Journey to the West: I Am the Dragon King

"Journey to the West: Become the Dragon King"? "The Glorious Years of Being a Dog in Heaven"!

Why does this novel feel... Childish?

1. Chinese mythology spans five thousand years, including official records, folklore, ancient compilations, etc. These myths are not coherent in the first place. For example, Erlang Shen and Yang Jian, Chang'e and the Lord of Taiyin, Thirty-six Transformations and Thirty-six Methods. Scholars of mythology studies will never make far-fetched correspondences between them. This is inconsistent with historical practice. However, in order to create a main line and background in the field of mythology online novels, they usually involve explanations from some angles and achieve coherence and unity. This approach is understandable and I agree with it. However, I hope you will never break away from online novels and promote these views everywhere. You will be criticized by mythology lovers. 2. There are three types of fan fiction for Journey to the West. One is about cultivating immortals (the character creation is the type of fantasy male protagonist, who is high-spirited despite suffering). The second is half-official and half-immortal (with some characteristics of secular officialdom, but still a fantasy male protagonist). The third type is the current book (the ultimate official relationship, Journey to the West is just the background, in order to climb higher, hatred can be put down at will, concepts can be switched at will, "entering the ministry" fills the brain)

The male protagonist tells the story of a centuries-old little demon who took revenge on the Seventh Fairy for pulling out its tail scales, killing the Seventh Fairy's lover Dong Yong, and falsely testifying that the Kitchen God and the Giant Spirit God falsely accused the Seventh Fairy in order to win the favor of the Jade Emperor and Queen Mother.

Let's talk about some subjective opinions. Overall, it seems to be well written. If the first twenty chapters are as exciting as the following chapters, I feel that the monthly ticket price will be over 1,000 easily. But the first twenty or so chapters are too depressing and should turn away many readers. Although the plot is reasonable, it is not what readers want to read. You must know that online writing has developed into a restless era. Many experts will ignore this, but these things do have a profound impact! The last thing I want to complain about is the picture on the character card. This really requires a lot of effort. At least use AI to generate it. It's too deducted.

The character of the protagonist is too annoying. He is in a weak position and does not want to show any shame in order to survive. He has no moral integrity, and when he has the slightest advantage, he becomes inflated and looks like a villain. Especially Dong Yong, who looked so confused to me. He jumped there without the ability just to hit the Seven Fairies, and he accidentally killed Dong Yong before he could hit her. Forget it if you accidentally kill Dong Yong. If you think he is also harming your comrades, it's okay, just take revenge in advance. But you think Dong Yong is right, then forget it. I think your protagonist has a relatively high moral level and can distinguish right from wrong. But in this case, you are caught, what are the Seven Fairies doing with their faces proud after knowing that they are fine? What are you proud of? Are you proud that you killed Dong Yong in front of the Seven Fairies without being punished? Doesn't this contradict the previous statement? Isn't this protagonist a villain? Too much twist. If it really doesn't work, I suggest you, the author, change the front part. It's basically all poison.

From being caught to the Seven Fairies pulling out their scales, it was okay. It was a bit stupid, but the protagonist with such an innocent heart is also a highlight. But when it comes to killing Dong Yong and stabbing the Kitchen God in the back, it's really awesome. A flattering villain succeeds. What kind of thing is stupid, bad and has no bright spots. Is this kind of thing worthy of sworn sworn relationship with Nezha? ?

People who talk about poisoning are basically students who have not graduated. Is this plot difficult to understand? Isn't this the version of Master Ma's cultivation of immortality?

After reading it for so long, let me share my thoughts. This Journey to the West novel gives me the feeling that it is most in line with the spirit of the original Journey to the West. The sense of irony is immediate. The main theme is not afraid that you will do something wrong, but that you will not have a backer. The author is really brave enough to write. And I think the little characters portrayed by the author are quite vivid. Especially the two heavenly officials at the beginning, they have the kindness of the little people, the cunning and greed of the little people, and the sympathy of the same low-level people. It's a well-drawn character. It also satirizes the behavior of "fairies and little fairies" who are always for love and regardless of the common people. However, the author is also bold and uses the ancient style of writing about divorced marriage at the beginning. Now this way of writing is either very popular or very unpopular. The male protagonist was indeed a little aggrieved before meeting Nezha. But this is also logical and realistic. In my opinion, talking about good grass is almost meaningless. It's not brainless and logical. My evaluation is "fair enough". It's not enough compared to the previous ones, and it's too good compared to the inferior ones.

The real poisonous point of this book is not in the early stage of workplace cuddling. Your boss values ​​​​you, a young newcomer, and is willing to spend money to train you. If he reciprocates the favor, isn't it only natural that you should be loyal in return? People treat me with the courtesy of a national scholar, and I should repay them with the courtesy of a national scholar! No problem at all! But later the Human Emperor's luck was too poisonous! What does Journey to the West have to do with luck in the world? Is there a dynastic struggle? You are already on the list of immortals, but you still want to be the human emperor? Are you stupid? There are many countries in the human world. If you don't unify the world within the universe, how can you be considered a human emperor? What great benefits does the Human Emperor have that are worth getting involved in? Without the support of the destiny of your family and country, you are just a false king and useless. Finally, why can you be the emperor? Just because you are a time traveler?

As of now, my feeling is that it is getting worse and worse. The plot of Dong Yong, the Seven Fairies, and the part about human relationships and the workplace are controversial among many people. I think I can still accept this. In reality, I can't get through it anywhere, let alone Journey to the West. But what is the part about the Human Emperor Jiuding? What, you don't want to be a god, but you still want to be an emperor? ? ? Later, it became more and more sidetracked. Instead of learning magical powers and spells to improve one's realm, or traveling to the four continents to see the most attractive place for readers in the world of Journey to the West, what kind of romance is the whole story about Ghost in White Tiger Mountain? ? ? But I still have to say that it has advantages. The five elements of spells are mutually reinforcing and restraining each other, the five insects and five immortals, and the realm setting are all based on the world view of Journey to the West. It can be seen that the author has done research on this, but the distortion of the plot is really intolerable. Alas, if this is the case, I have to give up. What attracts me very much is the bizarre world of Journey to the West, all kinds of incredible magical powers, and the sophistication of people. I hope the author can organize his thoughts well. . .

What the Dragon King wants is not human sacrifices, but luck. What do you think those sacrifices are of use to him? The delicacies of mountains and seas are not delicious and he has to eat weeds, just like rainfall itself is his ability. Even the Emperor of Heaven has no say. What do you think the Rain God is? This is the authority to take charge of the other party. There is a saying that there is a place where it is going to rain. The Emperor has issued a decree, but the power to exercise it lies in the hands of the Dragon King. If you are an old antique from the Dragon Clan, you will not sell your face at all. Just tell him that he is sick and you will wait until the end of the world. No one will dare to go to that place to rain.

This cultivation level is tens of thousands of years. How do you calculate your cultivation level of tens of thousands of years? What about the fact that Sun Wukong defeated 99% of the people in the world in seven years? Every time I see this type of novel, the measurement unit is not accurate. No one says anything when I ask. Who is the measurement unit for your cultivation base? There must be an underlying logic to compare. , Everyone's talent is different, and some people have practiced for thousands of years, and there are many people who have practiced for thousands of years, but ten thousand years is not as good as others' cultivation for one year. I also read another novel, which talks about a 300-year-old little demon and a 1,000-year-old big demon. This is the same truth. How do we calculate these hundreds of years and hundreds of years? That novel said that 300 years of cultivation is considered a small demon, and 1,000 years is considered a big demon. Then I asked the author of that novel that the talented Sun Wukong practiced for seven years, let alone the big demon. 90% Of them would be defeated when they became immortals and gods. Then Sun Wukong only practiced for 7 years. How did he calculate this cultivation level? Is there a comparison, and then he didn't reply, so I have been wondering, don't those of you who write mythological novels need a little logic? Whether you are a pure Journey to the West or a web writer, this measurement unit is different from that realm. It doesn't matter if you are a pure Journey to the West, but your measurement unit cannot be said to be wrong.

This author is so annoying. If he writes such a grievance book again, I suggest you ban him. He is so speechless. I feel grievance all the way. I can't sleep while listening to the book. Life is hard enough, but reading a novel is super doubly so😭

The fantasy and magnificent world of gods and demons in Journey to the West has suddenly become an officialdom. Myth is free and magnificent, and it entrusts the idealized conceptual projection of human beings. Immortals and Buddhas are transcendent from the earthly world, happy and advocating the Tao, and live a long and happy life. The spirits are unrestrained and willful, quirky and natural in nature. What is it about? The protagonist who hugs everyone, the servant who collects personnel, the Dragon King who goes back on his words, the Jade Emperor who shouts and screams, and the Bodhi who talks behind his back. Good things have been ruined. Before you read Journey to the West as a satirical novel, you must understand that the reason why Journey to the West has endured and spread throughout the ages is that he created Wukong who dared to resist darkness and injustice, Tang Monk who persisted in all kinds of problems, and Bajie who was affectionate, righteous and lively.

This is definitely a female author, so girly

He was betrayed by Lao Long, and later received gifts and went to banquets. He looked friendly and cheerful. This kind of person is either a vicious snake or a born scoundrel.

This is the first time that I have been so angry, and this is the first time that I have such great malice towards the author. If the author appeared in front of me. Guaranteed to be cut to pieces.

The third golden chapter makes the protagonist a fool. I really wonder if the author still doesn't understand how to make ends meet after writing books for so many years. Who would follow a book that makes readers unhappy?

After reading a few chapters, I didn't feel happy at all. I have a tendency to abuse my boss, I'm cowardly and incompetent, and I have a native mentality.

The first part is really too bad, but the second part is much better. Just start reading from chapter 20 onwards. The first part is really stupid and villainous, like a college student with no wrinkles on his head. His head is very big and his eyes are filled with anger. It's much better in the back.

A slow start and a reversal. The author himself fulfilled part of the setting of Journey to the West This book does not have the classics to follow Bodhisattva Looking forward to meeting Brother Monkey later It is best to fight

The kids are waiting for me to see how poisonous it is

This book is really ugly and extremely poisonous. The seventh princess he had an affair with was the heroine, oh, my God! There are so many, don't look, don't look.

How could the author write nearly a million words? I admire him

What I wrote before was pretty good, but what did I write after I was demoted?

The protagonist is not a carp that transforms into a dragon. The protagonist is a turtle that transforms into a dragon. Let's be a turtle for the rest of our lives.

What you do is not at all in line with the setting of modern people traveling through time. Who doesn't know the cruelty of the extraordinary world? When you hear Longmen, don't you have a high sense of crisis? Who knows what is waiting for you behind the door? Even if there is no dragon gate, you will not have a sense of crisis? Maybe a big fish or something will come and eat you.

Although this book does not conform to the mainstream views, the writing is good. Worth a look

Don't use yourself as a reference when writing a protagonist?