Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Casual Cultivation

Support, it's so well written

Refugees from shanty towns practice immortality. It's all rubbish. Rubbish

It looks good, but isn't it a little too trivial? I can understand that this should be the style of the book, but everything has to be measured. Is the level of the protagonist's thoughts a bit too high? And isn't the description of the protagonist's inner activities a bit too confusing? It's not that the writing must be serious or anything like that. It's just that one second I was talking about Feng Xu Yufeng, and the next second Internet terms suddenly popped up. When I read it, I felt a little emotionally disconnected.

Nowadays, it is rare to write talismans as natal talismans. In the past, there were many talismans with one talisman and ten thousand talismans.

The author tells the truth, if it hadn't been for the previous plot of cultivating immortals in a shanty town, your book wouldn't have had such a small achievement. To be honest, the previous paragraph was too discouraging. I didn't have a book to read at the time, so I saw you practicing Qi. After you practiced Qi, you wrote the plot of cultivating immortals normally. The writing is quite charming, but you added a section of shantytown in front of it, which is really a bit jarring. Not everyone has the patience. I deleted your book several times in the past, and then because Qidian kept pushing it, I finished reading your free chapters and started subscribing. It is recommended that you change the previous part if you can. If you really can't change it, just remind the readers in front of the book. It's really a bit embarrassing to tell the truth.

I flipped through it a little, and the first part was okay. But in the second part, I guess the author wanted to open a harem for the protagonist, but it turned out to be a gift story, which in vain brought the book down a lot. Hey, if you don't know how to write, don't write. It ruined a good book.

You should run away from the shanty town as soon as possible. Since it is dangerous, it is normal to save money to practice and then change the environment. Going outside to do martial arts is a bit invincible.

So far it's all good, no poisonous points, the author has done research and put his mind into it. Skills, methods, tools, and Tao form a system of their own and are integrated into one, with essence, energy, and spirit as the foundation, which is the right way.

Shui, there are a lot of descriptions and psychological activities, and if you can't write about feelings, don't write about it like a clam girl. It's because he likes you, but you don't like him. Why are you so entangled? You leave it there and give her things, and you give her exercises and you don't know how to reply to her feelings and friendships. You don't like the friendship, and you act like you owe him, and you are nosy and asking for trouble.

I'm speechless. After all this time, I still stick to Novice Village, and my skills are still based on Taiyin. If the protagonist's skills are not up to par, how can the protagonist develop Wanfa? The skills and content are not up to par? There are no other places under the Yinshan sect, right? There is no other area outside Yinshan. The world view of this world is only the protagonist's novice village. Only newcomers to the village can have the opportunity.

The author should name this chapter the most difficult to tolerate the grace of a beautiful woman, and it is the kind of grace from a beauty that I have only known for a few days. I started to hate the character of the protagonist. I don't refuse or accept, and I enjoy it with peace of mind. It can be seen from the woman who is sinking into something, leaning on the chest of the protagonist for no reason, and the protagonist just enjoys it silently. Then I met another clam spirit. In just a few days, this clam fell inexplicably in love with the protagonist. The protagonist was entangled, sighing, and melancholy. I wrote several chapters at a time. Finally, he gave the most precious thing to the protagonist. The protagonist did not refuse. If you don't write about women or have sex with women, and no readers will criticize you, is it necessary? Originally, I wanted to delete the book directly, but after reading so much before, I really liked this book. Originally, there weren't many good books written by me, so after thinking about it, I decided to scold the author before deleting the book.

If you talk less, the results of this book will be several times better

The protagonist has a very deep background. Why should he create a heretic golden elixir (fake elixir)? Wouldn't it be better to directly combine the golden elixir? I can't think of the meaning of forming an external elixir for the sake of water words?

The plot and skills of Luo Libasuo

There are a lot of unnecessary words and inner dramas that are written as if they are free. One or two sentences are enough, but there are too many, which greatly affects the viewing experience.

The training system is a bit messy, and the division of skills and strength is even messier.

The writing is pretty good, and the ones related to talismans from the same period are pretty good.

I feel that there are too many narrations and less dialogue between characters. The writing style and prose are okay. I just read the third chapter and read the comments section. This is supposed to be about classical cultivation of immortality and is more popular science. It is okay and worth reading 🙂

A clear stream in the system flow has the appearance of becoming a god. Looks good, come on

There is nothing you can do about novels about shantytowns. Either the protagonist is suppressed, or he is suddenly coveted, or he has a bunch of life-and-death enemies, or he is indecisive, or killing high-level people is like chopping melons and vegetables, or inexplicably a woman falls in love with the protagonist... This This kind of situation basically does not happen in this book. The characters and stories are step-by-step, the combat power is very balanced, the characters are well described, the protagonist's IQ is online, he clearly knows what he needs at what time, and he does not aim too high. He writes a little about Shintoism and combines it with immortality very well. The disadvantage is that some sudden chapters will slow down the pace. I skipped through the chapters about the mortal world.

Tsk tsk. After reading the first chapter, I don't want to read anymore. I think of the ethereal journey cultivation novels back then. It was so gorgeous that it was like an AI wonderland. It crossed the galaxy portal at every turn. Nowadays, the outer city of a small immortal cultivation base looks like an Indian slum. The outer city can't compare with the buildings of the Mingyue and Tang Dynasties in the Qin Dynasty, but it can at least compare with the buildings of the Song Dynasty. Not to mention the Fairy Tower of Qionglou and Yuyu, there is also a large manor with carved railings and painted buildings, which is not higher than the main building.

What do you think? There are so many Shinto contents mixed in with the book about cultivating immortals. Otherwise, why don't you open another book dedicated to Shinto?

The whole story is told in a smooth way, without being too clever or deliberate. It is reserved when it is necessary to be patient, and it is high-profile when it is necessary to be high-profile. Although some plots are a bit vulgar. But overall, it is considered to be the best among the same type. Especially in some realms, I personally like the magic settings. I have read Chapter 190 so far. It's just that there are too few updates for a day. If you want to be popular, you have to increase the amount. How can book friends support you if you don't update?

Is this refined enough?

The environment and plot all highlight the cruel world of immortality, but they also create the image of the protagonist of the Soft-legged Shrimp.

Modern souls can only study the essence of these laws, and do not engage in any mysterious and mysterious things. They find a mortal country and rely on the wisdom of all living beings to decipher the basic theories and slowly build the foundation of the information age. If extraordinary power guides mortal wisdom, industry will only be faster. Without extraordinary guidance, human beings will go to heaven and earth in hundreds of years.

The writing is like a spirit, and the writing is completed in one go and eloquently. The author has profound writing skills

It's only eight hundred years old, which I feel should be the basic life span. If you deepen your merits, you can increase your life span. If you perfect the golden elixir, you can live for thousands of years. With other life-extending means, you can live for up to ten thousand years. Anyway, there is no lifespan limit for the soul in the next realm. You can give more points to the previous realms, so that there are more old monsters with the end of lifespan, the conflicts will be more intense, and the plot will have more room to expand.

Draw talisman every day and have some ambition, okay?

The writing is okay, quality is not a problem. I said