Douluo Dalu: The System Arrived Only After I Was Ready to Leave Spirit Hall

Let's talk about the advantages first: the protagonist's setting and three-dimensional IQ are all online, and there is no routine where the brain of a newbie follows the lower body. The logic is strict, normal people's logic, objective and rational, and the plot is also attractive. Pretty good. Then there are disadvantages: there are too many early hydrology chapters that talk about academic theories, and it is easy to discourage many readers. Then there is the lexical description of the plot, which has the feeling of a Japanese campus romance light novel, but does not match the feeling of a fantasy novel (such as: um can be replaced with other modal particles or deleted directly). There is also the frivolity of the protagonist, which cannot be said to be unsteady. It was like I saw the author coming out of the toilet with a bowl of instant noodles, which made readers misunderstand. Purely a personal opinion.

The setting structure is so good that I can still watch it even if the pacing is crap.

Chapter 9 is even better. The protagonist spends the resources that can train people to the soul king level to train people whose martial souls have mutated and cannot practice to level 30 or above. But the protagonist himself is not yet the Soul King, and his talents are not stuck. He just doesn't know why he doesn't practice, and his resources are to be fed to others.

From Chapter 1 to the latest chapter, and all the way to the latest chapter, I have the feeling that it is fairy grass at the beginning, becomes food grass in the middle because it is too watery, and becomes fine grass after a little better. Generally speaking, it is quite good. The author would have used less water to make it perfect 😍😍😍😍

Why do you read fan fiction? It feels good. The author should look at what he has written. It is as smelly and long as a foot wrap. We are not here to see you output the settings. No matter how rubbish the original work is, you will not keep describing the settings. Do you know what we are here to see? After reading the first twenty chapters, I didn't find anything exciting. It just kept describing the settings, and the description of the system bonuses was also very strange. For those who don't play cards, they have no idea at all, and they don't even feel that this thing is very powerful. They have no idea that the so-called card players are enjoying themselves, there is no emotional line, and no common protagonist characters appear. Why don't you write original stories if you like supplementary settings so much? This level can't even be compared to studio writing. At least I know how to have fun. This book is hopeless. You can go to bed now.

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Basically there is no plot, it is all theory, psychological activities, and introduction.

What a mother-in-law, a disciple can win a few chapters, and a hunting soul ring can win a few more. And then there are also some so-called theories that the author fantasizes about. Wash this away quickly

I can't watch it since the first chapter. You, a loser from the beginning, live to be 35 years old and don't know how to get fairy grass. You don't know how to imitate Yu Xiaogang and pick up girls, so you are still ready to get soul bones. It's funny, isn't it? You are just like those six-year-olds who have the counterattack system and don't have a system. You are just a fw.

Others just add settings to the plot, but this is just a little bit of plot added to the settings, and almost nothing is advanced in the thirty or so chapters.