Qitian!

After reading Chapter 323, some parts of this book are acceptable, but there are a few points that I really don't like: 1. The protagonist spent a lot of effort to create a high-grade Daoji. It is so mysterious and yellow, and the name sounds very high-end. However, after the Daoji was cast, it did not say what its characteristics or advantages were, and he directly switched to other techniques. I am afraid that readers will be happy? 2. True biography, the protagonist has become a true legend, he is so awesome, but the result is that he has changed to a bigger mountain to continue practicing, and there is no difference in other aspects? From the beginning, there was no one to guide me, and I had no skills, so I relied on my senior brother to give them to me. It was still like this after the real teaching, so what exactly did the real teaching teach me? What are the unique skills of this sect? I didn't find out. 3 Swordsmanship. The protagonist joined this sect because of his high talent in swordsmanship. As a result, there was no one to guide him after he got started. He relied on himself to learn the sword. A swordsman also had to rely on Mr. Wu from other sects for guidance. So why did you go to this sect? What are the advantages?

To be honest, I don't even post book reviews, but this novel was a real waste of my time. I read dozens of chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. It's nothing, just like a running account.

How to put it, it's a bit false. The author treats the Immortal Sect as a modern workplace. After one, the Immortal Sect trains disciples from an early age, and may even cut off the relationship between the disciples and the family, just to cultivate the disciple's centripetal force. It is a great opportunity to have a low-grade Immortal Sect to accept disciples halfway, but in the end, you can still go to a middle-grade Immortal Sect after completing your cultivation in a low-grade Immortal Sect. Isn't this just a joke? It's not that the middle-grade immortal sects will accept them or not, but the low-grade immortal sects won't agree to it. Even if they give you such an oath to get started, they will definitely not accept them. As for the middle-grade immortal sects, they will definitely not accept them.

The protagonist is a human being in two lives. It is more important to cultivate immortality or to practice swordsmanship. He also needs to be reminded by others. He has put the cart before the horse and has lived for two lives. He is not as thorough as the natives and has lived like a dog.

Why don't you offer a medium-to-low-grade pulse-opening method to the sect? The origin is researched by yourself. You don't steal or rob, and the origin is correct. You use it with others to exchange for pulse-opening pills, and you don't offer it to the sect in exchange for contribution points.

It's child's play. It's so simple to create your own exercises and improve them. Have others never thought about it? When practicing, just practice honestly. If you think of a shortcut, you can realize it immediately. This is meaningless and has no foreshadowing at all.

After reading eight chapters, I still want to say something. The protagonist obviously has extremely poor qualifications, but he is inexplicably confident. How dare a bronze book with little help dare to compare with a real spiritual being? When I wasn't practicing swordsmanship, I would go to the library to look for books to read. I always wanted to take shortcuts. I didn't see diligence, I only saw inexplicable self-confidence.

Chapter 39 so far, cheating is too expensive! The absence of Goldfinger will not affect the current plot at all.

This male protagonist traveled back in time from his childhood, took over this body, and left without saying goodbye just for an unknown bronze book that revealed some traces of his cultivation of immortality. At that time, it was not an urgent matter, nor was his life or death imminent, so he pursued for three years just for some traces of his cultivation of immortality. In three years, he did not send a letter home, and completely forgot about his parents and parents at home. He was really unworthy of being a son, and unfilial!

I don't know why I feel annoyed when I see the handyman disciples now.

I have always seen it and still don't understand why you don't offer the Pulse Opening Technique to the sect in exchange for benefits. You said that you were afraid that someone would grab the opportunity faster than him, but you have already entered the inner sect and you still don't offer it, especially the person who wanted to exchange for the Pulse Breaking Pill didn't offer it either. I really don't understand. He died of poisonous hair.

I give up practicing magic skills when I see them. I am not like a swordsman at all. I want to practice everything I see. It would be great if I have the skills to develop the false orifices and quickly find a way to practice the false skills into the real ones. There is no priority. If you are good at swordsmanship, practice more swordsmanship. It really feels like losing a watermelon and picking up sesame seeds.

I'm convinced, the first time I saw it on the shelves, the combat power was not that good. I still don't know what it is! The author is so confident that readers will buy it and spend money to read it?

Write the protagonist as a primary school student and a fool.

After reading 20 or 30 chapters, I didn't get the idea to continue reading. It felt like I was chewing on chicken ribs. The writing was fine, but the plot was too cliche. The emotions came out of nowhere. I felt that the author wanted to write about a waste stream, but was afraid of scaring away some readers. He gave an unknown golden finger and said he was a time traveler, but he wrote like a native and had no imagination at all. It was because he couldn't match the author's airwaves and couldn't read it.

The protagonist is out of his mind and often helps others unconditionally

Explanation of behavioral motivations in more than one sentence proves that the plot arrangement is unreasonable, and reasonable arrangements do not require explanation at all. The plot of the Geo Mother Stone rescuing people is anti-human. The protagonist really doesn't care if Qi Shi doesn't behave like this. He could arrange for them to leave instead of inviting them back to the gym. It makes no sense for Bai Ling'er to appear. He is an inexplicable person. What does the beauty of others have to do with the protagonist? It is inexplicable to force the connection.

Immortal cultivators suddenly became addicted to practicing swordsmanship. Without getting started in practice, they went to the Sutra Pavilion everywhere. It was very slow and slow, and they only had a little bit of interpersonal communication. After more than ten chapters, I was obsessed with self-confidence and improved the techniques. Broken Bronze Book felt that it was a supreme spiritual treasure. It has no function of accelerating practice and cannot obtain resources. Is there any advanced technique recorded? For the time being, I can only read some information that is better than nothing. Regarding the explanation of grades, it is really said that the wheels of the chariot turn around and over again. Can your skills be upgraded by saying it ten times or what? If you recite it a hundred times, it will be the divine method to reach heaven, right?

Why is the protagonist so confident when he doesn't know what the Bronze Book is, and he doesn't even know how to use it accurately, and it has very little help for him? How does he know that he is a time traveler? Do you know you are the protagonist?

What's the name of this book?

A swordsman who wants to cultivate everything but not much. It's a mess.

Books by novice authors, those who are not afraid of poison can read them

It's too watery. There's no water for you in the faucet.

It's a pretty good book, but it's terrible.

There are no small secrets, no exciting fights, you can learn whatever you want, the plot is bland, there is only a good story, which makes people regret watching it.

Not to mention the shortcomings, there are many from the beginning of the chapter. Are you worthy of the title of the book? If you can't even come up with a title like this, then you shouldn't write a book.