A Mortal's Cultivation Journey: Xiao Cha
凡人修仙之萧诧
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- Completed
- Length
- 706k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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What are you writing about? You don't want to give everything to Han Li. You are just like the original. Extremely speechless! ! !
What should I say? Don't give in too much. It's you who gives in all the time. You are playing the role of the old devil. I feel like you are too timid and explain too much.
Isn't this a dog-licking article? If you don't dare to do this or that, then you might as well just wipe your neck and forget about it. What's the point of traveling through time? 😅Watching the original novel is not as enjoyable as yours
Except that the little green bottle of cause and effect is too big, there are no other problems. You can take it, but don't give everything to Han Li! This makes the protagonist look stupid. Cultivation of immortality means having clear thoughts. You can do this or that. It is impossible to pass the inner demon barrier of transforming into a god.
How should I put it, is Xiao Zui who does not practice the demonic or ghost ways still Xiao Zui? It would be better to be reborn as another person without even starting the kill.
Han Li actually has no intention of getting the Void Heaven Cauldron. As long as you are tougher, Han Li will definitely give up. In the original work, Xiao Zui was playing with fire and burned himself, and Han Li's evil-fighting divine thunder was almost exhausted.
The main reason is that the protagonist doesn't have any golden fingers. He can just have a small golden finger. He doesn't necessarily always want to follow Han Li to make good relationship deals. I think the previous demon's oath is a bit too much. Even if it is given a time limit, for example, he will not be an enemy of Han Li for 500 years.
The author didn't use many tricks in the fight, and there was no need to write a lot of psychological descriptions. He just wrote a sentence about the divine master surnamed Zhong, who looked at him once, vomited blood, and then ran away. There was no need to write that long paragraph of psychological descriptions.
Fans need to have fun
Nowadays, readers are very picky, especially when it comes to your writing style of eunuch cultivation flow. Readers have no loyalty, and they will leave immediately if they don't like it.
No heroine, no harem? Guess why I look for fans to watch 😊