Time Travel and Swordsman: Lin Pingzhi, the Evil Swordsman

The author's previous book had the same problem as this one. Constantly adding self-created characters, the martial arts novels are all written as historical hegemony novels, which are completely nondescript. The story line has been messed up for a long time, and it cannot enter the main line. If this is the case, why should I read the fan fiction.

The first three pictures were disgusting to me, the main character was totally brainless.

"In my opinion, the true meaning of chivalry is to do your best to help others, no matter how big or small. Author, your novel is really wonderful. It awakened my original love for martial arts, which was really touching. In life, we sometimes feel that we are ourselves due to various reasons, such as trivial matters in life, such as limitations of our own abilities. We can't make any big contributions. But so what? We don't have to be supermen, but each of us can be a hero in our own lives. As long as we have a clear conscience, it's enough. It doesn't have to be in big things, it's in the little things in our daily lives.

A martial arts novel with both martial arts and heroes, the plot is reasonable and the writing is smooth. It started with a side plot as a foreshadowing, and now it has returned to the main plot, which is worth looking forward to.

After a cursory look at it, I found it to be a very good martial arts work. Compared to other similar works, at least the male protagonist's outlook on life is quite positive. Nowadays, many male protagonists in martial arts novels cannot afford the word "xia". They are basically sanctimonious "Yue Buqun" and are too "selfish". Basically, they are all brainless, indiscriminate, and do not ask right or wrong reasons. They just raise their hands and kill like a murderer. They are all killing people. What is the difference between them and villains? And I can't walk when I see a beautiful woman, as if I haven't seen a girl in eight lifetimes. At least the protagonist in this novel is not so love-minded. Please give it a reward first and look forward to the follow-up plot. I hope the author will not collapse.

It would be great to not have a system. I personally hate the system, as if words and deeds are controlled by higher-ups. One more thing is my personal opinion about the fan's original female characters. The advantage of fan fiction is that the original text has already laid the foundation for the character's image, and the author only needs to write based on the original image how the person will behave under certain circumstances. If you insert an original character, you have to spend enough pen and ink to create it, such as Fu Ying. In comparison, Liu's image is very thin, and he doesn't look like a character who can leave an impression on people. In fact, I have forgotten his name now. At present, it seems that he is indeed a tool of martial arts power as the protagonist. The book also mentions Mrs. Ning several times. I know some book friends will make fun of Cao Wei Zhifeng and so on. But it doesn't make much sense to actually write it. One is that the author has to put a lot of effort into writing the guide, and the other is that I'm not sure whether it will pass the review. For such a niche subject as martial arts, I guess the author is not in the mood to make an extra chapter. All in all I feel the benefits are very low. When I read a niche book with a complex appetite, I am always worried that the middle road will collapse. I am also worried that the author will collapse after exhausting all his energy in holding on to the result. Alas, come on, author.

I'm still a soldier, I'm still traveling through time, and I'm still reading novels. Even if I don't have a part of my memory, wouldn't I be able to make iron shirts, golden bells, etc. I traveled through time at the age of 12, and five years later at the age of 17, I started practicing swordsmanship, and got a bunch of modern iron tools. If you open a ten-stone bow, Dongfang Bubai will kneel down. Can't watch anymore

How should I put it, except for the author's chapter title, which is a bit awkward, the rest is pretty good. In terms of writing, it's not bad, and the logic is quite rigorous. It is better than those system texts without basic logic and brainless fun. I have read both of the author's books, and they are both unsystematic. This can be regarded as a "clean stream" in the martial arts area now. However, the author's historical and cultural level needs to be improved. In the latest chapters, the difference between officials and officials is not very clear. In ancient times, "imperial power did not go to the countryside." Only those at the county level of the seventh grade could be called "court officials", and those below were all officials. However, the original story of Swordsman itself does not have a specific historical background, so this small flaw is nothing. It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of plot where you can't walk through a book without falling in love, and you can't walk without seeing a woman. In general, it is worth reading. I look forward to the follow-up plot.

From the beginning, he talks sarcastically to his parents and talks to strangers like a loser 😣

How dedicated you are at the beginning will determine how wide the harem will be later on. Why didn't the author let Lin Pingzhi accept Ning Zhongze?

Either you just have a single heroine or no heroine Or you open a harem openly If you have a single heroine but no heroine, don't go around flirting with women and have ambiguities The harem just has a harem and you don't have to flirt with her. You must have it Your book is really disgusting for readers on both sides And then you have a dead girl, which is really a unique skill Wen Qingcan

The pig's trotters are not invincible, but are they still talking about chivalry? All I can say is that this kind of novel is only suitable for children.

Showing off to your parents and smiling at the stranger you meet for the first time?

They have traveled through time and space, and there is no point in clinging to a broken sword manual. The pattern needs to be opened up. Go to Southern Shaolin to learn skills from a master, and the evil sword manual can be used as a stepping stone. You are using money to clear the way, and there is Lin Yuantu's origin. Regardless of good or bad, Lin Yuantu is dead, and the death penalty is wiped out. Fuwei Escort Agency can also be protected by Southern Shaolin. Think about the treatment of the Dragon Gate Escort Agency in Yitian Sword of Dragons. Yu Canghai has to think twice about destroying you. Use money to clear the way and draw the key points. If the money is provided, it will be safe and worry-free.

I'm just curious about you guys who are crazy writers. You always have to add a time-travel setting to everything you write, and you're afraid that the plot will go crazy and cause amnesia. Why can't you just write about the indigenous people honestly? It doesn't lack the sense of immersion

It's nonsense. A fight can last for three chapters. If the situation is like this, no wonder he rushes to the street.

At first, what his parents said was true, and I thought he was a cold-faced young hero, but later I realized that I was careless. It turned out to be a loser. If you are a cold-faced young hero, even if you have bad hair, I can insist on a few more photos.

What are you writing about history? I wasted half an hour.

The explanation for the main character's plot is unclear, and the idea of ​​practicing mainly external skills to ward off evil spirits really makes people have no desire to continue watching.

Do not practice castration to ward off evil spirits. More poisonous than castration!

A good hand of cards is played badly, and the emotional line is inexplicable! The male protagonist is a fool! The writing is like a running account! It looks so uncomfortable!

I've tried the poison, and the first 90 chapters were okay. Let's not talk about the first heroine in the back. She was a child, and she was accidentally killed by the protagonist with a sword. It's so bloody!

I gave up after reading five chapters. I was tricked into it by looking at the comment section. I wonder if those people who praised it for looking good were paid?

Generally speaking, it is quite good. The story line is very smooth and the characters are outstanding. I also deeply agree with many of the viewpoints in the novel, such as human relations and sophistication. I finished reading it in one sitting yesterday and am looking forward to the upcoming plot. It's been a long time since I've read a martial arts story. However, I will mention a few shortcomings that I personally feel are not actually shortcomings. They are just things that I feel are awkward and unnecessary. The first is the inexplicably copied jokes, such as Baoshu, which may seem humorous and interesting, but in the text I felt awkward. The second one is the most obvious and incomprehensible, that is, whether it uses narration or dialogue, there will always be a few sermons and a few so-called "positive energy" slogans, which I find a bit hard to accept. The novel is about a story in a specific context, and the characters it embodies. Of course, the characters need to be positive and uplifting, but don't use slogans to express them, please tell me with stories.

After reading a chapter and a half, it's not that the author's writing is not good, it's that I can't stand the initial setting. Most of the martial arts movies I find interesting are the various internal martial arts skills that cannot be realized in reality, the lightness of the martial arts, and the ability to travel around the world to enjoy grudges. However, the author writes that Lin Pingzhi relies on modern exercise methods to make up for not learning the internal strength version of the evil-proof swordsmanship. Just to make a point, why does the author think that the Lin family and the Qingcheng sect cannot use evil-proof swordsmanship to exert fast power when they have internal strength, and the human muscles trained with modern fitness can be faster?

May I ask the author, are you writing a martial arts film? I endured and endured and read a hundred chapters, all of which were about fighting against Japanese pirates and treating diseases. You wrote about martial arts, "Swordsman", "The Swordsman", and I didn't see anything. It's just that your name fits it. If you want to write about fighting against Japan, write well, and write about martial arts well. "The Swordsman" is about fighting against Japan, healing diseases, and the Wanmin Umbrella. What are these?

I have read countless articles, but this is the first time I have read something that makes me want to vomit. Its confusing logic, sloppy writing, and common typos... Are simply unheard of and unseen. The first effort was to face the parents with a cold face, and then do push-ups. Later, he got an adventure, and then he insisted on using the evil sword to ward off evil from the palace. The weird logic in it was just like the invincible arrogance and self-confidence of a common girl in a female video. One-third of the article is explaining his strange mental journey, explaining his strange logic, and emphasizing his invincible three views. Such an eloquent article and recommended by Qidian. I am really disappointed with Qidian!

The author himself writes very well and feels good about himself. It makes readers feel uncomfortable reading it.

The ninja was poisoned to death. The part about fighting the Japanese pirates was really disgusting. 🤢What kind of rubbish book, rubbish logic, and martial arts people?

Holy mother bitch, pretending to be cool and leaving a lot of trouble for others, disgusting, luckily I haven't seen the subscription chapter yet