Path to Longevity: Starting by Rescuing the Queen of the Women's Kingdom

The writing is pretty good, but the title needs to be changed.

I remember the author is part-time, right? Don't worry about the author starving to death. I have been following this book since the last one. I remember it was recommended in the daily guide. I'm an old bookworm, and I'm really afraid that the author will collapse and stop writing books. It's not easy for me to meet an author I like. I have almost 3000 hours of just ordering my mother. It is known that in some places the time is longer 😌. The current general environment is not good, and under the impact of various entertainments, there are fewer readers than before. Don't be discouraged. The only small peak of readers was during the period when everyone was still at home. At that time, Sanjiang's sales were at least 30,000, and some even 50,000. Now they can get up to 5,000. If an author wants to improve himself, he must first scan the rankings. He should be a general knowledge among the author group. If you sweep the list, I think. The new book list is the most valuable. The other two I personally don't think are important. The other two are generally old authors with a fan base, and there are too many influencing factors. The new book list is also dominated by new authors, especially lv1. They are usually reincarnations of dirty land, or reincarnations of demons from outside the territory. They have strength, and because of their new accounts, they really rank at the top based on strength and can learn from it. After that, I will read high-quality books and thousands of subscribed books to learn. After all, there will be so many people subscribing, so there must be something worth learning. The author tries to polish it in detail in the early stage of the book, with foreshadowing or explosive points, so that more people will stay. I remember that there was a book that was a hit in the early stage. The writing was so good that it sold 60,000 to 70,000 yuan before it was put on the shelves. It was roughly the story of the empress not letting common people be the top picks. It was very cliché. Although 😅 because I talked too fast at the beginning, I couldn't write down the rest, so it was too late to be put on the shelves. But it can be used as a reference. Let's talk about the shortcomings of the author of this book. In the early stage, he had a good level of food and grass. When the identity was exposed, he almost had grass jelly. But later on, he started to get frustrated. He wrote for the sake of writing. Especially the author, I understand you. I want to write a harem novel, especially a female character with many styles, so I wrote a lot of women in my last book. As a result, I felt that it was not a harem novel but a stallion novel. And women don't remember much later. As soon as you appear, you have to wonder who is this? Chase it all in one go. Maybe I can still remember it. But most of them are just after the update. There are too many female protagonists, so there are few plots. After two or three months of chasing, they will appear again. Who will remember them? I suggest that the author try to limit the number of female protagonists to 5 to 8, or 10 at most. Otherwise it's like collecting illustrated books. If there is a heroine with multiple ideas. I think I can try it. Put two plot characters into one person. It's a little fuller. The author can refer to my words, but what is more important is his own ideas. After all, there are many authors who easily listen to readers' corrections, causing the rhythm to be disrupted and the outline to be messed up, resulting in the end of the article Finally, I wish the author will write better and better👌🏻

I wonder if the author reads book reviews? The author can learn how to write light novels and create a good heroine with a plump character, so that people will pay for her. The general character set is that she is beautiful, strong and miserable, but the male protagonist saves her and still loves her. Although this setting is old-fashioned, it is easy to use. The male protagonist's character should be normal and in line with modern people's values. He doesn't have to be smart but he can't be stupid either.

It's the Foundation Building Pill again. Without this pill, you can't become an immortal. There is no need to learn these dross. These garbage settings should be eliminated long ago.

My results are a bit poor, and I'm a bit worried about whether I'll be a pigeon.

It's a trial, it's a bet, it's the last one that comes out completely, at least I want to write something different. 🙂

Liangcao, the protagonist Goldfinger has information and a map from his past life. I feel there are some problems with his character. I can analyze and discuss it carefully if I don't leave. There is no need to make a one-year appointment. I feel the protagonist is a bit too impulsive. No other problems

When writing this kind of book, you can learn more about the gravity of Mars. The plot of his book is old-fashioned, but I don't know why but I just feel like I can read it.

3/36. Food and grass. It can be seen that the author has learned a lot. But at the end of the third chapter, it was a bit sluggish.

It's okay, but it feels a little weird overall