Hogwarts: Starting Out by Pretending to Be The Chosen One

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This book is written to my liking, so I read a few words. The plot and character interactions so far are very to my liking. It is a very light-hearted and enjoyable daily novel, which I like very much. But it is precisely because of this love that the title and introduction of this article make me feel so uncomfortable. PS: The monthly recommendation vote has been voted. I don't have any ideas for writing guidance, I just want to express my understanding.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   . The title and introduction of this book have three key words: "Hogwarts", "pretend", and "savior". Each keyword can derive three expansion tags: "HP fan fiction", "impersonation", and "important role affecting the world line". Excluding readers who find this article through the "Hogwarts" tag, what kind of story will readers who actively look for books through the last two keywords expect? Pretending to be someone - usually the protagonist disguises his identity for a series of purposes such as evading pursuit, seeking revenge, etc., And uses certain high-risk acting behaviors to obtain high rewards that his original identity does not have, including money and social status. Maybe there will be some complicated emotional entanglements during the performance. Savior - In addition to the heroism and growth of this label itself, this word is also strongly bound to Harry Potter in the HP background, representing the main line of the article. Readers who find this book through these keywords will naturally think that they will see a book like this: a coming-of-age novel or a revenge novel with a HP background. The protagonist may take Harry's place and do some big things (such as killing the noseless man in advance, seizing opportunities that belong to Harry, etc.). This is no problem. Many people are tired enough from real life. They just want to watch something cool when they go home. But this is seriously misaligned with the content of the text. Readers who want to read a refreshing article click in, but find that only the first two chapters are the content of the article title, and the rest are all daily plots of "Dirty dog ​​strays into the new world", "Daily life of father and son between dog and bat", "Disney dog ​​and his animal friends". Some people may stay because of the author's writing style, plot or other things, while others will leave directly and continue to look for target themes that suit their appetite. And readers who like to read heart-warming daily growth stories, after reading this article through various channels, the more they like the good dog in the article who gradually lets down his guard, the more unhappy he is with the title of the article. Such as me. Every time I click on the book from the bookshelf, I will be confused when I see the title. The sense of dislocation is too serious! [2. Suggestions on revising the title and introduction of the book as soon as possible] The author has written very well. If the current style continues, the book will inevitably accumulate more readers as the story develops - unless the subsequent plot takes a big turn and there is a real key plot of "playing Harry Potter" or "replacing himself as the savior", otherwise it is better to change the title of the book as soon as possible. Because no matter how well the text is written, spontaneous publicity among readers is ultimately limited. Daily introduction, Guess You Like It, End-of-Chapter Recommendations, and List Display are the first ways for Qidian readers to get in touch with a book. These sections can only display so much information. Readers' first impression of the book will always come from the title and introduction. If the title is not changed as soon as possible, more readers who like this type of daily writing will miss this book. There are also those readers who like to fatten up. After ten days and a half, they want to continue reading. They are thinking about the plot of the main text, but they can't find a book on the bookshelf that can correspond to the plot. They just put it aside and forget about it. It is very likely that they will lose such a subscription. This is such a shame, so my suggestion is to change the title of the book as soon as possible. The new book title should focus on the main line of the story, reflect the theme of the daily novel, and relate to the protagonist's "dog" character, rather than simply using the title to draw people in to read the first three chapters and then run away when they find that the article is not on point. Such as "The Wild Dogs of Hogwarts"? Just to give an example, the specific title of the book depends on the plot. After all, the book is only 400,000 words long, and it is impossible for all readers to know the follow-up better than the author. The same goes for the introduction. The form and word count are not important, but they must reflect the theme of the text. (Quietly) If the author is really not good at writing introductions, he can be lazy and just pick a paragraph from the text that has received good feedback from readers and post it, which is the paragraphs that have a lot of comments from readers. Or briefly show the interaction between the protagonist and several important supporting characters. This kind of daily interaction display is also very attractive to the target audience of daily articles.

I think this book is going to be a hit! This is a Harry Potter fanfic. What to write about growth, what to write about redemption. Can you beat the original? Most of the popular Harry Potter fan novels are making jokes, writing educational articles, expanding the worldview and integrating other magic systems. Everyone spends money on the novels. I'm paying to read your fanfic, which is more like the original at its core. Why don't I pay to read the original? Author cut the book!

Just a reminder to newcomers, the protagonist is an indigenous person.

When Kohler is cured by Hogwarts, he should be able to make up for all the regrets in the Hogwarts story. Very detailed descriptions of daily life, if you like this kind of stuff, you can check it out. It's a good idea at the moment, and I look forward to updates.

The title of the book is indeed a bit bad and makes people not want to read it. In addition, I personally feel that there are too many emotional descriptions of the protagonist, which seems a bit pretentious. Occasionally, there is envy, jealousy and hatred, occasionally there is rebellion with the wand, and occasionally there is stimulation from external factors. Once or twice, it is okay, but it is a bit embarrassing to watch too much. Others are pretty good. I don't know why there aren't many book reviews. There are also a lot of fujoshi Nantong Nitian reviews. Come on, author.

Goodbye, Professor Minerva McGonagall of Hogwarts

I have deeply realized that the title and introduction of the book do not match the content of the article But I am a bad namer, so I can only rely on my book friends.

Some good reader can give this author a good title for his work. It is really well written and the setting is novel.

I think the details used to depict the characters in this article are very vivid. For example, Dumbledore will slowly read the rest of the newspaper after reading the newspaper with the news about the fake savior. For example, the protagonist grew up in Spider-End Alley and was illiterate (this is one of the few articles I read that noticed the details of the protagonist being illiterate in the poor beginning). For example, the protagonist and Snape grew up in the same environment so they would not waste food. For example, the protagonist's observation of words and the characteristics of showing that he is not easy to bully are all characteristics of a grassroots protagonist. Although he is an indigenous protagonist and does not have the blessing of a systematic golden finger, I think it is not difficult to discover the secrets of each school year with the protagonist's intelligence. When I saw the protagonist before he was sorted, everyone else guessed that he would be a Gryffindor, but at that time I had a vague hunch that rather than courage, these things may be more obvious in the protagonist's contingency and judgment of the situation. In the end, it turned out to be true. In addition, I feel that this article does not stick to the original plot. The plot of the protagonist at the beginning of school has been expanded, and the plot of the first grade has also undergone major changes. Looking forward to what follows.