I Was Destined to Become a Saint in My Previous Life

So well written! New book list! What rubbish is on the signing list! This book should be the number one among Xianxia!

It's so beautiful. I've found a treasure. I highly recommend it!

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The title of the fantasy book, the plot of martial arts, and the description of romance.

Like the title, the emotional line is disgusting and a bit self-indulgent. I can't stand it anymore

I think the author's literary youth is a bit green. He has always wanted to write about the situation in the world where fate cannot be controlled by fate and is trapped by love. He just wants to press the characters in it to death, damn it. This author has a good review from a book friend, with a fantasy background, martial arts descriptions, and a female-driven plot.

No, what's going on? Either there is no heroine, or there is a heroine. Regardless of this entanglement, the TV series is not as bloody as your acting. It's not that the author's writing is not good, but it is just too speechless. Things can be explained clearly in a few words, or else you should completely stop thinking about it. There is nothing like this.

The reason why this book is not popular is finally found. It's this setting. How did a male video in a female video become so popular? It just has a BE ending. The mother and father are not here. Write a female protagonist, and you have to have words engraved on your face and chest. Can you still have feelings after the engraving? Could it be that this woman is looking for physical abuse, and in the end she wants to kill the whole family. The problem is that this man's father is from this family. This is really an incest. The elders of the sect know the identities of both parties, and they still want to do it. Is there something wrong with this elder of the sect's head? A good best friend knows the identity of the other person, but she just can't open her mouth 😰. This is a really amazing point. If you want to write a book for a living, the protagonist must be as miserable as possible. If you say emo, be emo, but if you force emo, it will reduce your intelligence.

The writing is indeed online, but the rhythm is not well controlled. When others are eating, the appetizers are served first and then the main meal. The author only cares about his own happiness and serves the whole meal at once. The first life is indeed very exciting, so how can you write later to make readers feel amazing? If what you write later is simpler than what you wrote before, it will make people feel boring. After having a big meal before, will you still be amazed by the side dishes? If you want to write the later part more difficult than the earlier part, then you have to use more space and more descriptions to fill it in. The later chapters will look bloated, and then they will be as smelly and long as an old woman's foot wrap. It can be seen from the author's previous stories that the author has many ideas, but cannot grasp the rhythm well. He wants to write out every point and everything. The result of writing in this way is that the whole article seems to have many wonderful points, but the actual key points are not expressed, and the main context is not well developed. Writing an article is a process of give-and-take. You have to give up some things for the sake of the whole. Only by arranging the overall rhythm can the subsequent story develop slowly. For example, in the first life, according to the normal rhythm, the early BOSS could have ended at the location of the first calamity. If the description of the first BOSS was so awesome, how should the subsequent ones be written? Did the author really have a good idea? It is a good thing to have ideas. The author can at least write something very good, but if you want to write all the ideas directly, it will directly disrupt the structure and composition of the entire book. I really like the author's writing style and stories, so I wrote this review. This is what I see from the perspective of a reader. I hope it can be helpful to the author. Of course, if the author thinks that I am nitpicking and deliberately blackmailing you, then just pretend that I have never written this thing.

The writing has been messy since the beginning of Sanjue Demon Ancestor, especially the latest one. Nmd is such a bloody classic Korean drama plot, amnesia + mutual engagement but admitting their mistakes, please don't use such a classic Korean drama plot, okay?

All kinds of self-pleasure, I thought everyone would like it, I saw a review from a book friend, the fantasy background, the description of martial arts, and the plot of the female channel. I feel like we should add a little bit of self-entertainment settings and the idea of ​​retro literary youth. You said that you rose from the beginning to the end and fell off a cliff. I think this is inevitable.

This book was recommended by a friend. I didn't write much at that time. I read it just after the first copy. I felt quite amazing. Although the talent setting was a bit confusing, the first copy was very spiritual, not cliché, and very artistic. Duck Kill was very good. I thought it might not be a fairy tale. The results of the book at that time were also very good. For a newcomer to the book, it was really a start for Tianhu. (I have only written the second book, and I feel like I am still a newcomer) , but when I saw the second dungeon, I felt something was wrong. I had a confused feeling, a bit incomprehensible, a bit not smooth enough, in short, it was wrong. After the second dungeon, I became even more confused after the second dungeon, with inexplicable pressure, inexplicable emotional drama, inexplicable pretense, and why do you have to apply everything in the dungeon to reality? A dungeon is a dungeon. Isn't it better to treat it as just the protagonist's personal experience and attempt? The dungeon affects reality without any benefit. Coupled with all the other inexplicable things, I really suddenly lost the desire to read further. I can only say that Tianhu's game was ruined by yourself. Can you first understand the basic logic of writing a book? The first copy is quite spiritual. Are you lost in it and can't find the direction?

It's a pity that the front is considered to be fairy grass, but the back is too literary and youthful, and the author can't control it.

The writing is online, the plot is not good, and the characters are distinct. I really don't understand what is there to criticize? A bunch of people who have been in Qidian for less than a year and so-called "ten years" bookworms but junior users are criticizing this book. Are their words really credible? Before reading the comments, everyone should first check who posted the comments. Most trainee comments suggest that everyone click on his profile picture to go in and then read the comments he posted.

Hello author, I have copied this book on other platforms and the feedback from readers is very good. I hope you will update it as soon as possible and don't keep my readers waiting. I advise you not to be ignorant.

The starting point is the same as many books, and as I write, it becomes a middle school student's concave shape.

I was somewhat persuaded to quit the He Bo chapter. The problem of overpowering the protagonist was too obvious. I was somewhat disappointed after raising him for a few months.

The title and introduction of the book are quite satisfactory, but the content is really good. As the author said in the chapter review, he wanted to write in the direction of a martial arts allegory. In my opinion, he has really found the direction. The fisherman line really has that flavor. The plot of the previous life is too attractive, which makes the current plot a bit weak. So if possible, I suggest you change the title of the book. The introduction is okay and quite satisfactory, but the title is really a bit confusing.

This first dungeon is so long and the boss is so difficult to beat. Is Chen Guzhou really the best? I believe you even if you say he is a true immortal. In this second realm, you can't hold the sun and moon and pick up the stars. 😥 Then I couldn't beat him two times and three times. It took a lot of effort to beat him four times. Chen Guzhou can still explode into a small universe, and the protagonist has to sacrifice himself to defeat it. This is a miserable victory. Chen Guzhou has been injured for thirty years and has not recovered Ah, I am just scratching my head in worry. I really can't take in the courage you mentioned. I know he is the protagonist and I know he has a hook. This is an online novel. The protagonist must be successful. After all, if he fails, the author will be "popular". So I really can't take in the "courage". Hypocrisy!

I have only watched the Duck Killing chapter now. I really feel that it is a masterpiece. It gave me the feeling of being knifed when I watched Dragon Tribe. If I maintain this level in the future, I feel that I can really become a god.

It has been a month and a half since I first discovered this book in early August. In the first 200 chapters or so of the plot, I was a little confused. The reincarnation chart was too complicated, including fate fragments, complete fate, fragment synthesis, fate romance... It took me more than a hundred chapters to fully understand what it was all about. From now on, it feels better and better (and I'm starting to feel better). Recently, I get up in the morning and read one chapter, wait for the update on time in the afternoon, and read the second chapter that was just updated that day while eating. So far, the biggest disappointment is the death of Yang Tianrui's parents and uncle. I still can't let it go. Even though the family was almost wiped out for the protagonist's sake, after his death, his weight in the protagonist's heart feels worse than killing him. The magician of countless people... The relationship between the male and female protagonists is really uncomfortable to watch😭. They have been entangled for life, but they are strangers again and again. Speaking of Mikami-sensei (bushi), can they make it in the end? Don't just give me a haircut and no candy. The male protagonist is constantly wandering between the past life and the present life, experiencing tragedy again and again. If there is no one to rely on at the end, it will be too painful for him. Mang King Kong, who is equally skilled in swords and swords, also has Gu Xiaosang.

Not brothers. Is this broken? Too cheap?

Someone recommended another book by Sanjiang but I didn't finish it, so I ordered this one. I didn't expect it to be really awesome! Come on, author! PS: I have been catching up on the latest for several hours at a stretch, but as a result, you, the author, have stopped here? ? ? Tickle! ! ! It's so prickly! ! !

Has it been sent?

In fact, I think it is really well written and the author also has his own ideas. However, I feel that the author has too few real-world scenes. It would be better if there were more. Or try to develop the main line. This cheat can try to use less side lines.

I subscribed using another account. This account also has a monthly pass. Here it is for you.

Leader, you know 🙂

This guy's writing was a bit depressing and despairing, and a bit less exciting. I remember seeing the Kappa being there, and I gave up after feeling a little uncomfortable.

I'll give you the monthly pass. Can you give me a little more? I read it all in one day. It's too little. 🙂

Now you can thank me🙂