The Condor of Time Travel: the First Sword of Quanzhen

To be honest, this book is well written and makes people want to read it. The plot is also well combined with the original work. The only shortcoming is that it is short. I am catching up...

I can't understand it. I can't understand it. The protagonist's inner activities and actions are completely unrelated... It's a mess...

I have read a lot of martial arts books. This is a poisonous book that describes the protagonist's selfishness and self-interest. He is greedy, angry and ignorant. A martial arts novel cannot be written with a chivalrous flavor and is full of the author's self-righteousness. The three views are wrong.

This author writes well. If you go to the gold system, you have to collect all kinds of things. You'd better be a eagle shooter. If you go to the divine eagle, Huang Rong will be missing. The divine eagle Huang Rong is already so black that it can't be black anymore.

Martial arts secrets are not skill books. Let's not talk about medicine and martial arts. If I remember correctly, the first edition of Jiuyang was adapted from Jiuyin. Even the despised Jiuyin you can't understand. The most important general outline is transliterated in Sanskrit, just like the code. The following content is all kinds of Taoist secrets. Think about Mei Chaofeng's tragic situation. Why can't Ouyang Feng understand it even if he has received Jiuyin? Don't say that Xidu can't read, Guang Jiuyin can't understand it. This is not to mention the Shaolin who prefers to add secret words. The consequences of studying Jiu Yang without profound Buddhist skills are very serious. Look at Xiao Yuanshan and Murong Bo who learned the seventy-two stunts. Who dares to say that the Jiu Yang obtained by Zhang Wuji is not translated, and there are many people like Zhang Sanfeng in the world to give you the basic skills. Why are most of the current martial arts prostitutes and learn the secrets in the first shot? It's very haha

When I first read the introduction, I thought it was a book about being leisurely and contented, specializing in Quanzhen martial arts, and walking your own path. However, in order to save Xiao Longnu, he went to Shaolin to seek Jiuyang. The title of the book was changed to The Divine Eagle of Time Travel to make it more appropriate for Little Dragon Girl.

There is no need to brag about Jiuyang. Jiuyang is so powerful in Zhang Wuji's hands. How many years has Wudang Chunyang Wuji beaten Zhang Wuji? The old man Zhang Sanfeng strengthened him every day. No one practiced Shaolin Jiuyang, the three divided sects of Jiuyang. Emei Jiuyang was the only master who could only use a sword. Without a sword, he could be abused. As for Wudang, Wudang Pure Yang Wuji is not the same as Jiuyang, but the old man has improved it. I can only say that the roots are almost the same, but the trees that grow out are completely different, just like oranges and oranges. They look similar but are actually different. The last thing is the functionality after practicing Nine Yang. In Nine Yin, Guo Jing saves Huang Rong and Hong Qigong from their injuries. This is a classic case. It is impossible for these two people to be injured by third-rate people, right? As for quick learning and quick recovery, they are indeed characteristics, but it seems that Jiuyin also has long-lasting and durable Qi, which was reflected when Guo Jing went to Peach Blossom Island. As for the learning ability of Xiao Wuxiang Gong, do you think Li Qiushui, the true successor of Wuxiang Magic Kung Fu, can use it? Jiumozhi was playing, but he couldn't simulate the more powerful ones. Jiumozhi, the audio hero Qiao Feng, slapped him with his Dragon Subduing Palm, and he didn't even see Jiumozhi squealing in response. However, the passing of time knocked back the audio hero's skill by less than half, and Tong Lao's plum-folding hand couldn't be simulated. If he could simulate the plum-folding hand, Tong Lao would have been beaten by Yang Hui eight hundred times. Don't you understand that Li Qiushui's unique skill is the White Rainbow Palm? Phaseless Kung Fu is an internal skill. You can learn from others and imitate others but you cannot surpass them. In the end, even the sweeping monk said that Jiumozhi's flower-twisting finger was forcibly beaten with the Phaseless Kung Fu to achieve the effect of overwhelming people. You have crushed him, Jiuyang's characteristic is just comprehensiveness, just overdo it. Xu Zhu is not a particularly talented person. He has been mediocre in Shaolin Temple for so many years. He can't pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, right? Wu Yazi's pure Taoist inner strength has a great effect. Among Tianlong, Xu Zhu is the most destined son. Duan Yu, don't look at others who have adventures along the way. Others also have martial arts skills, knowledge and talents. The basic requirement of the Six Meridians Divine Sword is a yang finger. Do you think Duan Yu can do it? Qiao Feng is even more of a genius. Those who destroyed his family have trained him to be his heir. If it hadn't been for that letter, do you think Qiao Feng would have failed? Xu Zhu has been mediocre for so long. He got rich when he went to Leigu Mountain. When he came out, his enemy Ding Chunqiu was still gone. You just had to wait and see if Ding Chunqiu could cure him. Later, when he went to Xixia, his wife and subordinates had all the supporting martial arts skills and took off instantly. Being caught by Li Qiu Shui once was still a big bonus. Look at Duan Yu and Qiao Feng. Needless to say who is the cheater? Who do you think can learn the kung fu that a bad guy put together later? The other one was the one who got the hang of it. The Budai monk took Zhang Wuji off in one fell swoop. As for being invulnerable to all poisons, Zhang Wuji seemed to have the confidence to be invulnerable to all poisons. Is Hu Qingniu's inheritance a joke? In short, Nine Yang Kung is full of true energy, quick to return energy, and has healing effects, but it is not outstanding. It's like opening a permanent blue bar for you, but its power is hard to say. Didn't Zhang Wuji also suffer from the Holy Fire Order Gong later? The damage done by Jiuyang Gong is digitized and has a 100% conversion rate. If you use frequent and stable damage to push the boss, it will be impossible to hit the boss with a spell critical strike. Personally, I still like the martial arts of Shen Zhao Jing and Tai Xuan Jing. Shi Potian's Qi recovery and healing are also very powerful, and his poison resistance is not low. Ding Dian can survive for so long after being poisoned. And there are many success stories. Tai Xuan Jing is even more incredible. After Shi Potian finished it, he felt like he could compete with The Flash. The only thing left was that after Shi Potian caught up with his shadow, he came into contact with another real self, and the time in Xi'an changed. However, it seems that everyone sees Taixuan Jing differently, so it's better not to practice it. A life in Shen Zhao Jing is the fundamental thing. Even if you are not strong enough in Liancheng Jue, you can't possibly be able to tell the difference between the dead and the living, right? Or maybe it seems that the situation is not right, it is because the practitioner of Shenzhao Sutra decisively pretended that his heart pulse and other things were gone, and his body was completely cold. Then he was resurrected with full health, right? The first priority is Dao Zang Martial Arts, Huang Shang, Reality and Wang Yangming, all of whom have read Dao Zang thoroughly. However, in view of the novel's routine that time travelers want to take shortcuts, it was cancelled. After that, Jiuyin, which can lay the foundation, is a scumbag if you don't have a basic foundation. If you have a good foundation, then Jiuyang. For special categories, choose Shen Zhao Jing. The must-have choice is the temptation of one life. The next most popular one is armor. If I stack the armor into a superman, he will be invincible. Superman's magic resistance is also low, but the reason why the armor is useful is that his blood is not as thick as usual, so he is also invincible. But this method is too painful. If you don't have any serious illness, why would you become a magician? Wouldn't it be better to learn a flare and add a flash of ice arrow? I will consume you to death. If I am not exhausted, I will run away. When I am in a hurry, I can learn from the Dharma God and take out a big sword for you and run away.

What a piece of trash, so many women insist on fucking his sister-in-law, she's like an animal

Poisonous points: Talking to himself nonsense when there is nothing wrong, the storyline has almost no coherence, and later he picked up an orphan girl to play with and raise? Then I met a princess who fell in love with me. After reading chapter 50, I immediately died of poison and ran away.

I can't stand it anymore, the writing is nondescript. What I watch is that martial arts is not about historical hegemony. It keeps writing about what Yuan Bing does. It doesn't mean that it's enough not to write at all. If you love the people so much, you should become the emperor.

All the beauties fall in love at first sight and fall in love with the protagonist. The protagonist has a lot of dirty things inside, but is sanctimonious on the outside. A typical villain succeeds!

The protagonist is a Taoist priest, who is very wretched on the inside, but on the outside he behaves like a gentleman. How is this different from the sanctimonious Zhen Zhibing? I don't think the author should write anything about time traveling in the past. It would be more reasonable to just change it to say that Yue Buqun's soul has traveled through time.

Now the author doesn't understand Quanzhen at all! He opens a harem at every turn! Once you join Quanzhen, you won't be able to find a spouse!

It is extremely poisonous, and the dragon knight was mentioned at the beginning, and everything in the words said that I must do it.

They all regard the heroine as a fool. If the heroine can fall in love with a person who is not the most affectionate person, is it useful to have high martial arts skills? There are too many female leads, this is impossible! Is it possible for Xiao Longnu to accept it? The protagonist is a hypocritical and lustful person, but I don't see any personality charm that can make people fall in love with him!

The main character is a bit disconnected. Obviously he is a time traveler, but he suddenly makes a big wish to save the country from tragedy and make the world what he wants. An ordinary person before time travel and an ordinary person after time travel. The two ordinary people combined are still ordinary people, which is a bit overestimating their abilities. The author explained that two people merged, which was also the wish of the original owner. The protagonist respects the original owner's ideas, okay, no problem. Then in the fourth chapter, the protagonist wanted to eat meat, so he said that the original owner had always eaten vegetarian food and adhered to the rules and regulations, but I didn't have to abide by his rules and regulations. So the protagonist's bottom line is still very flexible. If the original owner's ideas are beneficial to the protagonist, use them. If you don't like them, just say it's not my idea and I won't do it. ... The protagonist just came out of the world and met a female supporting role, Li Mochou, and felt that she was the one for him and wanted to seduce her. He felt that Li Mochou was comparable to Daji, the reincarnation of Bao Si. It's a little bit ignorant. I feel like I have never seen a beautiful woman in my life. But the protagonist is inconsistent. In his heart, he feels that he is the one he wants to seduce, but he is physically weak and feels that he cannot beat her. I don't want to think that I am just a thirteen-year-old bean sprout. ... After reading a few chapters, you can roughly understand what kind of person the protagonist is. A great person must have a great will, and those who want to help the world should also have the world in mind. Maybe the protagonist is playing an easy difficulty dungeon, talking about love, picking up girls, and coaching martial arts, and all his wishes have come true.

After reading Chapter 30, I found that it is not extremely poisonous, but has a lot of poisonous spots. First of all, the protagonist himself is written like a schizophrenic character with two souls in one body. He often says something like "I don't know if this is my own idea or Li Qingwei's original idea." Some of his actions and speech are also like this. I don't know what the meaning of this writing is. The other most poisonous part is the part just after coming down the mountain. People have meat but they tell you that there is no meat. The protagonist smells the smell of meat and has to force the other party to bring it out for him to eat. Isn't it suspicious that the other party insists on telling you that there is no meat even though there is meat? The protagonist is not afraid of being drugged and eating it carelessly. The key point is that he wanted to remind the protagonist that this is Mongolian human flesh, but before he could finish his sentence, the protagonist forcibly interrupted him and insisted on eating it as if he was the best in the world. Judging from the performance of the first thirty chapters, you might as well write it as a native who has gained part of the memory of the time traveler...

Disciple of the Quanzhen sect, how are you like a disciple of the Quanzhen sect? You have cultivated Taoism for a long time, and you have cultivated it like a dog. Naturally, you have not learned the Taoist Taoist method of tranquility and inaction at all. Instead, your body is full of greed, anger, and delusion, and your body is damaged by alcohol, sex, wealth, and the six roots are impure. People like this practice Taoist exercises. You should spend your whole life doing nothing or going crazy, not to mention practicing the inner elixir technique of the Quanzhen sect. This is enough to open up a harem, but the protagonist's cultivation level is still rising like a rocket. Those who don't know better think that the protagonist is a Tibetan Tantric sect who collects yin and replenishes yang. It's really ridiculous.

It is extremely poisonous. A Quanzhen disciple married a wife before he returned to secular life. What he got was second-hand goods that his brother divorced. Is this really disgusting?

I set a goal of serving the country and the people, but the early stage process was all about love between children, lust and short-sightedness, which was really awkward. Or just go with the setting of I am lustful, I am mean, I want to be a disciple when I see a beautiful woman, and I practice literature and martial arts just to enjoy life better. Either be a great chivalrous person who sacrifices his life for justice for the country and the people and fights for the liberation of the people throughout his life.

The protagonist of this book lacks the hero's heroic spirit of drawing a sword to help when encountering difficulties and the straightforwardness of a knight who succeeds in success. He hides his strength and hides his head and tail. It doesn't even read like a fan of Jin Yong's novels. He just uses the skin of Jin Yong's novels and lacks the soul of Jin Yong's novels.              ，，，，，，， Finally, I suggest the author to read the original work several times. The excellent character creation and description of the characters' emotions in Jin Yong's novels need to be learned.

This is the most embarrassing fanfic I've ever seen.

The three main ideas of the divine sculpture are difficult to explain: 1 Zhang Sanfeng and Guo Xiang. 2 Cheng Ying and I. 3 You and those who spit out date cores.

P's Quanzhen sword, the person is Quanzhen, the others are nothing.

Rubbish, my mind is full of yellow waste

I found this book yesterday when I was rushing to get it for free. I think it is quite well written. Come on, author, I'll keep an eye on you.

The author writes very well. I support you. I have already given you a monthly vote.

It's weird, especially when I saw the plot of returning home. The first thing a time traveler does when he returns home is to kill two dedicated servants. It seems that the protagonist has been assimilated very well. He really regards human life as nothing.

The writing is really good. If you can read it, it is a good article. I give you two monthly tickets and two recommendation tickets. I hope the author will update more.

Limited exemption and reissue. I admire the author and give you a monthly vote.