it down. I just thought of a joke, filled with the words "laugh", but I really can't laugh. I can still tolerate this problem: combat design. The battle has no sense of immersion, is incomprehensible, has no focus, and has no setting. I care more about the plot. I don't have high requirements for this. But you, who makes me want to complain, use real language and strong writing. I really want to persuade you to quit The golden finger problem, there is no back investigation, I don't even have an idea, I feel comfortable using it, and I don't explore such an artifact. I just tried it to see if it can be recognized as the owner. I don't care anymore. This level of caution, I think it is reasonable and reasonable if someone slaps me to death The mortal flow must learn from the mortals. The question is whether it can be borrowed well. Don't change the advantages and just inherit the clichés I haven't read a novel seriously for several years, and I prefer mortal flow, but I haven't seen a good one. I read this book again. When I first read it, I still saw a lot of advantages. For example, it doesn't set restrictions arbitrarily like other systems such as cultivating immortals, which makes the world appear mysterious and majestic. It also occasionally brings in a few worldly things or human feelings. It still has some connotation, but it is not profound or tragic. As a result, the protagonist has always been like a stupid teenager. These two points are the advantages of this book. Write well and think about what you want to write. A good book must be unique. No book can cater to everyone's appetite. Gods are made because of moderation. You can't have your cake and eat it too. If you really want to write, when your writing skills are good, just use supporting characters or illusions. The tone can't be messed up.

Chapter 4: Qi training at the beginning Chapter 50: Foundation building Chapter 300: Pill formation Although the writing is average at the beginning, the mark that the author has carefully refined will make people feel that the author is very careful. Although it is very watery, it is still smooth, and at least the foundation building is very fast. But after foundation building, it was too watery. I had to mix everything with various cultivation skills. The sect did not teach me, so I started grinding slowly from the beginning. I bought a magic weapon from the market and could write three chapters. I wrote one chapter for homesickness. I wrote one chapter for locusts hatched. I bought a chapter for formations. I got a chapter at a discount. I learned another chapter for setting up the foundation. Seeing that the fourth chapter of foundation building really didn't say anything, I just skipped the knotting elixir. The protagonist of this article feels to me very much like a fellow passerby in other people's novels. He has no sense of existence and no ability. He just hangs around and his days pass. Maybe it's because I happened to skip the bloody battle of annihilation, and there were no exciting and intense battle scenes at all. There are no magical skills, no strange beasts and rare treasures, no life-and-death fights, just like a bowl of coffee mixed with water, which can refresh you but has no taste. Looking at the book review section, it is said that the writing power has greatly improved after forming the pill, but it is still useless at the moment.

I've read about dozens of chapters, and the plot is passable, but why do I feel that the protagonist is really weak? I don't ask you to leapfrog and kill people. Every time you fight with the same level, you are so reluctant, and you almost died from injuries a few times. You have good equipment, and you are still a member of a large sect. I really feel that this protagonist can be played by someone else in the sect. What are the characteristics of the protagonist, talent? Will? Mind? Or something else? It can't be that if you drip blood on that lamp and you can't identify its owner, then you'll never explore the lamp again.

Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book. The first part of this book is really mediocre. If it weren't for the simple language and the stupid plot of this book, I would have stopped reading it. I think the author has perfectly avoided many places that should be written in detail. For example, it is a metaphor for the protagonist to build a foundation and return to the family. I originally wanted to see how his brothers and sisters were happy, but the author just brushed it off without even saying a word to them. In the book, in addition to his father, the protagonist's mother and five brothers and sisters never spoke ten words to the protagonist until his death. The author did not spend any time describing the conversations between their relatives. Without the interaction between these relatives, I felt that the characters' emotions were not rich enough, and the protagonist's personality was also very thin. Of course, it is the first time for the author to write a book, so it is understandable that many of the previous parts are not well written. In my opinion, there is only one poisonous point in this book, and that is the protagonist's apprentice. The protagonist actually affects his cultivation for his apprentice, which I feel is very poisonous. Because the protagonist and his apprentice don't seem to have such a deep relationship at all. If it is to repay a favor, but the apprentice and the senior are not direct descendants, and the favor is not big enough to affect his own cultivation, if it is a direct descendant of a brother or sister that the protagonist values, then I can understand it, after all, the blood relationship is there. This book is a type of book that gets better and better the more you write it. Especially after Jin Dan becomes more and more beautiful, I like the way the powerful people in the book are powerful. It is not like some fairy tales where people who have lived for thousands of years are still fighting for loyalty like a middle school boy. The great powers in this book are my favorite. They will not fight over things that have no interests. They are all thoughtful and wily people. The layout of the book is also very large. Anyway, I just wanted to see the beauty of Northern Xinjiang, Western Desert, and the continent to the east.

The novel is very good. I don't want some invincible genres to rely on cheating, but this novel is very good. It relies more on myself, and the supporting characters have online IQs. The old monsters also fit the character. They are really scheming. I don't want some novels to lower their wits when meeting the protagonist and give them experience. The long and steady cultivation life in this book is more in line with reality. There are not so many adventures, which are important, but more of a long and lonely journey of cultivation. This book is more humane, comparable to ordinary people, and fascinating. It allows people to calm down and savor it slowly, rather than a fast food flow. I highly recommend it.

I hope the author will finish the chapter on the spiritual world, and don't end it early, otherwise I won't be able to read the book

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I read it through pirated copies, and I went to Qidian specifically to reward the author. How can I put it, it is indeed a very real novel, and it is quite special among the novels about cultivating immortals. As for other netizens who said that there are not many fighting scenes and not many climaxes, I think they are right. Because sometimes I do read some chapters that have little impact on the plot, and I will just glance at them. This is not to say that it is not good. Compared with ordinary people, Han Li started from building the foundation to the Nascent Soul, killing people and grabbing treasures on a daily basis in various new dungeons, with big climaxes and small climaxes, constantly improving his realm and strength, and your daily life in this book is closely linked to the sect family, but again It is not a traditional family cultivation, which will inevitably lead to the inability to obtain many climax points in personal cultivation and family cultivation. This has advantages and disadvantages. My suggestion is that if the outline style is like this, then don't make major changes, just study and add some climaxes. If after ascension, the family suggestions become weaker and more personal, then plan it carefully. PS. I personally think that the golden elixir is a bit easy. I hope Yuanying will not be anxious and just don't need a copy of Nanfeng Temple. I also like the author's poem very much. This is also the driving force behind my reward. Please improve it.

It doesn't look good, and the more I look at it, the more lonely and alone I feel. I don't even have a sister, I'm not single so miserable, I haven't even touched a woman, and the further I go, the emptier I feel.

The baby is finally about to be born. Let's take a bold guess as to whether the passage to the upper world will be restored due to the action of the demon soul and the transformed god.