Seeking Immortality Begins in a Blessed Land
从福地开始求长生
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- Ongoing
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- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
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- 1y ago
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Some novelists are just born to fail; they seem destined for failure. I initially thought your book's premise was quite original, and its performance shouldn't be this bad. But after reading the second chapter, I think I've found the reason. What should have been a simple introduction to the protagonist's background had to be complicated by unnecessary gimmicks.
After reading 50 chapters, the protagonist has a mid-stage Rank 8 Ghost General and three thousand immortal early-stage Rank 8 Ghost Soldiers under his command. Yet, a single sentence from a mid-stage Rank 8 commander sends the protagonist into a cold sweat, utterly terrified. All sorts of difficult, suicidal missions are given to the protagonist, who happily obeys without question. Has being a dog for so long made him stupid?
The first time they talked about how privately bestowing titles upon gods violated heavenly laws and was extremely dangerous, it was all ignored and dealt with by a small town. The second time, they said the Celestial Empire strictly forbids controlling people's hearts, and those who violate this rule will face severe consequences, but then it was ignored, and the matter was resolved at the prefecture and county level.
The writing is terrible. It's obvious the author has a very limited understanding of the organization, relying entirely on wishful thinking. Even a simple counter-example reveals numerous flaws. Take the scene where the water god is killed—it's a complete failure. Without any evidence, just based on the aura of a talisman, he's killed? That makes the water god seem incredibly weak.
He joins the army. But the protagonist keeps making stupid mistakes. What happened to his reflections on the ghost ship incident? He makes stupid mistakes during the war too. It's only because the author gave him a cheat code that he didn't die.
Why would someone with your identity want to transmigrate? You have a happy family and a fulfilling life; even the God's Space wouldn't want someone like you. 😦
Because of his clone, the protagonist had to protect the blessed land of the gods and therefore obey the imperial court. However, after the blessed land was saved and the army grew strong, the protagonist's main body went back to being a commoner. This doesn't seem like something a cultivator would do at all; it's like he's just asking for trouble.
It doesn't seem like the central government is in its final days.
Where did the prefect get the power and audacity to poison the prefectural commandant, and for the city god to kill the water god? Earlier, the text described a world with a profound and rigorous system, a grand and meticulously crafted worldview, and even a supernatural world and imperial court—and it contradicts itself so quickly.
Well, the larger the worldview, the more brilliant the cultivation civilization, the more you need to join a major power, otherwise you can't develop. If your channels aren't good enough, you'll be competing with so many major powers for resources within the universe.
The protagonist seems so stupid; he's unclear about important matters and keeps making mistakes with trivial ones. Why did they have to write it like this?