Copying the Heavens Begins with Tianlong

The main character kills Xu Fengnian and his father well. When I watched Xu Zhongzhong, I felt that these two people were evil in terms of our values. It is no longer enough to describe them. Some people traveled through time and licked dogs and nannies. Everyone I saw was rejected. The author's writing must be upheld.

Immortal jade color

Unparalleled elegance

It feels a bit cliche. Isn't it a bit too old-fashioned to go into the world of martial arts and say that you are a master of martial arts? I thought that since 12 13, there have been very few novels like this. And it is obvious that the talents of small animals are even more awesome. I copied a cockroach and flying bugs. Don't many other insects also have awesome abilities? For another example, a falcon can clearly see a rabbit on the ground at an altitude of more than 2,000 meters. There are these martial arts that are not replicated but copied, as well as the protagonist's luck. Confused. Even if you want to clone people, the three protagonists in Tian Long Ba Bu are Xu Zhu Duan Yu and Qiao Feng. Why not copy Qiao Feng, who has the most awesome talent and combat power?

When dealing with female characters, he talks softly, but when it comes to male characters, he demands money. It's too irritating.

..., The latest plot is a female-channel romance novel, or a sadomasochism story of Three Lives Three Worlds. Author, your ability to screen readers is a bit ruthless, I admire you 😜

I don't quite understand, why do you want money for pig's feet? It's not like he can't afford to eat. He can make money just by robbing the rich and giving to the poor, right? The force value is so high, it feels like I don't want to complete the task even if I am given one. 😰 can copy so many things, I am already invincible at the beginning, and I am already in the extreme blood realm. Do I still need martial arts? A strength of hundreds of thousands of kilograms

Fengyun must copy the four divine beasts, Lin (fire unicorn), phoenix (Emperor Shitian), turtle (three smiles), and dragon (shenlong). Wu Wudi, Wuming, Juewushen, Xiongba and others can choose whether to copy or not depending on the situation. There is no need for the two protagonists. If you want to do it, you can copy the dragon vein, which is the spine of the Yellow Emperor.

After reading a few chapters, I felt at first that the protagonist was a fun person, but later he kept asking for money. Isn't this just disgusting?

After reading Chapter 10, I felt that the joke was too much. Maybe the author thought it was fun when he wrote it, but you feel so disconnected like this. Think more about whether it is normal and in line with the protagonist's perspective, and also think about whether it is comfortable from the perspective of the person who is treated like this by the protagonist. It is interesting to pay more for everything once, but it is boring to read all the time. The most important thing is that it is not a krypton gold system. To the protagonist, money is no different from the wasteland. Like the protagonist, With Kakuzu's ability, he is invincible to Superman. He is not a fun person, a hero, nor a villain brought about by the fourth natural disaster. He follows the plot every day to make things difficult. I can only say that objectively speaking, this protagonist is really unlikable, with average positive qualities and bad side. Like, I obviously want to play, but I only know one way of playing, which is to add money at every turn, which is extremely boring. Why not let go of my mind and ignore the advantages of the plot, help whoever I want, and fuck whoever I want. Isn't the main theme of the story invincible and hearty and clear love and hate? No one can be condescending to the protagonist anymore. The protagonist can act recklessly to influence these plot characters, to display his own abilities and the charm of modern people's normal outlook, so that these plot characters, whether good or bad, will be influenced by the protagonist, thereby achieving a new ending that is different from the original work due to their personalities. But So loneliness can be hope, regret, or even a sudden awakening, so that the characters in the plot themselves have distinctive behavioral characteristics and become more obvious and exciting, instead of following the plot or even being pushed by the plot, and then occasionally jumping out to play two bad jokes. If they play well, the protagonist will be abstract and fragmented.

The most annoying thing about many fan novels nowadays is that they still follow the original plot for a long time. If I want to watch the plot, I have already finished reading the original version, so I don't have the time to listen to you babbling nonsense.

To be honest, it's just average. It doesn't write anything new, and there are so many jokes that it's annoying to read them all. The most important thing is that the male protagonist is desperate for money. It's not that everyone is bothered by the desperate need for money, but they don't know why the male protagonist is asking for money? There are no flowers in sight, so everyone will find it baffling.

Starting from Devour, what are the dungeons that I chose? You wrote that Hydrogen Douluo Continent is better than Bing Feng. The movie you picked is really hard to describe.

The Mummy Devours the Starry Sky and even the current Changyue Jingming... It can only be said that the author is good at selecting readers The martial arts profile was good at the beginning, and it will not change when I directly go to Tianzi Shenbing Port to write for manga. As a result, the ones I choose now are either bad or too cold... I have doubts about the author's mental state now. I can only say that your grades have been getting worse recently? I did it myself...

It's so stupid for the protagonist to take the opportunity to copy martial arts! Can martial arts and racial talents be learned? !

The novel world is really going from bad to worse. We have witnessed the beginning of online novels and the decline of novels. Capital is really not a good thing. Bad money drives out good money. When will novels regain their glory? What can I say about this novel? It's still okay today. I don't understand most of the truth, I just rely on my feelings. I hope you won't criticize me for this.

I stopped reading the nanny article, there is no fun to read, the only article about Zhu Tian Le Zi is still the Dream Master.

The martial arts world is very well written, but how come it suddenly collapsed when the storm hit, and the combat power stretched straight? The world in the snow can also be written in more detail, silently torturing Xu Fengnian or other forces to unfold the world background one by one

They planned to help Duan Zhengchun unify the world, but in order to keep him in a stable position, they also gave him his achievements in discovering potatoes, sweet potatoes, corn, and curing smallpox. It was very strange.

Graceful

I seem to understand why the more I watch it, the more wrong it becomes. It's no longer fun. It's just like the current Dragon Ball. It crushes and controls Vegeta at the beginning. It's just a plot. It's just like a routine. The same is true for DC. I don't see any fun, and it's gone. . .

The jokes come casually, which is very good. But some are too frivolous. The protagonist is already on the chaotic side.

Your main problem is that your combat power increases too quickly. On the one hand, your protagonist's ability to copy is inherently buggy, and you don't have to worry about not being able to become stronger. On the other hand, your teleportation is too easy. Writing a novel is not just about your enjoyment. You need to have a plot, not just to mention combat power. That kind of combat power means that there is a BOSS to fight, and you don't have it. Your protagonist can still run away if he can't defeat it. The most important thing is that it is too easy to travel through time, and the tasks are not difficult. You can't stay in a world for two days before it is over. There is no goal in the rush, and the whole plot is very empty. The daily updates are about what abilities the protagonist has copied. The characters in those worlds have become AI, and there is no room for description at all. Including his wife, they are all left to gather dust in the collection room. From time to time, you need to set a hurdle to improve your combat power, just like a speed bump. It can't be too high, otherwise it will overturn, and it can't be too flat, otherwise there will be no deceleration effect. In the end, your combat power will be like riding a bicycle without brakes rushing down from the top of the mountain. It will inevitably collapse. This book is already very difficult to save. You absorb the experience and correct it in the next book.

I heard that someone wanted to watch Mrs. Wang, but couldn't find it in high definition

Will the reward after three characters be too strong? [Real encyclopedia: concept prop, an encyclopedia with a hard-covered appearance, which can record plants, insects, animals, food, land, rivers and other items; the pages can suck in the things they come into contact with, and automatically generate an introduction to new entries. If the things included are living entities, they can retain life and memory, and can move within their own pictures. Characteristics, indestructible, can be included in the system space at any time.

The author needs to be more imaginative and open-minded. I am not afraid that you will go crazy, but I am afraid that you will not be completely crazy.

When will the update be released? It's too good for your appetite

After the storm, I feel like I don't need to watch anymore, it's such a mess

The early stage was very good, but the clone chapter felt like it was written by someone else. It was just a mess💩!

6  Fortunately, I haven't seen it since the clone time traveled.