The Secret Courtyard of the Dandelion Troupe

I haven't seen this novel title for a long, long time. It's been about 10 years. Ever since Shocking Advertisement came out, I haven't seen such a casual and refreshing name for a long time.

It was a masterpiece in the early stage, so I went straight to the subscription chapter and bought it all in one go. However, in the middle stage, there were private goods, self-admiration and poisonous points that should have been mentioned in one go. As a result, the author insisted on occupying a long space. The main plot progressed slowly, and I really couldn't stand it here. In fact, the writing and ideas are very good. If you refine it, you will be a master. The supporting characters are also there, but it is acceptable if there are not many. Overall, I can accept it. Anyway, I bought it all, as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage.

My recent writings have the style of a ninth lady. She supports the women around her to find wild men. She is about to have sex. When will the abuse be arranged?

Even though this title was in the introduction, I clicked on it right away.

Halfway through the movie, I was thinking, except for the protagonist's cousin, why do these women dance in front of the protagonist and keep their hands out at every turn? He threatens you at every turn, but the protagonist still gets used to it?

There are problems with the recent chapters. Why does Tricia dare to covet the fragments? Why hasn't the wandering witch reacted to her dancing face? Why was Tricia not punished when a stranger dared to ask someone to steal something? There is no punishment for adventurers hitting adventurers. A bunch of witches are robbing things and putting combat units next to them. Why call the police? I don't come to Akaishi to spend money.

Taking so many chapters to write about something that is easy to kill is just a waste of time and it looks awkward.

I suggest the author delete the second to last paragraph of the introduction. I think more people will read it.

Advantages: The plot is coherent, the logic is smooth, the content is rich, and the ideas are clear Disadvantages: repetitive and verbose, likes to preach (I saw some book friends say it is mixed with private information), random settings, boring later Evaluation: Worth reading

Hey, I've stuffed a lot of private stuff in the last few pictures, so let's keep it up first.