Beginning with the Ouroboros Monument to Be Extraordinary

It has the energy to get away from Miwu, and the meticulousness of the writing, but if the setting is too high, the subsequent data is too inhuman, and there is no sense of immersion. Big muscles and added points are always interesting, and it is one of the more exciting posts in the past two years. The more oil, the more writing.

A good novel. Maybe I will never forget you.

I see that everyone's comments have been very irritable recently. I wonder if I've been reading for too long and eaten everything, so I don't feel anything. I feel like it's actually not as bad as everyone says. I feel that the main problem is that the author doesn't update as much. If the author updates three times a day, everyone will be dissatisfied with their desires now. If the author updates five times a day, everyone will start to enjoy it. If the author updates seven times a day, people will start to praise the author's virtue. Personally, I quite like the author's writing style. It tastes as comfortable as when I read Mystery. It has the same indescribable feeling as the recent book on the occult system. It's very good. So to sum up, what prevents the author from getting better is your own laziness 😎. I hope there will be more updates while maintaining the level.

After the protagonist breaks through and becomes stronger, a strong enemy comes and kills the protagonist within a few chapters. The protagonist either escapes or is rescued. This is still the case after becoming a secret warrior. The routine is too repetitive and the excitement is not enough, so you cannot defeat a strong enemy once. If you want to be satisfied, you can be satisfied until the end. Now you can't get better or worse.

There are shadows of old friends everywhere. Of course, this is a compliment. Most people can't even learn from it.

How to say it? I read the first chapter three times before I understood it, especially in the second half, the description technique was unclear.

The protagonist eats all kinds of messy food, improves various attributes and martial arts, but still feels like he's still on the roadside. I always encounter enemies at a higher level. If it were not for the halo of the protagonist, I would have been kicked to death long ago.

It's tasteless to eat, and it's a pity to throw it away. This is my evaluation of this book. A lot of content feels like it was written out of imagination. There is no such person after the protagonist's sister and mother. It took almost twenty chapters for a secret warrior to become a fighter. After becoming a fighter, I thought I could follow the master to play the harp with the Li family. As a result, the leader of the Nangong Sect died on the eve of the protagonist's promotion to a fighter. I can't see anything exciting about this.

Neither Go Away nor Bear Wolf Dog would write about the protagonist being chased like a dog. You are smarter than them.

Finally, someone finally wrote about the feeling of that mysterious journey.          ！ Then the protagonist has a will like a [red whale] that covers the sea and a [whale that swallows the world]!

I haven't seen it feel better, especially in the past week. The BOSS appears too early. Isn't it easy for Tieqin Zhenren to kill the protagonist? In order to protect the protagonist, he was forced to say that there were rules and he could not be killed. Oh😑, the master can be killed, the senior sister can also die, but the protagonist cannot die. Beginning to lose consciousness.

It's a lie. The author said before that the follow-up plot will be exciting, but in the end, the master died (maybe not completely dead), the senior sister died, and the senior brother was forced to leave. It seems to be a refreshing story, but in fact it is frustrating.

666 Took the Millennium Spiritual Ginseng + Golden Heart and it was self-defeating. What kind of JB plot, with so many co-writers turning Master Zhang into a clown, right? The author is treating me like a monkey. If the master is disabled or dead and there is a way to resurrect him, it is better than having the Thousand-Year Spirit Ginseng to survive for a few days and then the protagonist self-defeating and killing the master in advance. Treat readers like clowns, right?😡

Being decisive in killing and having a bond are two different things, right? Now that I've written about it, I can slowly fade it out and just mention it as a background board from time to time. It feels very literary if I have to write about people around me being written to death or being oppressed and escaping. This is also the first time I've seen a story where if you want the protagonist to kill decisively, you have to make everyone betray you. And there are few chapters written about the place where the senior sister defected, and the character design is not clear. The character is not full of character, and the relationship between the protagonist and the senior sister is not written. When the master defected, he didn't rush to find out the inside story. The protagonist went crazy like a neurotic, and the character design that was established in the past suddenly collapsed. It almost makes me burst.

It's not fun enough. I'm so depressed all the time. It's amazing 😒

Tsk, what do these two pictures of yours today mean? Why do you want two and a half to kill someone? You need to stabilize your position now, don't be so mean, just crush them domineeringly. The more nonsense you say, the more inappropriate it is. You actually paid back two shots at this point. I'm really convinced. If you abuse the third level like a dog, and you're evenly matched with the fourth level and you're still suppressing me, then I really don't know what you can do in the future.

It's good to watch, and I really enjoyed watching the arrogant protagonist. When you have strength, you should show your strength openly and openly, instead of just pretending to be a pig all day long. The story develops smoothly without deliberately slowing down the pace (I miss the past "Go away"). This is a Yakuza-style novel worth following.

It feels good, and it should be regarded as food. The reality of this book is that I have seen fewer logical errors in the Yakuza style. However, I feel that the rhythm is a bit problematic. Except for the dungeon at the beginning, it is always realistic at other times. It depends on personal preference. There is nothing else.

What kind of novel is this? It's all words. I don't want to read it.

The emotional scenes are too lame, and the heroine who has no sense of presence is forced to write emotional scenes, which feels too casual and childish.

First write about how awesome your master is, and then he dies. . . . . Emmi, what is the use of your plug-in? . . The system can't do anything to save lives. . . .

What are you writing about? The recent plot has been really messy. I feel like I should get over this plot. It's so annoying 😅

The mystery of the underworld is very good, the character creation and the protagonist's psychological journey are also very good, but the various foreshadowing and sub-plots are too stupid. I can't remember it unless I look carefully. I'm kidding you. Sometimes I can't remember it even if I look carefully. I can feel that a big climax is brewing, but I still hope that there will be fewer sub-plots, so that Lin Ye can become stronger quickly, and then eat, eat, and be invincible.

Your training speed is too bad, your hegemony is not fast enough and not enough

I feel like it needs to be deleted from my bookshelf, these three chapters are a piece of shit. Water word count? Just bad money?

There is no need to continue writing. The more I write, the more I draw.

I seriously suspect that the author failed in mathematics. He has only a few potential points. He can add 0.1 To attributes but only 0.03-0.05 To add martial arts, which is 2-3 times less efficient. You said adding the main martial arts to improve the realm is just fine. However, it turns out that the attribute is not enough. Instead of directly adding attributes, he also adds branch martial arts that are two or three times less efficient. Which teacher taught such wasteful attribute mathematics? 😥

The front part is quite interesting, but the back part is like a different person. The previous reality and the copy are very well intertwined. I will write whatever comes to my mind in the back part, it's so lonely to watch.

It's a bit confusing, you can tell what's going on below by looking at the title and the front 😅

The plot feels incoherent and a bit awkward to watch.