Taking Qi and Nourishing One's Nature, One Can Become an Immortal from the Time When He Was a Boy Copying Scriptures.

Looks good + promising ~ I also have some suggestions. The author's writing style is still very good, and he is very literary in many places. It is not a mindless novel. I believe that this is part of the reason why many people like this book. In addition, I think the author can practice writing more battle scenes. After all, I always skip it and leave it unfinished. The battle is also a very important part.

This way of writing cannot be called refining Qi soil. To put it bluntly, it is a carrot and a pit for cultivating the immortal position. If the front is broken, it will be difficult to make up for it later. A real Qi refiner should cultivate the five elements to sense yin and yang, rather than exerting a so-called single path to the extreme.

In my personal opinion, apart from being a little bit toxic at the beginning and easily dismissed, it was okay later on. In fact, the author can change the first few chapters while the plot is not yet in-depth.

Some basic Tao is the Tao that already exists between heaven and earth. What you cultivate is the Tao between heaven and earth. According to your statement, the Tao in this world is developed by these enlightened Taoists. It is nonsense to say that if the person who enlightened the Tao of this Tao dies, this Tao will be incomplete. First of all, is this Tao the acquired Tao due to this enlightenment? Even if it is, if this person has achieved Tao. , Heaven and earth will also record and enrich the world. If this person dies, can he destroy the Tao that was added to the world after heaven and earth recorded it? According to the way it is written in the book, how did these enlightened Taoists practice before they achieved the Tao? There were no Taoists in front of them. Heaven and earth did not produce the spiritual materials related to this Tao, and there were not even incomplete Tao. Because these Tao have not yet had a Taoist, then there is no way to practice.

In the place where the three sects gathered, everyone pretended to be awesome, but in the end they were fooled by Qi Lian. You said that if you eat people and cultivate immortality, you can just raise fish together and wait for the harvest. But in the end, the two foundation building sects really opened their eyes and were fooled. Le, what is the difference between this and the big Qi Lian?

The setting is complicated and there is no real integration. The training system alone is laborious to watch. The plot is mediocre and the character of the protagonist is mediocre. It is a mediocre novel.

One of my latest novels tells the story of the protagonist who has created a Taoist system in the inner world, which is also divided into twenty-eight constellations and nine levels of Qi. Then I saw your book

With such a big cheat, there is nothing to be obsessed with just drinking water.

The purpose of this novel sect is to embarrass its disciples instead of cultivating them. Except for the protagonist and important supporting characters, it is a dead end.

The introduction is like Gou Cheng, and the beginning of the plot is also pretentious. But after a fusion, I chose "Dao Zheng" and turned it into a battle. Is it cool?

To be honest, the beginning is a bit classic, with the classic senior sister who is sharp, lazy, and greedy, and the master who does not care about women and prioritizes boys. To be honest, there is such a person, no wonder he is not good at it. When he needs the master to lead him in the door the most, he is ignored by others and left to the senior sister. Even though he knows that the senior sister will not take care of him. If the protagonist hadn't been in trouble, who would have been responsible for how much time was wasted and the detours were made?

The master who doesn't care about anything, the senior sister who plays tricks on the protagonist, and the disciples of the big sect who say it's safe but are intercepted and killed in the core area of ​​​​their influence. They have to go to the black market to buy and sell goods. It's hard to hold back.

Why is it on the recommendation list again? Sell it. This is

Why do you need so many resources in the early stage? The proportion of wealth in the Dharma Wealth Couple's land is also too large. It's a bit outrageous to think that it would take several months to practice the first level of qi without taking medicine. According to this situation, the forces in the world of cultivation should not exist in the form of sects.

Why do people who write about swordplay in Qidian like to write about wood, or water, or 5 spiritual roots? Isn't Jinlinggen bad? Sword cultivators who are not majoring in Golden Spiritual Roots would be disgusting to look at.

Food, food, food, good books, good books

The plot of "Blessed Land" is so poorly written, it's much more boring than before it was released.

Is it too big a problem? You can master it by copying the book once (without even practicing)? What's the difference between this and mastering it after watching it once?

The plot is so classic, you can guess what happens next, it's boring😑

The competition within the twenty-eight constellations cannot be said to be big or small. Just hearing the name makes me feel that this thing is incomplete. There is only one sentence left, thirty-six heavens?

When I see this kind of sick person, I feel that they need to be taught seal script, need scientific rituals, need to set up an altar to chant sutras, and need complicated and redundant exercises.

Why are the orthodoxies of these Zifu Golden Pills all very similar these days, and aren't there any original ones?

It feels okay, why don't there seem to be many people 🙂

Oh, by the way, that old turtle doesn't seem to be an entity, right? It seems to be attached to Lu Chen?

Can this kind of sect really survive in this world? Even if a few strong ones come up to raise the gu, the ones below will have to run away as soon as they are beaten. After running away, the top ones are still not the bare commander.

Can the author please stop adding your AI pictures in unimportant places?

Isn't it the same with seeking magic? One of the magic quests is the lamp sequence. Every district. At each level, some are occupied and some are not occupied, but you don't know whether this position is occupied before you board? This is quite tricky when you log in. Only then can you know this position, which means that it's all a matter of deceiving you. If there is someone there, you won't be able to climb up. If you get it right, you can go up to the next level, and then you will continue to be deceived on the next step.

A fellow Taoist politely borrowed the building and recommended a new book, "Mystical Powers Begin by Gathering Beasts and Regulating Birds"

Daily settlement, start cultivating immortality from a handyman

The plot progresses well 😁