The End of Cultivating Immortality: I Have an Immortal Tree

It was a good setting, but the author wasted it. After dozens of chapters, the tree only gave out a talisman from a book. The protagonist of the key book has not practiced yet. What's the use of it? The golden finger that does not work immediately can be allowed to bear fruit later. If you released it so early, you thought that the protagonist could practice and obtain some means to fight against the strange. Who would have thought that it would be followed by a self-instruction and he would not dare to practice. The first fruit could have brought a small climax. Even if it is given some formations that can hide the station so that the weird ones cannot be discovered, it is at least equivalent to building a safe zone, which has an advantage over other casual cultivators and even large sect cultivators. Alternatively, it is better to give a spell that can create a spiritual field than to go to some stream and use the traditional method of cultivating immortals to create a spiritual field. You can create it, why can't others? In addition, even a talisman cannot play a key role. I am frustrated and can only recognize weirdness. When I encounter a weirdo who asks for directions, I can't help but escape from death with a few words. It's too natural. As for that tree, I knew it could bear good things. After dozens of chapters, I knew that someone was selling weird items and it was proven to be effective. It seemed like I just belatedly remembered to exchange them consciously. You seem to pique the reader's interest again and again, and just start to get to the point every time, and immediately jump to the next setting. Author, you really let good opportunities go to waste. At the beginning of the chapter, if you let Guozi develop some basic abilities, and the abilities that can immediately solve the predicament at hand, you can definitely create several climaxes.

I am still writing about daily cultivation, and I am still writing about business operations. The sense of urgency created by the opening chapter is completely gone, and Golden Finger did not play a direct role in survival. Some people are also saying in the comment area that they want to wait and see if there will be any adjustments. Who knows that the author is still insisting on his own way. Forget it, delete it.

In other words, the protagonist deserves to be calculated

Moji Moji has written about ten chapters, and it seems like he has written it, but it seems like he has written nothing.

The author has not considered many things, and has already rushed out of the mountains. If we don't hurry up and develop the population, we can still grind away at the mortals before they are gathered. What kind of retreat? What a lot of crap. I'm really tired of reading it.

How to kill a book. You will know by watching the author's interpretation

There are too many loopholes. If the spiritual stone is leaked to others first, if you don't dig some of it yourself, then you will trust other people's hearts. If you don't send some people out to leave one for yourself, don't you think about the consequences of others falling out? At least the news can be spread. However, he pulled his ally in and didn't dare to let go. He turned around and leaked the news about the Foundation-Building Heavenly Mysterious Fruit to others. He just slapped you in front of you. After finishing the left cheek slap, you slapped you on the right cheek. You should at least round it out, sign a contract, and swear an oath. What the hell, that's bullshit. I chose to be a sad person with no bottom line. In a strange and troubled world, everyone around me was killing people like crazy, and I didn't have any thoughts. I didn't know that I had been silenced 800 times. I had built a foundation and had a trump card, just by uniting the two sides. Why don't they join forces and kill you? Anyway, they won't lose anything after all.

I've read two of them. Why is there no more tricks after entering the Hundred Thousand Mountains? Can't make it clear either

Everyone is welcome to speak enthusiastically in the comment area. As long as you see the author, you will respond positively. However, I also hope that everyone will not discuss too many things that have nothing to do with the book.

I can't figure it out! Since we need Gui's corpse so much, why not light it up! Acquisition? Or acquire it secretly? External publicity is for research! ! !

From the setting and golden finger, I can tell that the author is full of ideas and has a desire to read on. However, when entering the main text, there is no priority. Whether he is going to write about family farming, immortality and immortality, or he wants to describe them all, but he has not described them all. It gives me the impression that the author is addicted to food.

This book is poisonous, Goldfinger doesn't need to be thrown aside, right?

I saw it halfway and thought it was strange. Then I read the comments and hey! Good guy. Sure enough, if you don't write well, the chances of being scolded are greater.

The author's arrangement of opportunities is too deliberate.

What is the weird thing? I saw a lot of people saying that there is such a thing as weird.