Pirate Sequence: Starting as an Outlaw

The writing is okay, and it seems that the author has some experience. But judging from the novels I've read for more than 10 years, there are still some shortcomings, and I guess it won't last long. 1. The image of the protagonist is actually not very full. It feels that the soul is not very full, and the image of the follower is not full. The actions of the protagonist lack overall goals, such as dominating the ocean, being the master of the world, being free in the world, and being unscrupulous. There are no very outstanding points in the character, such as the entry "pure man", which is a very exciting point, but from the protagonist's behavior and psychology, there is no outstanding description of a pure man, which is a pity. There are also pure men and pirates, which is full of potential. 2. The description of the fight is what I think interferes with my reading rhythm the most. I feel that the author's description of the fight scene is relatively hasty and blank. The previous description is quite good, but when it comes to the fight scene, the rhythm and richness suddenly become less and a little uncomfortable. For the fight scene, you can refer to a new book I have recently followed, "I Can Only Become the Pirate King". The description of the battle in this book is relatively good. 3. The protagonist is too smooth, not in terms of combat, but in terms of plot. The items and rewards obtained from the previous event are just indispensable for passing the next event, and they are just right. The plot can be guessed, and it feels like a running account, which is boring. The author can actually set up a final boss. These events of the protagonist in the early stages are actually the boss behind the scenes setting up suspense, digging pits, and creating conflicts to achieve his own goals. The plot will not be so boring, just like "mysterious". That's all for now, come on, author, keep an eye on you.

Not bad, not bad, except that the shotgun can't shoot shotguns! ! !

It's well written and very appealing. The follow-up is stable and the book is a masterpiece. But I was really tired after watching it in one go. There were fights throughout the whole process. You can take appropriate branch lines to buffer the rhythm, cultivate a relationship with Carter, go to a brothel, etc. After all, this is Graves.

The protagonist is a man who pays money to work in a factory and learn skills.

Fake men, real men can bend and stretch, men can't

This pure man is not pure enough. The pure man at the beginning is pure enough only when he is defeated by both sides.

I've seen Chapter 100. Where's the boat? Even if the loyal Captain Jack Sparrow doesn't have his Black Pearl, he still needs a sampan of his own.

When this book first came on the shelves, I thought about it for two days. I randomly threw it into a group and stayed there. Today when I was flipping through the groups, I saw it and I immediately died 😭

Overall, your writing is quite good. I am definitely an author who has surpassed the starting point of 60. If I work harder, I can produce excellent products.

The price of the bullets becomes more and more unreasonable. One bullet costs 250 or 1,000 gold coins, but the actual effect is only several times better than bullets that cost dozens of gold coins. (Especially the one with 1,000 gold coins. The setting is simply speechless. The damage is 60% more than that of 250 gold coins, but the price is four times more expensive. The protagonist is quite happy) The effect of the 250 gold coin bullet is not even as good as his own. He rushed up and punched twice, but in the end he kept using bullets. I keep saying that there are not enough gold coins, so I shoot two 250 gold coin bullets in the next fight.