Immortal Road Zongheng

The family is about to run away when there is a war with the Zhou family, and the protagonist is a bit poisonous. This is different from Lu Wugui, Lu Fu Master and Han Lao Mo. The family and clan uncle were so kind to the protagonist, but the protagonist didn't repay much in return, and then ran away regardless of the family and clan uncle. The family has no discipline for such disloyal people. The writing is unreasonable. I took a look at the following chapters 670 and 78, but there is no protagonist in it. Are you writing a group portrait? If you don't write the protagonist, the pace will be slow and the main line will be distorted. The work still needs to be polished a little more, and it's a no-brainer.

It's about walking alone, but in the end, everything you do is thinking about your family. Can a reborn person have such deep feelings for a strange family? Even if the owner of the body is related to the protagonist and gives some good things to pass on, it is enough, but it has to be written like a sheep's head and a dog's meat. The author directly said whether he was writing about a family or a lone ranger. If it was a family, I would run away. Immortality is noble! I don't know how to write reference to mortals. To be honest, family tradition is not suitable for appearing in the world of immortality where the jungle is strong. Others can do this, but the protagonist cannot. Originally, cultivation is about thousands of troops crossing a single-plank bridge. I found that many authors can't change this problem when writing novels about immortality?

This is very good, because immortality is private, and cultivation is your own business. It is very rare for the protagonist to be willing to give back to the family appropriately. The formation of the family and the sect is for the individual to practice better, and one cannot put the cart before the horse.

To cultivate immortality, you must first be a human being, right? No one else writes about cultivating demons in such a bird-like manner. Profit-seeking, ruthless, narrow-minded, cruel and murderous. Could it be that you are not writing about cultivating immortals, but about cultivating animals. What kind of thing did you write about the theme of cultivating immortality?

128, 256, 512... Are you cultivating immortality or making a hard drive?

Why so many explanations? Various explanations, too many explanations turn into nonsense

There is too much nonsense. One thing is said over and over again. After a few orders, it is repeated again and again. If this can be changed, sooner or later it will become a god.

The name suddenly changed from Chen Xuanqing to Chen Qing. Can the family name change like this?

How to put it, I have read a few chapters, and the mental methods are not poisonous, but your writing method is too old-fashioned. If your book was written a few years ago, I would definitely not say anything. However, it is 25 years ago, and your discussion is about time travel, and it is also equipped with an ordinary spirit body. After reading it later, I guess you need to practice physical training, spiritual consciousness, and play with talismans. There is no novel setting at all, and the plot is too old-fashioned.

I've seen the latest chapter. Generally speaking, it's just a piece of food, but it has two points. One is a typo; The other is not to be so detailed. I seriously doubt the word count.

It's okay, it's plain and simple, you can take a look at it when you're short of books, it's written in the same way as the one at Lu Fast Food Restaurant. I thought that the great power would be reincarnated into the Three Spiritual Roots, and the family would still be so united, not many people would come up with different strategies, but in the end, they would still be the same.

Very bland, nothing exciting, just a family nanny story

You are talking about the family every day, leaving this to the family and that to the family. Do you need to emphasize it so repeatedly? Are you paying to see what you're talking about?

Now that you've convinced the author, can't you unify the names of your protagonists? Suddenly Chen Xuanqing and suddenly Chen Qing. Don't you know that people look very disconnected and awkward? It's crazy that the names of two protagonists can appear in one sentence.

It's quite funny that the protagonist has always wanted to give back to his family since he came out. It feels like he is always suppressing the protagonist and keeps interacting with the family. What's the use of writing like this? It's better not to write his parents to death. If he has good qualifications and doesn't enter a large sect in the early stage to get resources, he keeps hanging around in the family and keeps writing about his emotions with the family. It's quite uncomfortable.

Old Demon Han has also entered many sects. Apart from being called Han Paopao, he is rarely said to be cool and cool. In comparison, his impression is much better.

This book is really updated very quickly, the quality is high, the writing is delicate and smooth, it's great👌

Why are you citing the demon beast grading method in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality? I have long wanted to complain about his classification method. It is quite funny. For seventh and eighth level monsters, you have to think about what level of monster they are. There are good and bad in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. You don't need to learn everything. You just directly represent the first level for Qi training, the second level for foundation building, and the third level for golden elixir. Then isn't it obvious that the front, middle and back are separated?

There was a chapter about the underwater spirit fire. I thought it was very exciting, but I didn't expect it to be all flattery. I was trying to get the best of myself. It made me frustrated and angry, and it was a waste of 50 coins.

The key points are mentioned in one stroke. Trivial things are written over and over again. I want to write a group portrait but the pen is not strong enough. The characterization is superficial.

Generally speaking, I borrowed the rhythm of some novels, I don't have anything of my own, the prices are not good, it's readable, not too toxic.

The practice plan is told over and over again. In the last chapter, the plan is written down, and in the next chapter, the same old tune is repeated again. It is too nonsense and has a lot of nonsense. It affects the reading experience and makes you want to hate you. There is too much nonsense about psychological description. There is no need to deliberately solidify the character of the protagonist. I have to complain after reading the latest chapters. This book currently has 2.33 Million words, and its realm has reached the middle stage of Yuanying. The map for exploration is still in the South China Sea, and Zhongzhou in the East China Sea is just a copy. Knowing that the resources in the South China Sea are scarce, the highest person in the human world turned into a god. Currently, he has an ascension platform (incomplete form). There is no shortage of low-level spiritual stone resources. After the dungeon is over, the focus can be shifted from the South China Sea to Zhongzhou. Whether it is participating in auctions or exploring new dungeons and making new passers-by, they can guide the plot and speed up the progress. I just sold some low-level resources and hurried back to the South China Sea. There is nothing to write about in the South China Sea. It is impossible to plunder all those heaven-level resources in the countryside and suburbs even if I waste hundreds of years. Think about it carefully.

According to the appraisal of a twenty-year-old bookworm, the writing and plot of this book are very good, the protagonist's IQ is also online, and he has the talent to write a masterpiece. But why is this book not on the ranking list? I don't even know how I found it. It's a pity.

I have read the latest chapters of this book, and it is rated 8 out of 10. It is indeed good. There are some minor problems, but not many, and nothing harmful. It does not affect the reading experience. It is much better than many books at the top of the monthly ticket list.

A cultivator! It's okay if you don't even watch it if you're still practicing! How can the upper limit not be higher?

The original title was grand and majestic, but the current title is too narrow-minded. Mean.

The fake elixir was rebuilt and the Chen family was reborn...

This golden elixir repair is so weak that it explodes

After reading a few chapters, I was really speechless. In the first sentence, it was still called Chen Qing, but in the next sentence, it became Chen Xuanqing. Although we all know that he is the same person, can we write it well? Big brother.

A golden elixir is reincarnated and re-cultivated. How far can it go compared to its previous life without extraordinary qualifications and abundant resources?