The Game Becomes Reality: I Ascend to Godhood with Intelligence

After reading a dozen of them, I didn't find any bad points. The writing is smooth, but it always feels dry. The author must be a real novice.

After reading a little bit, can anyone give me some spoilers as to whether the queen is the mastermind behind this?

This book is well written and has great qualifications, but the author, do you know why it is not popular? Because water is too watery. As we all know, too much water will not make you popular I know you want to pave the way for a grand world view, but you can't always write background introductions. I know you want to write the supporting characters with flesh and blood, but you can't allocate too much proportion to the supporting characters. This is a taboo in online writing, unless your writing is very strong and you can control it. Read Readers are very sticky and willing to pay for this, but for a newcomer to a new book, these points are obviously not available There is a black box between the article and the readers. The readers do not know the content before buying this article. There is a big risk for readers to spend money to buy an article without knowing whether it has been heavily flooded. Risk, and given that the author's water-filled style in the past will present a wait-and-see attitude towards subsequent chapters, this is extremely detrimental to new books. Of course, it's not that the grand world view and vivid supporting characters are not good, but that the author can't control your writing power. I saw the latest pictures, which are at least one-third of the whole book. It is background introduction and description of supporting characters. The length of the protagonist and main line is less than one-third. If you can't control it, you should focus on the protagonist and main line, interspersed with background and supporting character introductions. Some backgrounds can be expanded while advancing, and the focus is on advancing the main line. Some supporting characters can be mentioned in a few strokes. A person who is good at describing Authors who write about supporting characters can even bring a supporting character to life in just a few sentences, but you are not one of them, and most authors can't do it. Secondly, the distribution of pen and ink for supporting characters should also be reasonable. Look at the name of the book. The queen is a very well-shaped character, but there is very little pen and ink. It is always on the edge. It can be seen that the author actually likes the queen very much, so he has been saving writing, but readers have to read it. On the other hand, there is still a big problem in this book, which is the problem of the number of supporting characters. The protagonist has been keeping a harem, but have you ever thought about the author, how much energy you plan to spend writing these characters. With the current situation Keep the speed down, and then it will take a lot of pen and ink to just write these characters in the later period. The final result is either that it is difficult to advance the main line because of writing these, or that a large number of characters have no role. This is actually a painful disease of harem novels. At present, these problems have appeared, some female protagonists have been marginalized, and some female protagonists have no roles. Personalization, if this problem is not dealt with in time, it may be difficult to recover in the future The reason why I write so much is because I don't want a book with great talent to be buried and die. I hope the author can read it. As for the specific suggestions and improvement measures, the space here is too small, so I won't write it. I'll talk about it next time when I have time.

Rather than being revolted by others, it is better to take the initiative to revolt yourself. You can use foreign wars to relieve domestic pressure, or you can use the reasons for foreign wars to strengthen your own faction. You can even borrow large amounts of money and conquer special foreign trade rights in the territory (allowing foreign countries to build factories and invest in the territory, and provide a large reduction in import and export tariffs) to obtain the acquiescence of several major empires (as long as what is being sold is not the original interests of the country). When fighting, you only need to let your political opponents die one more death and get a smaller share of the credit (you can use false political promises), and then use methods similar to the Wannan incident to persecute them during the battle. In the end, even if he loses, the emperor will still be the same emperor, but his dominance will increase.

A very traditional, brainless and refreshing article with a strong retro flavor. Suitable for relaxing the brain, killing time, and recalling youth. The technique is relatively sophisticated and common poisonous points are avoided. However, occasionally there will be problems that are too "classic" and vary from person to person. Overall it is acceptable and it is a kind of enjoyment without thinking.

It's a pretty typical Chinese-style Western fantasy novel. It's not as bad as the minor ones. It's a no-brainer, but at least it doesn't make sense. There are a lot of set things before and after. The author said that this is his first book, so this level is considered to be above the passing level. Anyway, generally speaking, you can read it, but don't worry about it.

No, after flipping through the table of contents, two million words are enough to get the gold, but it's all boring. Your strength is improving so slowly. Do you want to write tens of millions of words?

In fact, the writing is okay, but the harem stallion story is really hard to love.

How is the setting of the protagonist's mother perfect? ​​The king of a kingdom married a goddess, right?😒

The idea is pretty good, but the more I write, the weirder it gets. It doesn't matter if it's a woman, and the woman's affection for the male protagonist is inexplicable. I like the male protagonist for one or two things, and that's not how harem stories are written. Basically, she appears as a female, good-looking one. Behind is the male protagonist's harem, I can't stand it anymore 😅

When I read Chapter 78 of "Conflict of Nations", the protagonist now feels like a male dog in heat. He just wants to have sex with a beautiful woman without considering anything else. The so-called willpower is not there at all.

I really can't help but complain, the protagonist is 16 years old... I don't know when the author is going to skip the plot of two years directly, but he always likes to leave loopholes in the vest to let people connect to the original identity of the protagonist. It is really vulgar.

Don't think too much about it while watching it. Once you think about it carefully, you won't be able to watch anymore.

If this book were published in 🍅 I would definitely give it a five-star rating The following is really watery

Realm Level: Bronze, Silver, Gold, Legend, Saint, God Gods: The God of Contract and Fairness - Cavendish Libra The God of Books and Knowledge - Ain Wisdom The God of Battle and War - Ares Beacon Terror The God of Fear and Death - Hades The God of Truth and Memory - Lothien Yin The God of Prophecy - Madora Prophet The God of Darkness - Erebus The Goddess of Light The Goddess of Ice Elements and Ice and Snow - Daphne Ice The Goddess of Fate The Goddess of Misfortune - Merian Calamity The Goddess of Luck - Selena Blessing The Forged God - Flame of the Mountain Ornn The Lich God - Vesalun The Bound God - Thariz

There are only stories and plots, but there is no sense of pictures, such as specific distances, the size of the country, the house and hotel where you live, the development of science and technology, etc. There is no detailed description. You can refer to the writing method of the murmuring poem. Although it is very verbose, it has a sense of pictures. If you have a picture, you will have a sense of substitution, otherwise you will not be able to get involved.

The protagonist is familiar with the plot, so he should only recruit talents who have not yet risen in the country, especially in the capital, aren't there people who will be very strong in the future? If we start a wave of shady activities, we will have the funds and bring in more people. Since the team is too small, we can develop a wave in advance. As for orcs, let's have some representative ones with some strength and character, more of them, women can do it too hehe. You can't just let the protagonist find that person to serve as the leader, it's not a free gift. At least the protagonist needs to get acquainted with the middle and senior managers first. My humble opinion😁😁😁

He really treats the queen who is the best to him as a Japanese. Other women already know his identity. He pretends to be cool in front of other women and then his identity is discovered. He keeps hiding it from the queen, haha ​​😥

One question is: The queen is so resistant to physical contact with the male protagonist, but she also describes loving the male protagonist. Is this contrast logical?

This makes me feel awkward when writing about interactions with other women.

This book is okay. Originally, someone in the comment section said it was "brainlessly cool" so I skipped it. But now it seems that it is not "brainlessly cool". It's a bit counter-intuitive. The author also used his brain in plot conception. Including building a military unification, overthrowing a city of cultivators, deciphering who the murderer is, the domestic situation, eliminating domestic reactionaries, etc. It is quite complicated and enjoyable enough. The only problem may be that the protagonist's name is a bit off, and the layout is a bit strange and needs polishing. Generally speaking, the food is at the top and the grass is at the bottom. Come on, author. You will definitely be able to do it after you finish writing this book!

It was good in the beginning, but by the beginning of Chapter 430, only water was injected.

Please tell me if you have watched or followed the protagonist, does the protagonist need to wear a mask to hide his identity for a long time, and all his talents and cool points are only displayed on that false identity? The truth is concealed for a long time when he is close to the main heroine, and he feels that his true identity is a waste, and only likes his false identity? If so, I can move it off the bookshelf. It's not the author's problem, it's just a different taste. I personally don't like this routine.

I just started watching it, and I'd like to ask you how the Queen, the heroine, came out clean?

It's not even 10 million words long, so it won't be finished, but it's well written, and it's a cool harem story.

It's a novel with a pretty good setting. The world view and maps are okay. However, the author is obsessed with having a harem and is not focused on the plot at all, which is a pity.

I feel that the writing is good, and I hope that the author will not finish it. The other articles I read do not need these monthly votes, so I voted for it easily

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