Pirate Sequence: Starting as an Outlaw

It's not badly written; the author seems to have some experience. But based on my experience reading novels for over 10 years, there are still some flaws, and I doubt it will last long. 1. The main character's character isn't very well-developed; he doesn't seem to have much of a soul, and his character isn't as well-developed as the sidekick.

Thank goodness, thank goodness, except that the shotgun can't fire shotgun pellets!!!

Well written, very much to my liking. Keep it up, and you'll have a masterpiece. But reading it all in one go was a bit tiring, as it was all fighting. It would be nice to have some side stories to ease the pace, let the characters develop a relationship with Carter, or maybe visit a brothel. After all, this is Graves.

The protagonist is someone who pays money to work in a factory and learn a skill.

A fake man is not a real man; a true man can bend and stretch, a real man doesn't.

This "pure man" isn't pure enough; a pure man who initially drops both resistances is truly pure enough.

I've read up to chapter 100, where's the ship? Even if the loyal Captain Jack Sparrow doesn't have his Black Pearl, he could at least have one of his own small boats!

I'm speechless. When this book first came out, I was thinking of letting it sit for a couple of days before reading it, so I just casually put it in a group. But when I was browsing through groups today, I saw it and it had completely died. 😭

Overall, your writing is quite good, definitely surpassing the top 60 authors on Qidian.com. With a little more effort, you can produce masterpieces.

The price of bullets is increasingly unreasonable: 250 gold coins each, 1000 gold coins each, yet their actual effect is only a few times greater than those bullets that cost one gold coin and cost dozens. (Especially the 1000 gold coin bullets; the pricing is simply absurd.