Something's Wrong with My Yuan Mo

Don't be inferior to one person. The Nine Gates of the Prison, although the internal strength is also the Nine Gates, the key is that they are not handsome. Just for the sake of the Great Mercy and Great Compassion Palm. You can't practice the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu, which is purely for combat power. I really don't see how powerful this palm method is. The author's magical revised version feels to me that it is not as good as the powerful Vajra Palm that appeared at the beginning.

Why do we spend half a chapter on popular science and explanation in each chapter?

Either he will become the king and hegemony, or he will become an immortal and it will be too embarrassing to say goodbye.

It's so speechless. It goes too far as it goes to the back. Chapter after chapter is just a collection of word-count popular science. It doesn't advance the story at all. It just asks readers to include it. What should it include? It shows no sincerity at all.

Can you tell me how many readers the author has now? According to this popular science idea, you may not be able to make back the electricity bill after writing this book, and the water will go to outer space.

The reading experience is extremely poor, the author is proud of the popular science article

It's getting too much, a whole chapter is just popular science! ! !

This book is simply amazing Why don't you start popularizing science from the beginning of Pangu! The word "water" is not so watery, it's really too heartless.

The latest chapters are all full of popular science. Who would read it?

You are just like trying to scam money. What you write is all popular science nonsense. I won't read it anymore.

So disappointing, the last few chapters are all about popular science and there is almost no plot advancement😓

I recommend this kind of book. It's not difficult to make money from the beginning.

There are too many popular science categories, taking up 40% of the space, which makes it uncomfortable to look at.

You're too naive. It's been a few days since they were still mother and son of the Yu family. Just give them some basic knowledge.

After reading books for so many years, this is the first time I have seen hydrology that is all about popular science. It's very cool.

In fact, the writing is not bad, the writing style and creativity are not bad. There is a problem with the structure and rhythm. I wrote long sections on popular science at every turn, and then moved on to other places. The sense of fragmentation is severe. After reading it again, I can only look forward to the author's next book.

There are only a little over 40 chapters in total, before, Empress Ma's father wrote about 10 chapters, and the last 10 chapters are all about popular science, without any plot. . . After being poisoned twice, I still gave up reading the book.

It looks good, but there are too few and the updates are too slow! ! !

You can just change a few characters of "Yuan Shi" and publish it. What kind of book is this?

I can't even read it. I've seen some books about the number of words in the water, but I've never seen one that can drown readers!

Too much popular science and too few updates! ! ! Readers who really want to know can search for themselves! If you write this and it's on the shelves, I'll be at a loss if I want to subscribe!

Can you be your own boss and let Zhu Chongba be the bully?

🎭 Character design: quite satisfactory, character changes have yet to be described 🎬 Plot: Refreshing, but too watery ✒️Writing: needs improvement

What you wrote is all nonsense, I'm tired of reading it

There was no writer on his previous work, so it was probably written by AI.