The Unscientific Hacker in the Conan World

Why is even the fact that the protagonist voluntarily joined the organization being discussed...? =_= First of all, since they've already entered the world of Detective Conan, and the protagonist still has the idea of ​​immortality, then he can't be separated from the organization. Secondly, the protagonist's abilities are meant to be more effective when things are done illegally.

I forgot to read the reviews before reading the book, and ended up being completely disgusted. The plot of "Xiao Shan" really turned me off. The author isn't suited to writing; the protagonist's character is utterly unappealing and acts like an idiot, failing to deal with known dangers beforehand and letting them kill him instead. The author is a genius.

[Selling points of this book] 1. Hacking techniques, futuristic technology (they might recreate "The Phantom of Baker Street," and even want to create a whole SAO). 2. A genius villainous protagonist, and the conflict/cooperation between the protagonist and popular characters from both sides. [Technology related]

When the author posted the first chapter of the book, I commented on the characters Xiaoshan and Luo Fu, and then subscribed to two chapters. Well, Xiaoshan is fine, the main character is the one with the biggest problem. Xiaoshan is very clear: she wants "revenge," and she has the ability to do so.

This little scene is absolutely terrible. The protagonist seems to have lost his mind. He could have easily resolved the issue with a simple report, or at least transferred the person instead of sending them back. The protagonist's character is poorly portrayed here – a coward, indecisive, and overconfident. Don't you know how many people are criticizing this character? If you don't have a plot twist, then it's doomed. Anyway, it's your choice: Xiaoshan dies or this book dies.

Honestly, it's really strange. The male lead, with his official police status, knew Xiaoshan had a problem but didn't send any officers to bother her, or at least prevent her from going out shopping at a crucial moment! Judy also ignored it and didn't investigate. In the end, despite the title being about a hacker, he himself was eavesdropped on and his identity was revealed (you be the hacker!).

It's a great read, with exciting intellectual battles. It's so rare to find a story where the protagonist is from the Black Faction; I hope it doesn't turn into a charity story disguised as a Black Faction tale.

While I understand that the virtual world is a virtual world, I really can't hold back. Let alone whether the Japanese police dare to defy their American daddy, the Japanese Public Security Bureau is directly controlled by the US. Logically speaking, the presence of a young, half-Japanese, half-American within the Public Security Bureau is clearly an act of patriarchal influence.

Why are you talking to your readers almost as much as you're writing your novel? You don't need to waste time talking to your readers. If you want to revise, then revise; if you don't want to revise, then just pretend you're dead. I think that's the confidence an author should have.

The protagonist is terrible at fighting and has terrible marksmanship. He's bound to die in any danger. How can someone like that want to live forever? Don't you find it ridiculous that he can die so easily on the path to immortality?