From Carp to Great Dragon God

The rhythm is okay, and reading it gave me a feeling of being a blessed heavenly official. There is still a market for this kind of rhythm. There is no need to enter the traditional Xianxia fight and kill. Rhythm pattern.

He said that he wanted to break through to the ninth level. It was both about opening up a business path and also about opportunities. But in the end, he still failed to break through to the ninth level 😅. Breaking through to the ninth level is so difficult, how much harder will it be to follow up? He said that he wanted to be a swordsman, but his mind is not in tune every day. Doesn't a swordsman need to practice swordsmanship? The one who cultivates must be the fish demon fairy named "Jian" 🤔

First of all, the system is too vague. It always talks about the ninth level, but which ninth level is vague, and the introduction to past lives is also vague. Secondly, the world view is unclear. Is it a cosmological view of immortality and all realms, or a heavenly ascension view similar to that of Xianhu? Personally, I prefer the Xianhu cosmology because it can lead to the existence of other ancestors in the future, and the time concept of long-lived species is different from that of short-lived species, so it is not used as a backer. Also, if the follow-up is dragon transformation, the focus in the early stage should be on blood. Since it comes to returning to ancestors, it can be changed from fish to fish-dragon or other dragon veins. It always emphasizes the feeling of practicing law and is inconsistent with the title of the introduction.

It was fine at first, but later on it became more and more complicated. Isn't it tiring to practice so many things? There is no priority. And I also like to participate in big events. I don't understand how things that concern the world can be influenced by a person who has only taken three or four steps on the path of spiritual practice. It's not enough without you.

All I can say is that the protagonist is the protagonist. Before I graduated from kindergarten, I started worrying about the situation in the Middle East.

The world this book is written in starts from the Zhongqian World, and the pace is relatively slow. Everything mentioned in it about becoming an immortal refers to cultivating to the fifth level and living in a blessed state. It is also the standard for ascension in the ordinary world. As a traditional Xianxia, ​​the author bought a lot of Taoist scriptures to read, and there are photos in the Easter egg chapters. According to the way it is written in the book, it is read into it. At the same time, various chapter reviews said that the author read too many books and really wanted to teach us, and wrote too many different legal principles. I think this depends on personal taste. In various things, the plot of enlightenment through previous accumulation and reading books seems to me like research on a classic mathematical problem.         ，，，，，，，          ， After going through this incident, you can gain 500 million experience points and become a top player, which is not available here. The protagonist majors in swordsmanship, Tai Chi, and fine formations. These three items attract me the most. Although I was initially attracted by the dragon and sword, the formation is really good.          ，，，， There are other uses, but the biggest impression is this one. Other uses for paying students, calming the mind, etc. Are all side effects. Let's talk about it after reading it. I would say that the biggest difference between traditional Xianxia and others is that everything can be solved. There is nothing that cannot be solved based on the principles of the Dharma. It depends on how powerful your opponent is and whether you have the corresponding understanding or opportunity.         ， For example, the protagonist's family in the opening scene brings blessings to the marriage and celebrates its consummation. His mother's natal family gave birth to a child.         ，， If you get this seal, it will be difficult for you to improve your cultivation, or you will not be able to do important things in human relations. It will be disgusting to look at.         ，，'''' Finally, there are too few authors. I don't usually do Shennong, so I have to see how to gain popularity and motivate the authors. It's just the Deacon that was fully booked, which is really too little. If I don't write a traditional fairy tale with 3 million words, I usually won't start it.

1. It is difficult to practice swordsmanship with a carp species, and the gimmick of a carp transforming into a dragon is written in the same old style of swordsmanship 2. The character setting is too difficult and not likable at all. The protagonist is an indigenous reborn 🙂 + rebirth makes him feel good about himself. He talks down to his parents and above to his elders of the same race. Don't ask why I still pretend after receiving the benefits. If you ask, it is the power of rebirth. I will pay you back a hundred times in the future.

The setting of "Marriage with Happy Carp" is such a good one, why do you want to write about a bad swordsman who is incompatible with his own attributes?

The protagonist is like a second-rate, not like a practitioner, just a low-level loser, pretending to be a big boss who cares about everything about the family and the country, and cares about his own practice. According to the book, the protagonist's practice is passable, but when it is written, it feels like this. In fact, the protagonist is indeed not good. After you have given birth, you should seize, search for, and create opportunities to work hard to improve your practice. You can also do other things by the way. As for the protagonist, he plans to meet the standards in the final time specified in the blessed land and not be thrown out of the blessed land. His father is not forcing him. He is also planning to hang around again and break through at the last moment. This makes me see the home He is a naughty kid, not to mention how smart he is, but he is obviously pretty good, but he just doesn't study well. He writes like a first-grade student, but he is obviously already in the fourth grade. He should be sensible at this age. He has talked a lot about the truth and beaten it, but he can't make progress, leaving you helpless. I also follow He said that everyone should make the best use of their talents. You don't have to be better than others. I feel that your protagonist here is a naughty child, but he is a reborn person. This is more hateful than a naughty child. If you don't work hard to improve yourself, you have to rely on yourself for many things. With this as the main line, doing other things by the way is incidental.

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