Changsheng: I, Cao, Can See the Prompt.

It's a pity to throw away the food if it's tasteless. Nowadays, the fairy tales are really unreadable. Just like this book, it was a bit amazing at first, but then it became a sower and boring. At the beginning, he was cautious and sought resources, but later he became a mess, weak and helpless, but he didn't know it. All day long, I am self-righteous, calculating this and that, provoking this and that, and I don't know how to write the word "death". Writing all the way, waving all the way, and peeling an onion at the same time, layer upon layer of backgrounds, patches, and various personal items of the author mixed in. See the latest update, Transformation of God Tribulation, this chapter. I said, author, do you want to see for yourself what you have written? How can he involve so many specious top bosses just by becoming a god? Look who's there? Xuanji, Kunpeng! There are many more that I won't go into details one by one. It's the same sentence, it's just a way of becoming a god. Is it necessary to write it like this? Even if it's a big boss's fish, it shouldn't be so low, right? Gone, removed from shelves

There are too many edgy descriptions, from romance to sleazy... I think the plot is really okay, it would be better to lower the edging... I even doubt whether your book will be 🈲️... Think about it, if I really want to read edging, I might as well watch the young lady dancing, and there are novels that are not available on the Internet. I actually want to come here to watch a fun adventure A reviewer pointedly pointed out that no matter how good your writing is, if it is too obscene, it will look like a "diaosi"

It was quite amazing at first, lsp was ecstatic when I saw it. Until the protagonist joined the sect and was soul-searched, it was easy to see. Many of the opportunities the protagonist got were with the help of Goldfinger. Not to mention, the method of refining the gods obtained by the protagonist was incomprehensible without Goldfinger, but the sect knew everything through soul-searching. Then isn't the protagonist's golden finger already known? It doesn't matter if others find out, this golden finger will make even an immortal's heart flutter!

"Chinese New Year" is a new open-world adventure game independently developed by China. The game takes place in a fantasy world called the original family, where the selected person will be awarded a ticket to return to his hometown. You will play the mysterious role of the family shame. During the free travel, you will meet relatives with different personalities. Together with them, you will gradually discover the truth that you are in your twenties and do not have a girlfriend.

I'm really disappointed. I was attracted by the Cao thief at the beginning, but gradually started to feel disappointed later I just don't understand that there are so many pictures and there is not even a little bit of the protagonist's fighting plot! Then the protagonist entering the sect is a failure! Directly collect the soul to check the memory? After watching all the things that the protagonist and the women did, especially the men, it felt like they were being cheated on. It was so disgusting🤢 How could there be such a sect? Finally, what's the cool part? There are plug-ins, but their functions are limited. The protagonist has just acquired a base. Is the protagonist's enemy's family forming a pill? ? The protagonist immediately started feeling aggrieved! ! It's really hard to calm down. Han Paopao knows about changing his face and name. The protagonist doesn't know? After the foundation was applied, it was too thin. There were no techniques to improve escape skills, and I didn't know how to buy one! ? Don't you want to buy Feijian or Xiao Lingzhou? Don't you want to buy a one-time magic weapon? You only know how to engage in interpersonal relationships? ? Can you learn from Han Li? You are writing an article about cultivating immortals as an official article! I wrote some ideas before about how the protagonist and other spiritual roots have different cultivation speeds. The supporting characters all have brains, but they are too brainy, which makes them less enjoyable. Alas If you want to delete it, just delete it. Alas! In the world of cultivating immortals, one still relies on strength. If you only have realm but no fighting experience, you can't always rely on your strength.

Let me sum up why it was uncomfortable to watch. Others are decent people, writing about the rise of the grassroots, and geniuses hoeing the strong. The protagonist is a villain, hypocritical and suspicious. The author loves to show off in terms of food and clothing. However, the protagonist is of low strength. He is a cultivator of immortality, pretending to be and competing with mortals every day. .

According to the previous chapters, your book should focus on cultivating immortals and having fun, cultivating immortals, refining treasures, learning skills, and playing with women, but now it's off track.

I really can't stand it any longer. I thought the previous writing was pretty good, but I still wonder why such a good novel didn't become popular. I couldn't stand it when I saw that I had entered the sect. This kind of treasure that can check people's memories actually exists in the Nascent Soul Sect? It seems like it's still standard for every sect? Does the author really know how outrageous this thing is? In the setting of traditional mythology, after you die and enter the underworld, the underworld judge uses this treasure to remember your memory and sentence you. It can be said to be the only one in the world. As a result, the setting of this book can be found everywhere? What's more, the early stage of your novel seems to be all about the battle of wits. If you are exposed to this thing, you will instantly turn into a clown. No matter how clever you are, it will be useless. You are the most restrained person who follows the intelligence flow. What's more, your golden finger can only collect a little information. This thing can directly read all memories. Your golden finger is not worthy of carrying its shoes. It can be said that as soon as this thing appears, no matter how good your previous writing is and how wonderful the setting is, it will completely turn into garbage and become a clown! ! ! Another point is that if you want to write about a character like Cao Cao, don't just write about being astringent and suspicious. There are many such people. What's more important is Cao Cao's heroic spirit. Alas, I was so angry that I almost vomited blood in the middle of the night 😡

To be honest, the author, you said that you are not writing about underworld cultivators, but I feel that yours is actually more hierarchical than underworld cultivators. Except for mixed sects, it is basically difficult for casual cultivators to become big. Mixed sects are also difficult to join unless they have good qualifications or backgrounds. Especially in the entry test, when I read through my life experience before entry, I have basically been stripped bare. Look, cultivating immortals in the underworld is not so miserable. They don't leave any privacy at all. You have to ask questions to make sure you have no ill intentions towards the sect and are not spies of other sects. Then get a soul lamp and make a blood oath. That's about it. You made Han Tianzun have to kneel down when he brought the little green bottle to worship the sect in the early days of this world. Although casual cultivators have gained The chance of getting a heaven-defying opportunity is very small, but there should still be some less heaven-defying opportunities, which may have a very important effect on Jindan or Nascent Soul. Do you think this is to steal his opportunity? Although there are rules, they are meant to be broken. There are always people who do not follow the rules. There are only a few people who know that. Secrets that I personally know are not secrets. Author, your setting is really anti-human. It will basically dissuade a lot of readers. You just think of it as a soul search. Getting started in underworld cultivation is not so miserable. This is the only novel I have seen that requires reading all the memories before getting started. The author should change it, it will be much better.

Yuanying pretends to be silly and cute. I'm really tired of this kind of writing. Go ahead and write female videos, it's very promising

I like to see slightly yellow ones. But the world of immortality described by the author, from the Nascent Soul to the mortals, are basically all perverts. It's a bit unrealistic. . Writing too much would be obscene. The low-priced monks are okay. Those who have lived for hundreds or thousands of years and still look for women every day are not saying that there are no such things. It can only be said that those who can live for such a long time will get tired of eating too much abalone and seafood every day. The freshness of going to bed every day can last for hundreds or even thousands of years. It's a bit too exaggerated. .

Write the book "The Road to Eternal Life" well. That book is really good, but the update is unstable. It is a good book that needs to be studied slowly and calmly. I think if you write that book well, no matter whether it is popular or not, it will be able to bless you with a group of old fans. Good works need to be worked out slowly. It is not easier to become famous now than before. If you calm down and write the work well, gold will always shine. Don't be impatient.

I beg all the handsome guys and beauties not to keep reading. If you don't follow up, there will be no recommendation and exposure. Books are not fattening (／_＼).

The plot of asking Xinlu to read the memory of the protagonist is really thankless. Although the time traveler's information cannot be read, it also creates an unprecedented situation where even ancient treasures cannot be explored. The result is not good and the sect is too light to let it go without exploring. It is enough to complete a Haechi question and answer to prove that there are no different intentions. It must be the protagonist. I read the memory as if my clothes were stripped off, and I had to watch the short video of the protagonist and his wife and was criticized by others. I don't understand what the author is insisting on so stubbornly, and he doesn't necessarily insist on it for the sake of truth. The writing is so good, but when it feels comfortable, it suddenly stabs my heart. The stains in my life can be revealed for the rest of my life!

Even the remaining soul of Grandpa Yuanying is nothing in front of True Lord Yuanying. The question is that a True Lord of Hengsheng➕catalyzing the Divine Treasure cannot see through the details of a mere foundation building. Do you think this is reasonable? ?

It's been 16 years, but Han Tianzun, the moral standard of the male protagonist in a mortal novel, is actually in the top three and laughs to death. I don't know what the author's score is, but I can only say that your score is as funny as the hero's moral level.

I also thought that the ancient treasure of the Heart-Questioning Mirror was to test the mind, test the character, whether it harbors any ill will towards the sect, and so on. Unexpectedly, it was a direct soul search. I wanted to take off your underwear and reveal all your experiences from birth to now, including sleeping, shitting, killing, and opportunities. This doesn't mean I won't take away your opportunity, but I must know what opportunities you have.

The character design of the protagonist is very good in the early stage. He is self-interested and lustful. I get full marks from me. He is a poisonous sect no matter what. I saw someone recommending your book in a black bar. The sect part was criticized by everyone. The foundation building is also good. After the golden elixir, it is very messy. The author describes the level of the golden elixir and the Yuan Ying too high. His writing skills and ideas are not up to par. It is not at all refreshing. It looks very tiring. It is even more poisonous when he creates a clone. I don't write much about the harem. I have some thoughts from all book readers. I hope to keep up the good work in the next book.

Md, I don't know if it can be completed gradually, but I want to open a new book, but the new book is also too eunuch.

This is a book about cultivating immortals, but it is filled with a lot of PC and other plots, and it even exceeds the basics of cultivation. If we want to read pornographic articles, we can just search them directly. Why do we come to Qidian to read articles about cultivating immortals? It is normal for our grades to fail if we don't understand our position clearly.

(Fang Tang was 11 years old when the character Fang Tang was mentioned, and his wife Cao Shan was 9 years old. The official appearance was probably around the 12th year when the protagonist entered the Qingxia Sect, that is, the 246th year of Xiaguang, when Cao Wei just entered the late stage of foundation building. At this time, the original text said that Cao Shan had been a hairpin for one year, so Fang Tang was 19 years old. He was practicing in Yunzhan Mountain in the Qunzhen Spiritual Land, and his cultivation was just in the middle stage of Qi refining. When the character Lu Xiang was mentioned, the protagonist had just entered. The protagonist has just arrived in the Western Region for a few months. According to the text: "He has been a member of the sect for twenty-six years", it can be deduced that Lu Xiang appeared in the year 261 of Xiaguang, but there is only a description of a young man, and there is no specific age and cultivation level. In summary, a timetable is written) Cao Wei was born in the 200th year of Xiaguang. In the 234th year of Xiaguang, Cao Wei entered the clan. In the 237th year of Xiaguang, Fang Tang was born. In the 256th year of Xiaguang, Fang Tang married Cao Shan and was in the middle stage of Qi refining. In the 262nd year of Xiaguang, Fang Tang was twenty-five years old and went into seclusion to build the foundation. In the 265th year of Xiaguang, Fang Tang was twenty-eight years old and spent three years in seclusion on Yunzhan Mountain, finally completing the foundation. In the 261st year of Xiaguang, Lu Xiang appeared with five spiritual roots. In the 297th year of Xiaguang, Fang Tang was sixty years old and in the middle of foundation building. He encountered a spiritual obstacle and could not make any progress in his cultivation. Three hundred years after the glow of the sun, the ancestor of Wanhua took the stage. In the same year, Fang Tang was sixty-three years old and in the middle of foundation building. Cao Shan failed to build the foundation and died. In the fourth year of Wanhua, his lover died and he could not make any progress. Fang Tang could not suppress his decadence, abandoned tea and became addicted to alcohol. After several years of absurdity, he was discovered by Gongsun Chu. Fang Tang was sixty-seven years old at this time. In the same year, Fang Tang went to Youyun Daze to open up territory for the sect, hoping to shake the bottleneck in the fight. In the sixth year of Wanhua, Lu Xiang stole the Five Elements Spirit in order to form elixirs, and stole the Water Element Spirit from the Tortoiseshell Demon Water Mansion in Youyun Daze. The demon was furious and agreed with the New Qingyou Alliance to not dare to leave the cave. In order to trap the thief, he cut off the branches of the Qingyou River, and the river flowed backwards. Fang Tang was also trapped in it, and the two met for the first time. In the twenty-third year of Wanhua, Fang Tang was eighty-six years old and had never left Youyun Daze. During these seventeen years, he had no idea of ​​life and death, and finally reached the late stage of foundation building. In the twenty-fifth year of Wanhua, Fang Tang was eighty-eight years old. In the late stage of foundation building, he and his disciples from the same sect went to the Tie Kuang Sea area cleared by Yunfu Sect to practice. In the same year, Lu Xiang went to the newly opened Tie Kuang Sea in search of the last fire source inspiration, and the two met again. In the twenty-seventh year of Wanhua, Fang Tang was ninety years old. He followed the arrangement of his master Zuoqiu Zhenren and went to the outer realm for training. One month before he was sent to the outer realm, he bid farewell to Lu Xiang in front of the Tailing Mountains (Tiangang Disha Formation) in the Qingyou Great Wilderness. This is the third time the two have met. (I thought about it for a moment. If a monk with five spiritual root qualifications wants to form an elixir, for the sake of feasibility, I arranged for him to inherit the Nascent Soul casual cultivator, but the difficulty is also far higher than that of other monks, so I designed this bridge to steal the five elements of spiritual inspiration, so that he can face the five golden elixir realms during foundation building. This arrangement at least seems reasonable.)

Uh, boy. Later on, it was discontinued again, but it finally came to an end last time, although the ending was not very satisfactory. This time it's a direct eunuch. Even if I continue writing for a month and a half, it's okay to end this chapter.

It was clear that he was a time traveler at the beginning, but the natives who came out from the Cave Heaven Paradise were forced to fall sharply.

The author's writing style is very good, but there is a big problem with the plot design. There are often several chapters in which a few people are bickering, but the plot has no progress, or there are various long paragraphs that throw away the word count, and the readers have no desire to read it. Although the writing style of the author's last book was very green, at least the plot was compact and not as watery as this one, and the protagonist was more likable than this one.

In the blue sea of ​​the sect's blessed land, four or five spiritual mountains are floating as before. The jade disk-shaped moon seems to exist forever on the dome, and the long staircase to the sky that appeared when the blessed land opened has long since disappeared and is hidden in the void. In the shadow cast by a certain spiritual mountain, Master Wanhua was sitting cross-legged on a mini iceberg, writing something on the ice with great interest. "Junior brother is really in high spirits, what are you writing? Let me have a look." As the voice came, a burly man quietly appeared behind Wan Hua, with his hands behind his back, looking at Wan Hua's back with a smile. Master Wanhua just put his right index finger gently on the ice, and the seemingly solid ice melted, and small fonts were quickly formed. "It seems that the spirit corpse of the Protector has been lent to the two guys from the Dark Hall again. Is there anything that our dignified ancestor Xiaguang can't do?" Wanhua Zhenren didn't even turn his head, and kept writing in a hurry. As he finished the last word, he stroked his palm, and the fine words on the ice disappeared. Then he turned to look at the big man and said: "Did he recently discover the golden elixir spies planted by his sect, or is it a young man from some family who is inconvenient to take action, or is it something else?" "Seeing that you rarely praise others today, I will tell you that my ancestor will be going out in the near future. This time it is just a back-up plan for the stability of the sect." At this time, Zhenjun Xiaguang didn't have the usual airs of the so-called Yuanying elders in front of others. He climbed up the pole completely, looking happy and without any palace. Then he walked forward, sat cross-legged next to Master Wanhua with a smile, and put his hands on his shoulders. He didn't care about his contemptuous eyes at all, and looked along the iceberg towards the vast blue sea. "As expected of the true fire of the sun, the extremely yin energy that nourishes the Xuanyin corpse in the Nascent Soul Realm will not dissipate as long as it sits like this. It's no wonder that the junior brother is willing to lag behind in the integration of his own body, and even the connecting infant." "Hmph, who of us in this generation doesn't know your name as the Smiling Tiger? I'm afraid he might think of some plan to trap others. Just thinking about it makes me feel pity for him." (At this time, Tian Ai sneezed several times.) Without seeing any movement from Master Wanhua, one could see that the iceberg was shrinking and melting, gradually shrinking to the size of a boulder with the two people sitting cross-legged as the center. "Besides, there is no way to turn a baby into a god. The great sun spirit body is a secret method that can hope to transform into a god. With a star body, you can practice it during the pill formation stage. If you can reach that day, senior brother, you might also want to call me an ancestor." "You are so ambitious. When you were refining the Essence of the Great Sun, Master warned you to do this method after you have a baby. You can actually live longer by conceiving a baby, but you can only increase your life by more than a thousand years, and by transforming into a god, you can increase your life by more than four thousand years. I really doubt that the master has been angry with you all these years. It is a lie to not return to the sect to look for Jiu Ying's soul. It will be true when you, a disciple with a higher-minded spirit, burps." "You know what the heck, you are also a Nascent Soul who only got married at the end of his lifespan." The two brothers, who had known each other for six to seven hundred years, were like two angry old men. Their words gradually became more intense, but their voices were always confined within the scope of the iceberg and did not come out. As the two brothers quarreled with each other, the extremely yin energy that had shrunk into a boulder further melted, and the two stood up and floated on the sea. Watching this wisp of extremely yin energy that had escaped due to the spirit corpse of the imperial envoy protecting the sect, it sank back to the bottom of the sea and disappeared. Then the two of them raised their hands and saluted in the three directions of the seabed, showing their respect for the contributions made by the ancestors of the past generations to the Qingxia Sect. "Xingxian has been buried in the Zongmen Mausoleum Cemetery." "... Hmm" "By the way, these two are for you." After saying that, Wanhua stretched out his hand and took out a Tianxiao Bead and a Square Formation Diagram from his sleeve. With a shake of his palm, it turned into two spiritual lights and shot towards the glow. "The last Liusame Spirit Pearl and the formation diagram left by You Yin are here." I saw the two spiritual lights being put away by Xia Guang. Hearing this, he smiled and said: "Do you think I will blame Xingxian? I have said it a long time ago, as long as..." "You Yin was buried next to him." Before he finished speaking, Wanhua interrupted him. "What?" Before Xiaguang Zhenjun could react, Wanhua said again: "Okay, it's over now. The Qingxu Qi above the blue sea of ​​the blessed land has not been contaminated, and Lingshan has not been affected by it. The few little guys above who have just formed elixirs, Brother Qianxiu Wuhin, can rest assured. I am still anxious..." Before he could finish his words, Wanhua Zhenren waved his sleeves, turned into a purple light, and flew away from the blue sea. "... Teach Feiteng fishing skills." The man had turned into a small black dot on the horizon, and the remaining half of the sentence reached Zhenjun Xiaguang's ears. Perhaps it was because within the sect's blessed land, the two of them did not communicate with each other using spiritual thoughts, it was just normal conversations. Looking at the direction Wanhua left, Zhenjun Xiaguang, who had been smiling just now, stopped smiling and looked calm. After confirming that his junior brother had really left, he didn't rush to leave. Instead, he narrowed his eyes slightly and thought to himself: Yangfeng from the Western Region finally relented because of his great-great-granddaughter. This time he went out to get the water and fire essence. I don't know what junior brother Yan has a chance of success in facing the knot baby. I extinguished my thoughts and was about to take a look at the alchemy furnace on the top of the mountain when I suddenly thought of something again and looked again at the place where the iceberg appeared just now. I saw True Lord Xiaguang calling his hands forward, and a shadow of Pai Yao Wen's state of mind emerged. "I want to see what you were writing just now." After saying that, he reached out to the mirror, and saw that the ethereal and illusory mirror solidified immediately, and a picture from Wanhua's perspective emerged. Then this big man who usually smiled coldly snorted, and an iron rod appeared in his hand. He muttered something like: That Yan boy must ask me to give it to him, how do you know I can see it, how boring, let's see how much energy you can retain at the beginning, etc. A text from Bingmian: The disciple started to learn to read and write at the age of seven. At the age of twelve, he opened the meridians and acupuncture points of the human body and officially entered the spiritual practice. At the age of twenty, he was appreciated by True Lord Yunhai and entered the Qingxia Sect. At the age of twenty-four, he built the foundation and practiced "Small Wall Listening to the Wind"; at the age of sixty, he formed the elixir and cultivated quietly in the blessed land of the blue sea, and obtained the secret method of the Great Sun Spiritual Body; at the age of 211, he entered the late stage of the Golden elixir and realized that our monks should put immortality first, so he practiced the secret method of the Great Sun; at the age of 331, he has been a child till now. I feel a little bit, and I swear by the ancestors to protect the ancestors, so I leave this article here for future generations to learn from. Yan Yanqiu, a disciple of Yunhai generation of Qingxia Sect. (If God fails to fulfill one's wish, I sincerely ask my senior brother to use this as his epitaph to make a tombstone for his junior brother) ps: I would like to write this article to hope that Yan Yan can find the elixir to extend his life and take a step forward on the road to immortality. (Originally I thought it was too late for Master Yan to heal his injuries, and the birth of the baby failed in the end.) It would have been better if the contents of Master Wanxiang in chapters 246 and 247 were written before Wanhua gave birth to a baby.

They say that the book is almost finished, and there is only one last shudder left. What a loser of character, eunuch! Won't it be good to just tie it up and finish the book?

6. I thought it was over and I could read it with confidence. After reading dozens of chapters, I realized it was a eunuch...

Brother, why don't you write? The end of the year is coming soon, and you have written millions of words. Can you just start and finish?

If you want to continue reading, you can read Chapter 66 first.

You are a eunuch, you are too bad of character