In the Great Northwest, I Hold a City in My Hands

If you can't help it anymore, you have to complain about it. It's the kind of thing that you can't help but look at without thinking. That Oona suddenly appeared. When they first met, she almost stabbed the pig's feet. The pig's feet couldn't fuck her and she suddenly lived under the same roof. That person can kill you at any time. . . Even if they were coerced, when Wu Song and the others came later, they couldn't be driven away? How should I put it? The appearance of this Oona in the beginning was too awkward and the sense of separation was too strong. Every time I write about this Oona in the future, it gives people a sense of separation. The key is that she appears quite frequently. After reading Chapter 20 or 30, I really couldn't help it. The title of the book The material is fine and the writing is fine. I think most people were persuaded to quit because of Oona's appearance. She appeared without any foreshadowing. It was too abrupt. I dare say that if Oona had been well laid out before she appeared, the book would definitely be better than it is now.

It would be much better if Oona's plot was removed. Oona's character didn't feel like it played an effective role, and it felt like Oona's introduction was missing between Chapters 11 and 12. This person lived with the protagonist inexplicably, and there was no system to show why this person was a friendly unit. The lack of these parts will lead to confusion. Is the character Oona a fictional character or a real person? Why does it appear next to the protagonist? What role does she play? It is better to delete her.

It seems that the author's source of inspiration is my building an abandoned oil town into a new frontline and running a B&B: I received Wu Song at the beginning. It's a good idea, but the word count is a bit short. Read it slowly.

I rarely write book reviews. When I first read it, I felt very good. But after Oona appeared, I felt something was wrong. She was a stranger. I wanted to kiss you the first time we met, but I stayed the next day. She is now an uncle, and she is not your girlfriend. Not siblings. Why should he be the boss?

See Naona appear. I wanted to give up on the spot. It would be better for you to write a few animals than this woman. Is there a shortage of women? And I can't write about women well. Very disgusting. What a pity.

Using a generator for power supply is probably the biggest problem in my opinion. A 5kw generator consumes about 3 liters of oil per hour, which is 20 per hour. The load of three kilowatt-hours of electricity is enough to run an air conditioner and boil a kettle and other daily needs. Not to mention deafening, it is not an ordinary noise. If I use a generator on the first floor of my house, I can hear it clearly on the fifth floor. You just say that you are on the side of the road and it is originally a small town. If the people and transformers are removed, the electricity will not be removed. How can you apply for the installation of wires? If installing wires is not possible, you should also try photovoltaics. When I was raising chickens in 2018, I rented a place that someone else had used as a farmhouse. It had well water but no electricity. The steel structure has two floors, with a concrete foundation and brick walls on the first floor supported by steel structures. The second floor is a board house with 30 centimeters of insulation. People must turn on the air conditioner when they go in in summer, otherwise they won't be able to withstand it. Because it was a temporary construction without a license, there was no way to call. I had no choice but to make photovoltaics myself. I built a 4kw solar panel, which cost nearly 10,000 yuan including the installation fee. I used the battery of my old car to store electricity, which produced 21 kilowatt-hours of electricity. I bought a 5kw power frequency inverter for NT$3,000. In the summer, it can be used casually during the day, with more than three kilowatt hours of electricity an hour. It can be basically fully charged from 6 a. M. To 6 p. M. The two air conditioners in the chicken coop are constantly running, but it becomes a bit difficult to operate at night. The full power of the air conditioner is 960w, and it can be turned on from 8 o'clock to 6 a. M., Which lasts ten hours. In addition to the loss of conversion, 30% of the electricity must be reserved for emergencies. Sometimes it is too hot to sleep in the chicken coop and I dare not stop the air conditioner in the chicken coop. So if conditions permit, using a generator to generate electricity seems unreasonable to me.

... Author, please replace Oona with a male and think about it A man breaks into your house, hacks you to death with a knife, and then lets the protagonist forget it! He goes to great lengths and occupies your home, instructing you to cook and work for him to support him... If you don't do it, you'll beat them up...

It is said that there are three golden chapters. The author's three stars in the beginning directly poisoned me. Let's not talk about Wu Song's appearance in the beginning. Normal people would feel something is wrong. What kind of brain circuit does the protagonist have? Besides, resources are the most important in the desolate place in the northwest. Is the protagonist just going to eat and drink for free? Isn't this a matter of being stingy? You don't even know each other, so you don't have any precautions about strangers, so you come up so directly and enthusiastically? Sorry, I can't relate to this kind of character setting at all! Can you feel like a normal person? There are really not many people who are so sunny, honest, hospitable and generous.

Without Ona, you would be read three times more

"Running a B&B, receiving Wu Song at the beginning" Author, your book is exactly the same as this one 😃