Panlong: Rising to Power as the Wind Sovereign
盘龙，从成为风系主宰开始崛起
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 706k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- English
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205Chapters
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40.9kFans
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I don't understand what the author was thinking.
Chapters ten through twenty are almost entirely about the Four Divine Beasts families. While I understand you wanted to write about the fall of the Wind-type Overlord, it's still too far-fetched. The protagonist is barely visible in those ten chapters.
Having a child with a main god is a good idea, but I don't recommend it to Zijing for three reasons. First, Zijing would be carrying a son and a family, making her a burden and a cuckold, which is really a bit ridiculous. Second, Zijing is in league with the Four Divine Beasts, and the original work mentioned that they have a good relationship.
Is it even possible for the protagonist to wipe out the Four Divine Beasts clans? That's truly disgusting.
What were they thinking? For over ten chapters, the main character hasn't appeared at all. The fanfiction is ten times more padded than the original. Have they really let themselves go?
The beginning was okay, but it got boring afterwards.
What have I been writing these past few days?
I'd suggest the Four Divine Beasts should just die.
It feels unnecessary to keep having the Four Divine Beasts jumping around just to pad the word count. They are the protagonist's enemies, and now the protagonist is facing the Lord of Destruction. The Four Divine Beasts are still giving the Lord of Destruction his life essence, and constantly strengthening the Lord of Destruction is really boring.
Dear author, I'll say it again: a mere messenger of a supreme god won't risk their life for you unless the protagonist offers something in return, such as a supreme godhead or strengthening his body to the level of a supreme artifact, which should be enough to get a Great Perfection cultivator to take action.
340,000 Words, only 20 comments. The more I write, the worse my performance gets... I suggest restarting it. If you absolutely have to stick with Panlong fanfiction, then you could introduce some variables; otherwise, the single-world formula is really tiresome and hard to keep going.
I hope the story doesn't include a plot where the protagonist intentionally tries to kill the Four Divine Beasts, since, causally speaking, the protagonist owes them a favor. Even if the Four Divine Beasts are later killed, I hope the protagonist will still protect their families.