Eat Out a Taiyi Daojun

Only by eating people can you become a master.

I feel that the character of the protagonist is really hypocritical. I just told different people in the previous chapters that I don't like to put down my butcher knife and become a Buddha immediately because I don't like to hide dirt. How many lives has the eldest daughter of the Yu family killed? Confiscating property, changing her surname, and still holding an official position? The so-called punishment is just confiscation of the previous illegal gains? What about those that have been used? Shouldn't compensation be paid? What about the sins that have been caused? This crime should not be punished? Just because the person she harmed is dead and no one wants to seek justice?

It looks okay, why do you add a calamity setting? It gives people a very bad impression. Why does the protagonist start to have something chasing him away from the beginning? You can be sure that everyone is seeing something driving the protagonist away, rather than the protagonist walking on his own. That is very interesting.

Okay, it looks surprisingly good. I feel like the introduction needs to be changed. This kind of introduction is terrible.

After reading Chapter 28, Uncle Hui was visited by the steward. . . There are a lot of comments saying it looks good, but I really don't feel it myself. In the beginning, the protagonist encounters a conflict too early, and, what can I say, he puts the statue back even though he knows it's not a good thing! He really looks like Yi Xiaochuan! Virgin bitch

Goldfinger's omniscience shouldn't be buried like this. He is biting a glutton, and even the protagonist's name is a homophone, so why don't you just set the plug-in to be a glutton? The omniscience of all things can obviously write flowers, pick sesame seeds and throw watermelons!

After reading more than 30 chapters, I have no idea what the eldest lady of a small gang is pretending to be. The mission house is considered a big force, and all the big guys inside don't have surveillance cameras on and are watching everywhere. You're just a little kid, are you messing around with surveillance cameras? The key is that she seemed to have the overall situation in hand throughout the whole process, and she was so concerned about the protagonist. I was really speechless looking at it.

The maid made a joke, and then the lady pressured Manager Li, and then released the hijack, and then the protagonist was resented by the maid, so he had to become a bait, and his life was in danger. The maid and the lady still watched the show. The protagonist would be dissatisfied with being threatened with after-sales service, but he did not hold a grudge against it, which is incomprehensible

The idea is quite good, and the characters are okay, but the author's level may indeed be a bit inferior. The plot is too stiff, even mechanical, and the protagonist is actually threatened? This is a big taboo. Even if his parents are arrested, he will not obey. A threatened person will lose π_π. The most important plot is completely unreasonable. You know that your neighbor is a fugitive murderer, but you don't report it, don't solve it, and act as if nothing happened. In the end, your parents are killed, and you start to regret yourself. This is the author's plot. . . . . All I can say is that the author really wants to write seriously, but his writing skills are barely interesting and he still needs practice.

There are too many inner activities in each chapter, all kinds of explanations and annotations; it's so tiring to read! ! !

After reading more than 30 chapters, there is really too much nonsense. They are all descriptions from my heart. I can't hold on anymore. But the setting is very novel and the subject matter is good. It's a pity that the writing is so poor.

There is a saying that if it is too fast, it is a stubborn body, just a Taotie concept. The problem is that just eating a little food can directly fill up the missing parts of the whole body. Do you think it's a lot of child's play? At least eat a few more times, regardless of the blockage of the body's muscles and veins. If you can replenish your body, it will not be a stubborn body. Just like farming on a rocky land, you only water it once and plant it, completely ignoring the rocks in the field. Anyway, it feels like a drama. There are too many bugs.

The introduction is like adding some flow. In fact, the content is not that kind. It is the kind of practicing the immortal way. Cultivation of the mind is very important. The content is also long and official. It is not about killing and killing. But since we want to create this kind of protagonist, the Shahe Gang and the porter where he came from should no longer have the kind of manager who cares about human life, because the protagonist is a very righteous character. As a result, he has helped countless people, but he has not helped his own origin. Is this considered forgetting his roots? Then why does such a protagonist say that he is "doing good"? It's just an "archway".

I don't like the protagonist's performance very much, especially since he went to the capital

By the way, didn't the eldest lady keep peeking? I can't do this to earn a favor. If I still die, I won't watch it.

This setting of calamity energy is said to be obtained from the water ghost, but that chapter doesn't mention a word at all, and the outline of the imperial court is so awesome, with martial arts, witchcraft, Taoism and Confucianism. Shi Youdu belongs to Buwu Tianxia, and what is taught in the Taoist academy is Taoist knowledge. If you are not capable enough, don't set the outline so grandly, write too hastily, and there is a lot of nonsense. If you have nothing to do, just do a lot of science popularization. They are all reading novels. You can just explain it briefly. It's a long and lengthy Shuiwen. Who needs you to do such detailed science popularization in Xianxia novels? I might as well just study Taoism by myself.

This Uncle Hui is too annoying and pays too much attention to the original owner. He is easily discovered! It's better to find a way to kill him!

The Immortal Dynasty, the harem fights, boss, don't drag the secular dynasty into the Immortal Dynasty! The more I look at it, the more awkward it becomes!

There are too many things in my heart. Is it true to write down what is in my heart?

What the hell are you writing about? The protagonist is an awesome golden finger. Will he be able to develop a golden finger? He has to join a sect and be forced to do tasks. In the real world, if your golden finger is exposed, see if the higher-ups of the sect will touch you.

Come on (please improve)