Zhutian: Starting from the Late Qing Dynasty

Your consciousness is indeed excellent. But you talk too much and have too much foreshadowing. You said it is a bit exaggerated to compare with the divine machine.

It feels like watching a dream come true and writing a book, but it is a little more verbose than him. There are a lot of things that are blabbering, and you can't wait to throw out a long article. In fact, it is not necessary. These principles of yours can be slowly integrated into the protagonist's words and deeds. There is no need for long explanations, which makes the reading difficult. Readers care more about the plot and fighting, and don't want to read explanations and explanatory narrations. But overall it is good, and it is good food.

In fact, I think the writing in the previous book was pretty good. I don't know why there are so many scolds... I hope this one can be written normally.

When the protagonist has not revealed his ability to enter the Tao, no one else can. After the protagonist has this ability, the same people appear one after another, just like the wild vegetables in the field.

This is the end of the book. It's less than the previous one. Fortunately, I've been waiting to read it since it was released. I'm afraid of eunuchs.

After reading a few chapters, I came up with two adjectives, which are verbose and nonsense. One person makes a move. I can write hundreds of words to describe it, but I am drunk. Then I write out what is going on in the hearts of everyone present.

Use fists to tap the heart, and use skills to explain the Tao. Boxing is the heart, and skills are actions. The Tao has no high or low level, but skills have winning or losing. Generally speaking, walking is a road and driving is also a road. However, walking is walking and driving is driving, but they are both roads. If we can grasp this, then this kind of collision will be absolutely wonderful and intoxicating. The people and the aristocratic families all have different ways of governing the country.

It's so long-winded, and some parts are written in such a confusing way that I even pretend not to understand. Pretending is all about foreshadowing, and going straight to Huang Long's grudges. No matter how many reasons you have to describe it, the image it gives directly to people is that of looking forward and backward, verbose, and even killing someone is useless.

Ren Ran won't go to the back, kill his time traveler master, and then start his journey to the heavens, right?

He is almost invincible as soon as he appears... The tone of this book is too high, and it can't be lowered. I am looking forward to whether it will be a hard landing or a soft landing...😁

Why are you a eunuch again? Have you gone to write tuba?

Chapter 9 is the chapter with the most intense conflict and murderous revenge. However, I can't bear to read the table of contents. The description of the fight is just to vent my anger and talks about a lot of messy things.

What do you mean? It's confusing but self-contained, contrary to common sense but logically consistent. I can only say that I am an ordinary person with little experience and the author has a rich imagination.

Let's call the next book Begin with the Eunuch

My opinion is that the book is about 85 points, but it cannot reach 90 points. The main problem is the plot structure. The author wants to write too many things. For me personally, the plot advancement is too slow, the structure is too bloated, and it is not refreshing. The character structure is good. The image of the pig's feet is a growth type. This is good. The characters grow and change. I like this very much.

There is a feeling of ancient martial arts, especially when Tang Long and Antony Marcus came out. There are sets of Chinese martial arts and boxing principles, which feel very much like the Romance of Dragon and Snake. The story at the beginning is a little off. The protagonist is an aboriginal, a young aboriginal boxer who was educated by a suspected time traveler, and lacks a sense of substitution. But the aboriginal protagonist is also okay. The protagonist is confused and ignorant about the future, and is not so omniscient and omnipotent about the historical context. Another shortcoming is that the protagonist lacks a growth process. Chapter three or two has already improved his strength to an unimaginable level.

It's good to write it like this now, but it's these seemingly redundant places that make it stand out.

Luo Liba Suo~ Shen Shen Nao Nao.

This time I have thought about it for a long time, and the outline is detailed, and it is definitely not an eunuch!

Does anyone know if the author has changed his number?

I stumbled into the descendants of Wu Zu, and after searching through the comments section one by one, I found out that it was another internal manager.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Does anyone know the vest for this guy?

By the way, the protagonist in the beginning is very good, but the villain comes out and pulls him away. The protagonist is like a robot. He has no desire. Even if he can find a few women, it won't be that difficult to write. The villain is also brainless and doesn't know what to do.

It's not like he's a eunuch again. . .

Isn't he a real eunuch? I have saved quite a few of them but haven't read them yet. I'll take a look at them today. Updated five days ago.

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