A Mortal's Cultivation Journey: Xiao Cha
凡人修仙之萧诧
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 706k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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What is this writing? You're giving everything to Han Li, and this is exactly the same as the original novel. Utterly speechless!!!
Well, to be honest, you shouldn't give in too much. You're always the one giving in; you're playing the role of the villain. You seem too cowardly, and you're making too many explanations.
Isn't this just a simp story? All this "I can't do this" and "I can't do that," you might as well just slit your own throat. What's the point of time travel? 😅 Reading the original novel is much more enjoyable than this.
Aside from the significant karma associated with the small green bottle, everything else is fine. You can take it; don't give everything to Han Li! That makes the protagonist look foolish. Cultivation requires clear thinking; this "giving and taking" won't get you past the inner demon barrier at the Nascent Soul stage.
Well, if Xiao Cha didn't cultivate the demonic and ghostly paths, would he still be Xiao Cha? He might as well have been reborn as a completely different person and killed him before the game even started.
Han Li didn't actually feel obligated to obtain the Void Heaven Cauldron; if you were too forceful, Han Li would definitely give up. In the original novel, Xiao Cha was playing with fire and got burned; Han Li's Evil-Repelling Divine Thunder was almost exhausted.
The main issue is that the protagonist doesn't have any special abilities; even a minor one would be fine. He doesn't necessarily have to constantly try to build a good relationship and make deals with Han Li. I felt that the previous oath made by his inner demons was a bit excessive. Even giving him a time limit would have been better, such as not being an enemy of Han Li for 500 years.
The author barely used any moves in the fight scene, resorting to a whole bunch of unnecessary internal monologues. A simple line about the Master Zhong's expression changing, spitting blood, and then running away would have been enough; there was no need for that long passage of internal monologue.
Fanfiction is so much fun!
Readers are very picky these days, especially with your kind of eunuch cultivation novel. Readers have no loyalty; if they're not happy with it, they'll leave immediately.
No female lead, no harem? Guess why I'm looking for fanfiction? 😊