In Panlong, When Heaven and Earth Were First Formed

The author hopes you won't invite criticism. If the protagonist finds Vivia and doesn't kill her, you deserve to be criticized. If he finds her and then lets her break through to the Great Perfection realm—that's disgusting—even I can't stand it. I'll definitely criticize you once and then drop the book. The most disgusting part of the plot is when the enemy breaks through at the last minute.

Panlong only mentions fate briefly at the very end. And you've turned that into fatalism.

The author underestimated the power of the Great Perfection Will and overestimated the power of some special life forms. The power of will is unique to those who have reached the Great Perfection and the Supreme God. No matter how powerful other beings are, as long as they are not Supreme Gods or have reached the Great Perfection, they do not possess the power of will and are not on the same level.

It's a pity. I feel the author was a bit conservative in writing it. With so many main gods, how come the protagonist never encounters even one? Especially those first life forms born in those planes, and why haven't they started fighting for the main godhood yet? The four mythical beasts weren't dealt with early enough, which makes it feel like the author didn't capture their invincible aura.

I've always wanted to read about the early days of Panlong, but it seems like not many people have written about it...

Author, you're something else! The protagonist directly offends three rulers of the rules. If the protagonist can't suppress them after seizing the main godhood, he's just asking for trouble. To be truly secure, one must at least become the ruler of the fire element, and also acquire a Destiny Godhood and a Water Godhood.

Here, he's still at the Great Perfection level, invincible, while the neighboring gods have already seized the main godhood and are now playing dumb to outwit their opponents.

Fate? I find it strange that we have to keep emphasizing fate.

After all this buildup, if we can't kill even one of them, we'll really have to give up.

The author has completely disappeared from the story; if I want to read about Lin Lei, I'd rather read Tomato's original novel.