I Can Enter the Previous Lives of Sentient Beings

This idea of ​​entering other people's past lives is more suitable for the layout flow. It can be used as a separate book to write a book. It is a very good idea. The part about the son-in-law is almost the same as that in the book about not being a son-in-law. There are too many references and it is superfluous. When I read Chapter 40, I felt that the storyline was off-kilter. It would be better to dig deeper and enrich the plot of entering other people's past lives, write it into a copy, use myths and legends as the blueprint, and write your own story. From the memory copy, you can obtain training resources, skills, opportunities, and clues to treasures, or get guidance from treasures. So far, all the key descriptions have been skipped, and the main plot of the protagonist's real world has also been written down. It is not easy for newcomers, so keep up the good work.

With such a miserable start, did the protagonist manage to destroy the Yang Mansion in the end?

The classification is worthy of being a classical fairy tale, and the advancement of the storyline and the design of the characters have a full sense of the times.

Things to watch are not advanced. The subject matter is good, and the writing style is also good, both are better than mine. However, the main attraction of this past life theme is the past life. In this past life, except for the theme of Jia Baoyu in Dream of Red Mansions, which I remember, the subsequent themes are not very popular. I feel that after Jia Baoyu, we can add Legend of White Snake or Three Kingdoms Zhao Zilong, which are more popular. You probably want to write the plot of The Legend of White Snake in the middle period, but there are still many subjects. It would feel too slow to push them all back. But it is the starting point after all, and the slow-heat type is also the mainstream. After the initial novelty, I no longer have much interest. It feels good to be able to write new ideas in a past life theme that is too common. Come on, I will become a great master soon.

Personally, I think it's better not to make the dungeon too long. The main reason is that the original purpose is to watch people pretending to be pigs and eating tigers or pretending to be cool. In real life, when the climax is about to come, suddenly such a long dungeon seems like it's gone 🙄

Brother, let me give you some advice. Do you know why the last few plots have been said to be deceptive? Because you have been writing and writing without giving any corresponding foreshadowing. As a result, when you write directly later, it is like a deus ex machina.

Is this what Jiang Jiang has on his world-weary face?

Come on, author, if you can write the current idea well, maintain the current level in the mid-term, and be able to stabilize in the later stage. If you can't become a god, you can still become a king, hahaha Don't collapse So everyone should read more, don't keep books, come to the starting point I've read several new books but they all sucked me up. Alas, some of the books were clearly well written in the early stages, but the data were poor when readers kept reading. Then the author couldn't make a small living and had no motivation. The quality of the plot got worse and worse. In the end, it was either a eunuch or a bad book.

The article is quite nice and attractive, but I still have some suggestions It's too much, it's a bit too hard, the characters in the book are too pure, as colorless as white paper It seems attractive at first glance, but if all the characters in the book are like this, it makes people feel uncomfortable An unreal feeling Everyone goes to extremes, but there is no distinctiveness, and it even feels a little morbid Well, of course if the author writes this is a passionate middle school article, then there is nothing wrong with it. After all, the world of middle school is very... Pure. It looks really cool

I don't know after reading Chapter 28, but the current protagonist is an arrogant man who opens a dyeing workshop if given some paint. He is better than him and kills him directly. He is stronger than him but will put on airs when being polite to him. In fact, he will give up after two slaps. The character of the protagonist is too divided, just like a mud-legged young master.

Watching steadily, staring blankly. How much the author likes this kind of thing, I find it awkward anyway.

This good-for-nothing was cast aside by the Yangshen. He was despised by the whole family, but he had a caring mother. His mother had a story, and it was not the head wife who was being persecuted.

To be honest, the early and middle stages of this book are quite attractive and can really leave an impression, but when it comes to Fengshen... It's a bit confusing. It feels like it was written by another person. It's okay to be sensational, but let's not make it so frustrating 😥. I didn't subscribe to all of them. I started to subscribe from Fengshen. I can only say that the author should work hard.

After reading the previous chapters, the topic selection was very good, but I was dissuaded from reading this early article about the servant abusing the master. Earlier you said that the protagonist brought shame to the Yang Mansion, but now the protagonist can enter and exit the manor, and is still being bullied by the servants. As long as the protagonist tells the outside world that the servants of the Yang Mansion bully the master, won't the Yang Mansion lose more people than if they break the engagement? If you are not taken seriously, you can be bullied by your direct descendants, not by your subordinates.

Please don't copy poetry. If you can't write it, don't write poetry. Write about battles, political strategies, emperors, and daily life. Read this book, and review old Tang poetry, Song lyrics, and Yuan music, Qinyuan Chunxue, I'm speechless.

I just read that the main character's wife was so miserable at the beginning. If the revenge in the later part is gone, I will start complaining every day. Otherwise, I'm sorry for what you wrote before😓

The plot design is quite good, and there are some highlights, but I really can't stand the descriptions of emotional dramas. If you want to have a harem, just do it. You have to write plots that are both serious and established. In the last chapter, she told Jiang Jiang that she was the only one in this life. A few chapters later, she developed a super friendship with Han Xiang. She said nicely and stuck to the bottom line. She persisted despite Han Xiang's teasing, but later she took the initiative to tease her. While saying that you can't be sorry for Jiang Jiang, while doing things that are sorry for her, you have figured out the cheating trick. Especially when Han Xiang and Han Xiang were flirting at the Styx Water Palace later, they found the chapter that Jiang Jiang had found. It was written as if he had been caught raping, and he also dealt with the crime scene and burned the bedding directly. I don't understand. Does the author have special thoughts on affairs like cheating? He has to write it like this. The good emotional description is full of immorality. I wanted to write about Shura Field, but ended up writing about the scene where I was caught having an affair and was raped. It's really yours.

Don't forcibly give me intelligence. I would like to advise the author to revise it while there is not much written at the beginning. You just write that the male protagonist is a "bad guy" with a high IQ, who has seen through everything and plans to get close to the gun king for profit. He occasionally brushes up his favorability points and even uses the CPU to add help to the world. He also deliberately pretends to be stupid in front of Jiang Jiang to reduce suspicion and secretly take advantage. It's much better than this dumbass, I just don't know anything, the truth is in front of you, and I can't understand it. It's too discouraging. No one really watches this kind of intellectual subjugation school now. Let the male protagonist be smart. He can pretend deliberately, but he can't really not understand. There is no need to be so angry. He is irritable with every sentence, including those who are kind to him. Nowadays, it is more popular to go behind the scenes, which is to say that he is calm on the surface but secretly makes trouble behind the scenes The subject matter is quite good. I really hope that it can be written well. Don't waste your inspiration. I hope the author can think about it.

The idea is great, but some of the plot looks a bit embarrassing

I think there were more than 1,000 and nearly 2,000 comments back then. Although most of them were criticizing the author, it is a pity that there are only about 500 comments now. The author will also close his eyes and immerse himself in his own world.

After reading it, I feel that the content is completely inconsistent with the title of the book. It is just a reference book or a traditional text without any trace of sentient beings.

It feels like the world is too small, and reincarnations are all so concentrated! The plot framework is somewhat familiar! The last few chapters have seemed a bit exaggerated!

Ho ho ho, let me post some comments, it seems super cool and exciting so far, don't let the protagonist be too frustrated, let him develop freely as soon as possible hahaha

By the way, why are there only so many book reviews, and most of them are indeed praiseworthy. I remember that the author used to criticize me a lot? Has the author deleted the post again? You have to be the author. If you don't listen to your reasoning, he will scold you. If you can't scold you, then you will be silenced. If you laugh to death, just rely on the silence to protect your arrogant vanity.

Aunt Hanxiang, animation

Can Shuangwen stop making those plots that are both literary and pretentious?

Please give the author a follow-up reading. If you like it, I suggest you click on the last page of the latest chapter every day. Is it easy to keep up with the new book?

It fell apart a bit in the later stages, so I started watching it after Shan Hai Ji. I always felt that the reason why the Emperor of Heaven destroyed the world was a bit funny.

For a child you don't know and a fish, you fight with others, you are the Holy Mother.

It is unreasonable that in a world where past lives can be awakened, there would be a problem of historical loss.