Disciples of the Sect

I read daily slow and hot articles. But I read it carefully, and I really can't grasp the key points. There are no details in the places that should be written in detail, and there are a lot of words for non-important content. It can be said to be wordy + hydrological. It is very difficult to write about daily life. You need to be able to observe more details and grasp the beautiful resonance points of daily life. However, I only see the description of life, which is suspended. It's very empty and has no real sense of flesh and blood.

The writing has a good perspective, the logic is clear, and the plot outline and settings are reasonable. It is a work that is more in line with normal people's logical thinking. The author will continue to work hard and don't write in vain or mindlessly. Bookworm will continue to support you!

It's been a long time since I've seen a Xiuxian novel that appeals to my taste, and I like the realistic perspective of ordinary people. I'm really tired of seeing the kind that only takes two months from being illiterate to having sex. It's particularly unreasonable. I like the author's setting, keep going.

The descriptions are delicate and the narrative is smooth, but if you write a female protagonist in a male channel, you are screening readers. It is also a slow-burn daily novel. I can only say that if you have the conditions and don't worry about eating, just stick to it. I feel that the writing is good, but it will definitely not be liked by the general public.

Thank you very much for your support during this period. I will answer all the questions you raised in the post. 1. Some readers have asked whether there will be plots such as male protagonists and Lily. Answer: There will be no love plot in the novel. There will be other male and female characters, but there is definitely no love line. There is no need to worry about this. 2. For a certain plot that some readers currently think is redundant. Answer: The author has other arrangements, but the timeline of the arrangement is longer, the update is slower, and it will take a longer time to see it. 3. Regarding the opinions raised by some readers on the choice of words, sentences, and detailed descriptions. Answer: If it is indeed the author who has not thought carefully, the author will usually modify the content that is easy to change on the same day. However, if the modification will involve the content of the entire chapter, the author needs to modify it carefully. In addition, newcomers have little experience in writing books, and it is difficult to ensure updates every day, so changes are relatively slow. After modification, a reply will be posted in the post. 4. Regarding the issue of additional updates. Answer: It's not that the author doesn't want to, it's just that he can't do it. The author has done his best to update four thousand words every day, and it is indeed impossible to add more updates at the moment. If there is an update in the future, I will let everyone know in advance. 5. About seeing someone in the post asking about male protagonists frequently posting about female protagonists. Answer: The author is a newbie writing a book. When he published the work directly at Qidian, he chose the wrong channel and posted it to a male channel. Later, he was selected by the editor to sign a contract. I personally felt that the book still had some development prospects, so no changes were made. 6. About whether I can finish writing this book. A: At present, the author's outline has designed the plot of the entire book. The author will do his best to ensure that the book is completed smoothly.

I don't understand how such a trivial matter can spread gossip and affect it for as long as a year and a half. Do immortal cultivators have so much time? You have to earn snacks every day, you have to do homework, you have to practice, and you still have the energy to do this? I don't understand the big sect. There are so many people with so many disputes and contradictions. It's not less than this trivial matter. If you don't have ten thousand in a month, you can do eight things, right? It's not normal for the effect to last more than 3 days. And the person named Chen is obviously used to it. There are not more than a hundred of the same bad things in a month, but there are dozens. Is it necessary to spend so much effort to spread rumors specifically for the heroine? I don't understand that the heroine's mind is so immature. The heroine is still a time-traveler, not aboriginal, not underage, not to mention as unfaithful as other time-travelers, but she is still in her 20s, has been in school, and has been in society for a few years. She has experienced some things, but they are just innocuous gossip. How can she be so fragile?

The author is really bald in describing this competition scene recently. He feels that his writing skills are limited and his imagination and knowledge are insufficient, so he wants to collect inspiration for the fighting scenes here. Whether it's special magic weapons, spells, special tactics or locations, etc., Everyone can share any ideas they have. The author will try his best to write the following plot. Finally, thank you very much for your support.

Hua Lingshi buys information, investigates who has inquired about him, and investigates who is the murderer. It is meaningful, but it is not very meaningful. Even if he knows, what will happen? If you don't have strength, you might as well keep a low profile, hide yourself, and keep a low profile. Weak strength is the most serious shortcoming now. Borrow a picture. ↓

Some recent chapters have given me some hints. . Chapter 166, a short half of the chapter introduces the beauty pill. The role of the beauty pill is useless in cultivation. It is just to keep the skin young, in order to make others think highly of oneself and gain a little advantage in interpersonal communication. As a male reader, I feel that the beauty pill is very useless, especially for a small person like the protagonist. Spending more spiritual stones on such a useless thing means losing one point in cultivation. Although the protagonist did not buy it, it is obvious that the protagonist is already moved. Immortal cultivators always respect their strength. I would like to say that readers expect the protagonist to grow from weak grass to tall and tall trees, rather than delicate flowers. It is extremely difficult for little people to get ahead, so if they focus on socializing and socializing, as well as on inquiring about information, it is a waste of time for little people. Tao Li doesn't say anything and makes his own mistakes. I hope the protagonist will not imitate Xiao Bao. . My impression when I first read this novel is that the protagonist is a powerless low-level person with no family background to back him up, no golden fingers, and average talent. He is a typical grassroots person. If you want to earn some spiritual stones, you need to plan carefully and work hard, accumulate bit by bit, gain bit by bit, gain through personal efforts, and occasionally get lucky (I obtained a lot of spiritual stones through fishing). Because every piece of spiritual stone is obtained through hard work, the joy brought by dedication and harvest is particularly valuable and cherished. This is my favorite part, allowing readers to deeply understand the efforts of the protagonist. There is also Chapter 152. The protagonist makes spiritual tea to entertain guests. Senior Sister Zhou just smelled it and didn't bother to take a sip. After Senior Sister Zhou left, the protagonist wanted to buy high-quality spiritual tea to entertain Senior Sister Zhou. (This is just a small detail that is inconspicuous, but I still want to mention it.) The protagonist is like a college student who goes from a backward and impoverished county to study in a big city, consuming things beyond his ability. So I think it's better to be natural. There is no need to deliberately cater to others. Just drink whatever tea is available. Senior Sister Zhou is optimistic about the protagonist just because she has the value of investment and utilization. If you don't have this value yourself, there is no point in entertaining her with the best things. There are many similar things. The protagonist has been very careful from the beginning, but unknowingly, he has become a little too casual in spending spiritual stones. Spending a large amount of spiritual stones to buy various information is obviously beyond the protagonist's status and financial ability. The protagonist is just an inconspicuous little person, and every piece of spiritual stone is hard-earned. I hope the protagonist can count every steel jumper in his pocket like Klein and live a careful life. I hope the author can use it as a reference.

The writing is okay. Although she is a female protagonist, she doesn't look annoying at all. She is no different from an ordinary nerd.

I think the author might as well reconsider the incident of the Chen family's feud. This incident is reasonable and unreasonable. The main audience for this book is that the author needs to be clear about it. Generally speaking, the people who read your book are adults, and many of them have been working for many years. Your contradiction is like high school bullying. Originally, this was nothing. This outer sect is similar to the environment of a vocational high school. It is normal for a villain to have a somewhat worrying IQ. However, the author went so far as to explain the psychological activities of the protagonist in a superfluous way, which made people look very funny. On the one hand, the protagonist makes it clear that this is the world of cultivation, where the jungle prevails, and he was careless before. On the other hand, he also emphasizes that he is a time traveler and has his own pride. How can I put it this way? An uncle like me who is nearly thirty years old cannot relate to this kind of psychological activity. Even when I was in high school, it was difficult for me to relate to it. Maybe the author wants to show that the protagonist is still a little girl, but the protagonist has been working for many years in his previous life. Author, please don't do this operation next time where the time traveler thinks he is destined to be his destiny. Please be humble and cautious. Also, I hope to arrange a plot next time where the protagonist outside the sect kills the villain. Although my plot is also very cliché, I want to say that this is the real law of the jungle in the world of cultivation.

Have you returned to the female channel? I went to the female channel and read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals. What was written well in the early stage basically fell apart in the later stage 🙂! Don't go back. Female videos have no future.

If the author had kept updating before, this book would have been ordered by at least a thousand people now, which would make others not confident enough to read it.

The protagonist doesn't seem to understand that things in the outside world are all about polishing her body and mind. She shouldn't indulge in the pain caused by the outside world, but how to make her body and mind harmonious and make progress.

It's just that the updates are too slow. The author is obviously a part-timer and is very talented in writing. Didn't he consider full-time work?

To be honest, articles about female protagonists and articles about women's shoes should be placed on female channels. After all, men and women have different thinking and ideologies. It's not okay to overstep the boundaries. After all, the male channel articles are already messy enough now 🙂

The key is that I don't think the heroine's IQ is very good, and she doesn't look very smart. Stop being ridiculous, go out and have a try, it's important to improve your strength. . Learn from what the Ming Dynasty said: think twice when serving as an official, think about danger, think about retreat, and think about change. With your current strength, you are not qualified to fight with others, so it is better to retreat. Shi Qiang's words about logic are classic. "One thing to note: if your city is really deep enough, you won't be able to show any city. It's different from what you see in movies. Really scheming people don't act like birds with a sullen face every day. They don't show any use of their brains at all. They all look easy-going and simple. Some people look tacky and tacky. People are careless and have no seriousness...The key is to make others not take you seriously, to make them look down on you and despise you, to think that you are not in the way and as dispensable as a broom in the corner. The highest level is to make them not notice you at all and just pretend that you don't exist. They don't realize it until the moment before they die in your hands. "

I came from the master road, and I have basically read the latest chapter. It feels good. It has a bit of a legend about ordinary people cultivating immortals. It has been considered a very good work in the past few years. I hope it can maintain the standard and not be a eunuch. It doesn't matter even if it is slower 🌹🌹🌹 Of course, I also give my suggestion, that is, the heroine wears After crossing over, except for telescopes, it is best not to buy any modern equipment. Unless you write a brainless and cool article later, otherwise it will be a bit nondescript. It is recommended that you focus on learning the master's path. From the heroine's dangerous encounters, slowly uncover the dark corner of the cruel cultivation world and gradually expand the world. The above suggestions are only for reference 😁

Is this the rhythm of a eunuch? I highly recommend a fairy tale novel: Asking the Immortal Way. It is fully recommended by a bookworm of more than 30 years! ! If it looks good, come back and give me a like 😌😌

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